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I’m writing to tell you about ... m 批评： 批评：现象及其严重性 phenomenon / the serious situation 第二段 建议措施 1. 提高全体师生意识 of… arouse/ raise /improve the awareness of 禁令或者处罚措施… 2. 禁令或者处罚措施 on… A ban on should be passed. / Students who…should who should be punished. …… 强调采取措施的必要性，希望校长能考虑。 强调采取措施的必要性，希望校长能考虑。 第三段 I would appreciate it if you take my suggestions into consideration / account. Thank you for your consideration.
11. They not only throw garbage away, but also away. throw their responsibilities away. 12. Faced with this serious situation, I highly recommend that special attention should be paid to it. 13. Dear headmaster, you know, forming a good habit is a bridge that can lead us to success. I’m m sure our efforts are bound to pay off. 14. As an old saying goes, time waits for no man. man. Don’t Don t you think it is high time to take measures to stop it? 15. We cannot emphasize the necessity/importance of protecting the environment of our school too much.
behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Yue
June 8, 2011 Dear Mr. Headmaster, I’m LiYue, a student from Class 1, SeniorⅡ. I’m Ⅱ writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students: littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better
1. Thank you for sparing some time to read my letter. 2. Due to the concern about the environment problems of our school, I consider it a must to write to you with my own views. 3. There is no doubt that everyone is eager to study in a tidy and civilized school. 4. What has annoyed me recently is that some students scribble and litter here and there. The situation becomes increasingly serious ignored. and cannot be ignored. 5. At present, I’m conscious of some bad m behaviour in our school.
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6. There is a growing tendency that some students like to scribble and litter at will, which is bound to harm our surroundings. 7. There is no denying (the fact) that school is our second home. 8. It would make sense to make rules to ban students from littering and scribbling. recognized 9. It is high time that we recognized the significance of keeping our school neat and clean. 10. Only when we arouse the awareness can we study and live in harmony and contribute to a better campus.