高考书面 表达专题
铜仁市民族中学 英语组杨显
写作基本步骤： 1. 仔细审题，列举大纲。 ２．围绕要点，写出句子。 ３．添加过渡，确保连贯。 ４．先求正确，再求灵活。 ５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。
(2010 全国Ⅱ) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示 希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告 诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：
8、定语从句错误 The two boys are reading are my brothers.
The book I bought it is lost. I’ll never forget the days when we spent in the village together.
9、连词出错 Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others.
第3段：
However, the others are strongly against it. Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...
结论：
第4段：
Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.
Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should.... Our opinions are divided on this topic.
正文：第2段：
Most of the students are in favour of it. Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...
书写工整、字数要够、
1、汉语式思维
See the film will took me much time.
He happened an accident yesterday. 2、谓语缺失
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3、There be 句型出错 There are five students play basketball on the playground.
1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日 英国等
2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）
仔细审题、确定要点 3．工作量： —每周12学时，任选三门课 —担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor） 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信写出来。
6、非谓语动词出错 Being seriously ill, his class-mates sent him to hospital. Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball.
7、分数与百分数作主语 In our class, 20% sthdents are girls,but three fifths students are boys.
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.①Our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.
My suggestion is we try for a second time. 10、形容词、副词混用
The patient appeared nervously when he talked to the doctor.
②If you’d like to come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 periods a week. ③The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. ④Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor for our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.
⑤Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other decisions.
Best,
Li hua
表达正确、行文连贯
观点对比类文章
1. 引出话题 2. 一方的观点 3. 另一方的观点 4. 你的观点
导入： 第1段：
There are some workers are working in the field.
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4、谓语动词用法出错 He dressed in a new coat. 5、词性混用 She enjoys study English. If anyone against the plan, please let me know.
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. ________________________________________________________
Best, Li hua
Dear Peter,