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• Autumn is a good season for picnic. It is easy for people to choose a fine day for an outing because the weather is always nice， neither too hot nor too cold. The scenery is beautiful，too. The red leaves covering the mountains， the wild flowers booming in the fields and colorful fruits hanging on the trees are all pleasant to look at.
2.段落的连贯性
• 一个段落除了内容统一, 意思完整之外, 句 与句之间还必须按一个清晰, 合乎逻辑的顺 序安排内容, 转折自然,结构紧凑.
• 例 一 ： (1)To develop tourism has advantages. Tourism helps develop a nation’s commerce and contribute to one nation’s economy. Tourism provides jobs for many people and helps us solve or ease the social problem of unemployment. Tourism helps increase understanding between peoples and helps people learn about different cultures of the world. • 无连接词语，是一堆简单句的组合，读起来 枯燥单调。
终结段的过渡词语
• To sum up, • As for me, concerned, • To conclude, • As a result, • To be frank, I think… • For this (very) reason, • With respect to … • From this point of view, • All in all, In summary, • In short, • On the whole,
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English is favored on the following grounds. It is
the official language of a number of countries. Of other countries, it is their second language. In still others, English is spoken as their major foreign language. That’s why English is so
因果关系过渡词
• • • • • • • because, as, since, for, owing to, because of, due to, on account of, as a result of, for the reason, result from, thus, so, hence, therefore, accordingly, consequently, for this reason, on that account, as a consequence, it follows that…, result in, contribute to…
• 3. 结尾句 结尾句是用一句话对段落的主题进行重述, 评论,或总结,借以强化主题,加深读者的印象 . E.g. Smoking is harmful to people’s health. Medical science has now proved that smoking can cause lung cancer and other diseases. Your chances of having a heart attack also increase. Smoking is definitely a health hazard.
As far as I am
句子之间的转接承启词语
• • • • • • • • • • 结论归纳过渡词 generally, speaking generally, as a general rule, in general, in a sense, on a larger scale, at a local level, to take the idea further, in a way, to some extent, in my view, practically speaking, in terms of, in some respects, all in all, in a word, on the whole,
• (2) To develop tourism has many advantages. In the first place, tourism helps develop a nation’s commerce and contribute to one nation’s economy. In the second place, tourism provides jobs for many people and helps us solve or ease the social problem of unemployment. Third, tourism helps increase understanding between peoples and helps people learn about different cultures of the world. 上段虽然也是由简单的句子组成，但由于有效使 用了连接词语，读者可以正确地了解到作者所陈 述的many advantages的具体内容。
3.段落中的变化
• We have seen many great changes taking place in recent China. • China has witnessed many great changes in recent years.
• It is a small rectangular room with a white ceiling and green walls. As you enter the room, what's in your eyes are two large,white windows. My bed, covered with a blue bedspread is under the left window. Beside the right window is Mark’s bed. Desks and chairs are placed in the middle of the room. Most interesting is a built-in closet behind the door,which you may not notice if you do not pay attention.
作文常用句式和过渡连接词
• • • • • • • • • A proverb says … It is easy to see that … As the proverb says… Some people say that… No one can deny that … Many people believe that… As we all know that… It is quite clear that… Various views exist as to…, but…
一个段落只有一个主题。组成该段落的所有 句子都应为这个主题服务。任何与主题无关 的内容，任何不能支持段落主题的内容都必 须舍弃。例如： • Autumn is a good season for picnic. The weather is fine and it is not as hot as it is in the summer. People feel cool and comfortable. The scenery is very beautiful with all kinds of flowers here and there. And there are various kinds of fruits. The peasants begin to gather in crops and fruits.
• 2. 扩展句 扩展句是用来说明，解释，引申，或论证 主题句所表达的中心思想的句子。 • E.g. Smoking is harmful to people’s health. Medical science has now proved that smoking can cause lung cancer and other diseases. Your chances of having a heart attack also increase. Smoking is definitely a health hazard.
表例证关系的过渡性词 • for example, for instance, • as an example, • as an illustration, such as, • a case in point is, • to illustrate, • particular, specifically, • say, namely, that is, like, • take … as an example, etc.
让步过渡词
• • • • • • • • • although, however, nevertheless, in spite of, it is true …but, even though, granted that, yet, at the very worst, though, still after all,