雅思写作中常用英文连接单词的替换词一、And 并列关系(and)in addition // and // similarly // likewisemoreover // too // not only ... but // even // besides this/that二、Sequence 顺序(then)出现的时候表示列举first // initially // second etc. // to begin with // then // next // earlier/later // following this/that // afterwards三、Consequence 结果(so)前面是后面的结果// 也就是这些词后面就开始给出结论了as a result // thus // so // therefore // consequently // it follows that // thereby // eventually //in that case // admittedly四、Contrast 转折(but )表对前面论述的转折// 一般后面才是作者观点however // on the other hand // despite// in spite of // though // although // but // on the contrary // otherwise // yet // instead of // rather // whereas // nonetheless // in contrast五、Certainty 确定(of course)强烈的确定// 后面是作者的坚定论点obviously // certainly // plainly // of course // undoubtedly六、Condition 条件/ 因为(if )后面跟随着某种情况发生的前提或者是条件。
if // unless // whether // provided that // Given that // for // so that // whether // depending on七、Time 时间(when )before // since // as // until // meanwhile// at the moment // when // whenever // as soon as // just as八、Summary 总结(in a word)作者的最后总结in conclusion // in summary // lastly // finally // to sum up // to conclude // to recapitulate 重述// in short // in a word九、Example 举例(for example)for example // for instance// just as // in particular // such as // namely 也就是十、Reason 原因( because)since // as // so // because (of) // due to // owing to // the reason why // in other words // leads to // cause雅思写作部分高频词汇、短语替换★高频形容词:1.贫穷的:poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken2.富裕的:rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off3.优秀的:excellent = eminent = top = outstanding4.积极的,好的:good = conducive = beneficial=advantageous5. 流行的:popular = prevailing = prevalent = pervasive★高频动词:6.激发,鼓励:encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur7.认为:think = assert = hold = claim = argue8.完成:complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve9.保留:keep = preserve = retain = hold10. 有害于:destroy = impair = undermine = jeopardize11. 减轻:ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten★高频名词:12.影响:influence= impact13.幸福:happiness = cheerfulness = well-being14.教育:education = schooling = family parenting = upbringing15.青少年:young people = youngsters = youths = adolescents16. 优点:advantage = merits = superiority = virtue17. 责任:responsibility = obligation = duty = liability18. 能力:ability = capacity = power = skill19. 职业:job = career = employment = profession20. 娱乐:enjoyment = pastimes = recreation= entertainment21. 孩子:children = offspring = descendant = kid★高频短语:充满了:be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated with努力:struggle for = aspire after = strive for = spare no efforts for从事:embark on = take up = set about = go in for在当代:in contemporarysociety = in present-day society= in this day and age大量的:a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of雅思写作增强语句表现力的五大王牌一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。
例如:Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。
例如:1) Weak: The team members are good players.Revision: The team members play well.2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。
例如:1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。
例如:1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.Better: She compares prices and quality.三、尽量运用主动语态。
例如:1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.Better: Charity has supported the organization.2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。
例如:1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations. Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores. Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。