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托福英语独立写作样板指导.doc

托福英语独立写作模板指导很多学习者翻开作文书籍,就如同想打开一本武功秘籍,只希望看到5个字母trick(技巧) 。

技巧固然十分重要,但在应试准备中,常常需要70%的基础和30%的技巧。

这里要提醒大家的是,不可高估技巧的作用,犹如在武打片中,要想得到某某宝典和剑法,是需要付出惨痛的代价的。

如何运用托福英语写作模板1. 熟悉和理解4大评分标准是高分关键评分标准1:effectively addresses the writing topic and task.要求考生有效地阐明主题,考生千万不要跑题。

从笔者的教学经验看,考生全部跑题现象较少,但是局部跑题现象十分严重,这也是考生不能轻取高分的缘故。

评分标准2:well organized and well developed逻辑条理清楚,发展充分。

每次作者在讲写作时总是把它和阅读相对照。

各位考生要想拿到独立写作满分必须真正理解八股文的结构,千万不要写中国式的八股文,而应写出美式八股文。

评分标准3:uses specific details and examples to support you view考生的论据一定要具体、明确,且对论点有支持作用,而不能空洞和泛泛而谈。

评分标准4:displays language facility by demonstrating syntactic variety, word choice and idiom.(通过谴词造句和习惯表达来展示语言的熟练程度)这一点是各位考生经常忽视,迷惘和不清楚的一点。

新托福作文占总分120分的30分。

我们对大家的要求是在作文上花的时间既要少又要拿高分,至少28分。

凡是想拿到28分甚至满分以上的同学一定要注意此项评分标准。

能用first千万不要用firstly,能用finally千万不要用last but not least.不少同学花了很多功夫背这一外国人都不用的词组,能用常用的词千万不要用偏词,同时我们要熟练掌握ETS喜欢的5大语法结构和2种从句。

作文要不要写?当然要写,但我建议考生不要写的太多,写一篇要像一篇,最好让行家改2-3篇。

我曾经碰到一个学生把185篇中的180篇均写了。

拿给我看,结果同样的错误在184篇均反复出现,让我哭笑不得。

学托福需要勤奋,但像这种勤奋就等于浪费青春岁月。

作文要不要背?最好不要通篇背,可以背一些经典的句型。

倘若真要背,一定要认准此篇作文是范文的情况下才能背。

这4个评分标准哪条更重要?这主要取决于考生对作文考分的期望值。

若要考满分,此4点均重要。

千万不能跑题,一跑题可就是0分了。

考试费也就白交了。

二、托福独立写作模板注意:模板是死的,人是活的。

文章的开头最好自己写。

按照课上所讲的句式,怎么写都可以,只要保证正确,有一定的语法结构(如:从句,同位语,插入语等)首段:将问题按照漏斗形思维模式进行同义改写,如名词改形容词,动词,现象阐述,内容解释等。

后面的结构可以为:The main reason for my view is that .First of all, Second,Finally,So,Another reason for my view is that .On one hand, . For example,. In addition, .Finally, .(分理由1) . (分理由2) .In conclusion, based on the reasons I discussed above,(please rewrite the first paragraph in another way). . .新托福写作并不难,不管你中文写作好还是不好,只要真正掌握了写作方法和要求,再写出3-5篇作文。

考个满分绝不是什么大惊小怪的事。

关键原因是同学们在掌握了我们教的方法后一方面能从容应对写作,更能在写作中取得高分或满分的成绩!每个人都会说work hard and work smart.但大多数人均没有做到,至少在备战新托福及新托福写人上没做到。

托福综合口语考试答题模板托福综合口语答题模板1、The school has implemented a new policy that due to And the man/woman holds a positive/negative view towards the announcement.The first reason s/he gives is that And the second one is based on the fact that2、From the reading material,we know that (the college) is going toObviously,the man/woman in the conversation thinks that this is a great/bad idea,due to the following reasons.。

One reason is that Another is(万一有时间)So that s all the reasons s/he has to form thatopinion. (尽量记,听为主)3、The man/woman s opinion about STH is that (选择方案型:听选择的原因。

1.Firstly,the man/woman states that .2.And then he/she states that 。

(提出建议型:听建议的利弊。

1.Firstly,the man/woman talks about the positive aspect of this issue. He/she states that .2.On the other hand,the man/man also talks about the negative aspect of this question. He/she points out that 。

)4、阅读引用部分的模版(1) In the readingmaterial,(2) There is a/anannouncement/message/notice/proposal about ****(填入记下的关键词)(3) The university/college is going to****(稍稍展开下)(4) In the listeningmaterial,two students discussabout the***(填入关键词)听力中人物表达观点的模版:(1) The man/woman is against/supporting the***(2) He or she feels unhappy/less satisfied about***(3) He or She thinks the*** is unfair/inconvenient/unaffordable for the following reasons:(4) The man/woman s opinion about STH is that 。

理由展开部分的模版:(1) First,he thinks/says**** Also,he points out that****(2) Firstly,the man/woman states that 。

; And then he/she states that 。

(3)支持+反对Firstly,the man/woman talks about the positive aspect of this issue. He/she states that .On the other hand,the man/man also talks about the negative aspect of this question. He/she points out that 。

5、范例:看OG的范例回答Bus Service Elimination Planned Important Points(字数102)The university plans to eliminate the bus service because it is too expensive to run and too few students use it. (一句话概括阅读材料的内容)The man disagrees with the university plan. (谈话人态度)He believes the reason few students take the bus is that the route goes to neighborhoods where students do not live. If the routes were changed,many more students would ride the bus. (两句话讲谈话人的第一个观点:校车路线。

注意改路线的建议是采用虚拟语气来表述的)The man disagrees with the way the university plans to use the money it saves on the bus service. Building more parking lots on campus will encourage more students to drive on campus. This would increase noise and traffic on campus.(谈话人第二个观点:增加停车场。

首先讲谈话人观点:disagree with the way 然后将后果1 后果2)托福综合口语5个日常用语使用方法1. Out of hand这个词组字面上是手的外面的意思。

如果什么东西跑到了我们手掌的外面,那就很难被控制了。

所以这个短语在口语表达中,就可以表示无法控制的意思。

在中文里面,控制的近义词可以是掌握,既在手掌中握着,看来汉语和英语也是有很多异曲同工之处的。

例如在某次过往考试的Task5中,女生担心她的学习小组每次见面时只是闲聊而不学习,去找她的教授商量对策。

教授建议他们不要每个星期都是星期五下午会面,因为那时候大家都开始迎接周末了,会很疲劳,而是换个时间见面。

但是女生说:Although things have gotten so out of hand that I m not sure changing days would help.但是事态已经无法控制了,我不觉得换时间能够有所帮助。

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