CET 4 写作讲解
外国语学院 刘长秀
四级作文分值及时间
写作 短文写作 15% 30分钟

作文评分标准
本题满分为15分，成绩分为六个档次： 13-15分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错 误，仅有个别小错。 10-12分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字较连贯，但有少量语言错误。 7-9分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯； 语言错误相当 多，其中有一些是严重错误。 4-6分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语 言错误。 1-3分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误 ，且多数为严重错误。 0分 未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或作文与主题毫不相关。 备注：1. 字数不足者酌情扣分(81-89个词扣1分，7l-80个词扣2分， 61-70个词扣3分，51一60个词扣4分，不足50个词最多只给5分) 。所计字数不包括卷面上已给主题句。 2．只写一段者0-4分，只写两段者0-9分。

翻译练习-- 四级真题

“你要茶还是咖啡?”是用餐人常被问到的问 题。许多西方人会选咖啡，而中国人则会 选茶。相传，中国的一位帝王于五千年前 发现了茶，并用来治病，在明清(The Qing Dynasties)期间，茶馆遍布全国，饮茶在六 世纪传到日本，但直到18世纪才传到欧美 。如今，茶是世界上最流行的饮料 (beverage)之一，茶是中国的瑰宝，也是中 国传统和文化的重要组成部分。
翻译评分标准
本题满分为20分，成绩分为六个档次：17-20分、13-16分、9-12 分、5-8分、1-4分和0分。各档次的评分标准如下：



17-20分 译文准确表达了原文的意思。用词贴切，行文流畅， 基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 13-16分 译文基本上表达了原文的意思。文字通顺、连贯，无 重大语言错误 9-12分 译文勉强表达了原文的意思。用词欠准确，语言错误相 当多，其中有些是严重语言错误。 5-8分 译文仅表达了一小部分原文的意思。用词不准确，有相 当多的严重语言错误。 1-4分 译文支离破碎。除个别词语或句子，绝大部分文字没有 表达原文意思 0分 未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或译文与原文毫不相关。


很多人喜欢中餐，在中国，烹饪不仅被视为一种技能，而且 也被视为一种艺术。精心准备的中餐既可口又好看。烹饪技术 和配料在中国各地差别很大。但好的烹饪都有一个共同点，总 是要考虑到颜色、味道、口感和营养(nutrition)。由于食物对健 康至关重要，好的厨师总是努力在谷物，肉类和蔬菜之间取得 平衡。所以中餐美味又健康。 Many people like Chinese food. In China, cooking is not only regarded as a skill but also an art. The well/carefullyprepared Chinese food is tasty and good-looking. The way of cooking and ingredients selection vary greatly across China. However, good cooking has one thing in common, that is, to always concern colors, smell, tastes and nutrition. As food is vital for man’s health, good cooks are always making efforts to maintain balance between grains ，meats and vegetables. Thus, Chinese food is delicious and healthy.
卷1 参考答案1

“Would you like coffee or tea?” This is a question frequently asked in the restaurant. Most westerners would choose coffee, while Chinese people would choose tea. According to the Chinese history, tea was discovered about five thousand years ago by a Chinese emperor who cured diseases with it. Tea houses were widespread all over China in the Ming and Qing Dynasties. Drinking tea has spread to Japan in the 6th centuries, but it didn’t come to Europe and America until the 18th centuries. Nowadays, tea has become one of the most popular beverages in the world. Being the national beverage, it is also the key component of Chinese tradition and culture.

中国结最初是由手工艺人发明的，经过数百年不断的改进， 已经成为一种优雅多彩的艺术和工艺。在古代，人们用它来记 录事件，但现在主要是用于装饰的目的。“结”在中文里意味 这爱情丶婚姻和团聚，中国结常常作为礼物交换或作用饰品祈 求好运和辟邪。这种形式的手工艺代代相传，现在已经在中国 和世界各地越来越受欢迎。 【参考译文】 The Chinese knot was firstly invented by craftsman and it has become an elegant art after hundred years of improvement. In ancient times, people use knot to record events, but nowadays it is used for decoration. “Knot” in Chinese stands for love, marriage and reunion. Chinese knot is used as gift or ornament, which can bring in good luck and sweep away ill fortune. Having handed over generations after generations, this type of handicraft is extremely popular in China as well as the whole world.
Writing
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文章内容： 审题— 列提纲— 打开思路
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语言质量： 词汇正确 词汇多变：如 main reasons 可替代为 primary, essential, fundamental 等。
作文真题

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1. Give a brief account of the impact of Internet on communication and explain whether electronic communication can replace face to face contact.
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文章造句： 丰富句型句式：倒装句，强调句，插入语等。
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My View on Online Shopping



With the rapid development of science and technology, an increasing number of online shopping malls and E-shops have sprung up in our life, such as Taobao, Dangdang, Jingdong etc. Nowadays, more and more people enjoy conducting the shopping activities online and on wonder the volume of trade reached to 35.019 billion yuan on 11th, November. Different people, however, have different views on online shopping. Some of them approval of it. They believe that shopping on the internet is more convenient, time-saving and cheaper than the goods in the local stores. While others argue that this kind of new way of purchasing have some negative aspects. They think they just look at the pictures instead of touching, smelling, or tasting the goods, so they aren’t absolutely certain about their quality. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former one. On the one hand, I don't like going window-shopping because the shop keepers are always persuasive and I am likely to be taken in. On the other hand, the after-sales service on the internet is much better than the local stores. We just need to spend a little money in buying a freight insurance and we won’t lose anything if we ask for the return service. But every coin has two sides. Online shopping also has shortcomings. For example, we can’t receive the goods we ordered immediately especially in some rural areas. In short, I think, the advantages of the online shopping outweigh its disadvantages and I firmly believe that it will become more and more popular in the near future.