2019年山东省菏泽市中考英语满分作文
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Lisa来信说她最近正在学习汉语,在学
习过程中遇到"程门立雪"( Cheng Men Li Xue)这一成语,不解其意,
请你根据下面图片提示,用英语给她回信,简要叙述这个成语故事,并谈
谈自己的理解和感悟.
要求:
1.语言规范,语句通顺,可适当发挥;
2.字数:100词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数.
可能用到的词: idiom成语; during the Northern Song Dynasty北宋时期;Cheng Yi
程顾; have a nap小憩; disturb打扰; moved感动的; respect尊敬
Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to hear from you.___________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:I am very happy that you have great interest in learning Chinese. have
great interest in doing sth对做…有很大兴趣.
这句话意为:我很高兴你在学习汉语上有很大的兴趣.
高分句型二:It shows us that we should show our respect to our teachers.It shows that…
它表明了…
这句话意为:它表明了我们应该对我们的老师尊重.
【解答】Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to hear from you. I am very happy that you have great interest in learning
Chinese.(高分句型一)Let me tell you the story about the idiom Cheng Men Li Xue.(开
篇点明题意.)
It is a story during the Northern Song Dynasty.There was a student called
Yangshi.He had a confused problem,he wanted to ask famous teacher Cheng Yi.When
he arrived his house,the teacher was having a nap.So the page boy asked Yangshi to visit
the teacher another time.But Yangshi refused.Suddenly,It started snowing,the page boy
asked him to come in and wait in the house since it was very cold.However,Yangshi stood
in front of the gate ,even later it snowed heavily.After the teacher finished all the things,
Yangshi still stood in the snow.Then the teacher asked him,"Why not come another
day?How silly you are!",Yangshi said,"I have learned something from you,I can't
disturb you,and I must show my respect for you".Finally,Cheng Yi was moved by
Yangshi's action and taught him a lot.(讲述故事的经过)
It shows us that we should show our respect to our teachers.Hope it will help you to
understand.(结尾总结)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想
几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废
话连篇,严重跑题.