Step 3：把句子连成段落
15%认为不应该在公共场合禁烟 1、吸烟是个人自由。 2、吸烟能提高工作效率。 3、长期的习惯无法改变。 15 percent of us think we should not stop smoking in public place. Because they think that people have their own freedom/right to smoke. Smoking can improve their work. It’s hard to give up smoking for those people have smoked for many years.
15 percent of us think we should not stop smoking in public places ____________________________(在公共 场所禁止抽烟). Because they think that people have their own freedom/right to _________________________(有权利做…) prove smoke. Smoking can im_____ their work. They have smoked for many years, So it’s hard to give up smoking ____________(放弃抽烟) 85 percent of us think we should stop smoking in public places. does harm to Because: Smoking _____________(对…有害) people’s health and the environment. so much money Smoking will cost us_____________ (如此多钱).
Yesterday we had a discussion about whether or not we should stop smoking in public places. Eighty-five percent of us think it is necessary to stop smoking in public places. Most of us think smoking does harm to people’s health and the environment. Besides, people should not spend so much money on the cigarettes. Meanwhile, about fifteen percent of us didn’t agree. In their opinion, people should have their own right to do the things they like, such as smoking. It is very hard to give up smoking for those people who have smoked for many years. And they think smoking is useful for people to improve their work.
初步成文
文章结构
提出问题
正反 观点 对比(根据要求， 要求写才写)
基 本 结 构
Yesterday we had a discussion 提出问题 about whether or not we should stop smoking in public places. 15 think we should 观点一： percent of us in public place. not stop smoking 理由： Because they think that people have their own freedom/right to smoke. Smoking can improve their work. It’s hard to give up smoking for those people have smoked for many years. 85 观点二： percent of us think we should stop smoking in public places. Because: Smoking does harm to people’s 理由： health and the environment. Smoking will cost us so much money. In my opinion… 自己的观点 （要求写就写不 I (don’t )think… I agree/disagree with… 要求就不写）
Step 1：想出关键词
• 1.15%的人们认为不应该在公众场合禁烟。 percent think stop smoking in public places • 2.抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。 it’s hard to change • 3.吸烟对环境和他人也造成了伤害。 do harm to people environment
Step 2：写出基本句子
• 1.15%认为不应该在公众场合禁烟。 15 percent of us think we should not stop smoking in public. • 2.抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。 People have smoked for so many years, so it’s hard for them to give up smoking • 3.吸烟对环境和他人也造成了伤害。 Smoking does harm to the health and environment.
范文：
Summery
英语写作基本步骤——
Step 1:找出关键词（key words） Step 2:句子(sentence) 提出问题 Step 3:段落(passage)
正反 观点 对比 类的 文章
不同观点对比
说明自己观点(根据要求，要 求写才写)
Homework
根据提示写一篇60-80词的短文。 假设你是王芳，你班昨天开了一次关于网上购物的主题班会。请结合下 表的内容，用英语给报社写一封信，介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观 点。
Translate
禁烟 1. 不应该禁烟 我们不应该禁烟 15%认为我们不应该禁烟 15%认为我们不应该在公共场所禁烟 15 percent of us think we shouldn’t stop smoking in public places. 2. 抽烟是一种习惯 抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。 一种习惯 抽烟是一种长期的习惯
Smoking is a long-time habit that can not change immediately.
英语写作翻译时要注意抓住关键词， 然后抓主干句子，再进行添枝加叶， 表达完整的句子。
•英语写作基本步骤——
• Step 1:关键词（key words） • Step 2:基本句子(sentence) • Step 3:段落(passage)
Thinking
假如昨天你们班级以No smoking in public places? 为题开了一次讨论会。请根 据以下情况写一篇60字左右的报道，介绍讨 论会的情况。 结果 15%认为不应该 在公共场合禁烟 理由 1、吸烟是个人自 由。 2、吸烟能提高工 作效率。 3、长期的习惯无 法立刻改变。 85%认为应该在 公共场合禁烟 1、吸烟有害健 康。 2、吸烟浪费金 钱。 3、吸烟对环境 和他人也造成了 伤害。
Writing practice
Lead-in
Every coin has two sides! Everything has two sides!
怎样 写正 反观 点对 比类 的文 章
Can you translate ?
• 1.15%的人们认为不应该在公众场合禁烟。 • 2.抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。
一些同学赞同 的原因 1、方便 2、24小时营 业，随时可购 物 3、便宜
一些同学反对的 你自己 原因 的观点 1、网店仅给出 。。。 商品的图片 。。。 2、不能检查质 量 3、不能享受和 朋友一起购物的 乐趣
That’s all! Thanks for listening!
Try to translate the sentences into English in your test paper!
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禁烟 1. 不应该禁烟 我们不应该禁烟 15%认为我们不应该禁烟 15%认为我们不应该在公共场所禁烟 15 percent of us think we shouldn’t stop smoking in public places. 2. 抽烟是一种习惯 抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。 一种习惯 抽烟是一种长期的习惯
Smoking is a long-time habit that can not change immediately.
英语写作翻译时要注意抓住关键词， 然后抓主干句子，再进行添枝加叶， 表达完整的句子。
Basic writing skills
•英语句子的翻译步骤——
• Step 1:找出主干(who-do-what) • Step 2:添枝加叶(how-where-when-why)
85%认为应该在公共场合禁烟 1、吸烟有害健康。 2、吸烟浪费金钱。 3、吸烟对环境和他人也造成了伤害。 85 percent of us think we should stop smoking. Because: Smoking does harm to people’s health and the environment. Smoking will cost us so much money.