专题五短文改错训练1 短文改错(Ⅰ)A(2019·东北三省四市一模)One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents and two sisters.As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit-down dinner.First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays.After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy.For a while, the kids began to resist the idea.They said they would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities.Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a very different way.We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other's problems.Since a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong relationships with the family than we had before.【答案】One of my happiest childhood memorieswerewas/is having dinner with myparents and two sisters.As a result,∧having found that we seldom had a chance to get together, thenwe decided we would set aside three evenings thea week fora sit-down dinner.First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays,Wednesdaysorand Fridays.After a couple ofweekweeks of trying thisplan, almost everyone was unhappy.For a while, the kids began to resist the idea.They said theywould rather ﹨to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities.Gradual Gradually,though, they began to see these evenings together forin avery different way.We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other'sproblems.SinceAfter a few months, we all felt that we had been able tobuild muchstrongstronger relationships with the family than we had before.B(2019·河北唐山一模)A new police officer was out for his first ride in a police car with a experienced partner.A call came in told them to break up a crowd of people.The officers drove to the street and observe asmall crowd standing on the corner.The new police officer rolled up his window and said, “Please leave the corner.” A few people glanced, and no one moved, so he shouted again ,“Leave that corner.NOW !”This time, the group of people began to move unwillingly.While they left ,they stared in his directions.The young police officer was so proud that he turned to partner and asked ,“Well ,what is my performance ?”“Pretty good ,”smiled at his partner ,“but I'm sorry to tell you this is a bus stop.”【答案】A new police officer was out for his first ride in a police car witha an experienced partner.A call came in told telling them to break up a crowd of people.The officers drove to the street and observe observeda small crowd standing on the corner.The new police officer rolledup down his window and said ,“Please leave the corner.” A few people glanced ,and butno one moved ,so he shouted again ,“Leave that corner.NOW !” This time ,the group of people began to move unwillingly.While Whenthey left ,they stared in his directions direction.The young police officer was so proud that he turned to ∧his partner and asked ,“Well ,what howis my performance ?”“Pretty good ,”smiled ﹨at his partner ,“but I'm sorry to tell you this is a bus stop.”C(2019·武汉调研)I'd like to talking about my most memorable experience.It was the trip to Australia I had three years before with my dance group to participate in international dance festival.It was the first time I had travelled by plane in my life.My mum worried a lot, so everything went smoothly.I stayed there for two week and it was the happiest time in my life.Besides our performances there, we have much excitement.We spent on almost every morning sunbathing on the beautiful beach and swam in the blue sea.But warmly Australian nights were which I adored most of all.It was a time of joy, lights, music and summer parties.【答案】I'd like to talking talkabout my most memorable experience.It was the trip to Australia I had three years before agowith my dance group to participate in ∧aninternational dance festival.It was the first time I had travelled by plane in my life.My mum worried a lot,so but everything went smoothly.I stayed there for two week weeksand it was the happiest time in my life.Besides our performances there,we havehad much excitement. We spent ﹨o n almost every morning sunbathing on the beautiful beachandswamswimming in the blue sea.Butwarmlywarm Australian nights werewhichwhat I adored most of all.Itwas a time of joy, lights, music and summer parties.D(2019·石家庄一模)Dear Li Lei,I've received your letter and I deep understand how you feel now.However, don't feel disappointing or even doubt yourself as you are not the only one who find it difficult to write well.I suppose the following suggestion might be of very helpful to you.To begin with, it's important remember some sentence structures, which can enriched your vocabulary and expressions.Additionally, reading English articles and recite the good ones. Finally, keep it in mind what there are many things that can't be learnt immediately, but never be frustrated when you fail in one or two exams.Just as the saying goes:“Practice makes perfect.”【答案】Dear Li Lei,I've received your letter and Ideepdeeply understand how you feel now.However, don't feeldisappointingdisappointed or even doubt yourself as you are not the only one who findfinds it difficult to writewell.I suppose the following suggestionsuggestions might be ﹨o f very helpful to you.To begin with, it's important ∧to remember some sentence structures, which canenrichedenrichyour vocabulary and expressions. Additionally, readingread English articles and recite the goodones.Finally, keep it in mind whatthat there are many things that can't be learnt immediately,butsonever be frustrated whenyou fail in one or two exams. Just as the saying goes:“Practice makes perfect.”E(2019·青岛一模)The aim of this report is to show the opinions on reading paper books.On the one hand, reading paper books do bring us benefits.First, it's much more convenience to read paper books but we can take notes in places where we want to express our opinions.Second, it does less harm to your eyesight.Third, it helped us develop the habit of reading.On the other hand, paper books have some disadvantage.For example, they are not easily to carry.Besides, they cost a lot of paper, that is not very friendly to our environment.In the general, paper books cannot be replaced in spite their disadvantages.【答案】The aim of this report is to show the opinions on reading paper books.On the one hand, reading paper booksdo does bring us benefits.First, it's much more convenience convenient to read paper books but andwe can take notes in places where wewant to express our opinions.Second, it does less harm to your our eyesight. Third, it helped helpsus develop the habit of reading. On the other hand, paper books have somedisadvantage disadvantages .For example,they are not easily easy to carry.Besides, they cost a lot of paper, that whichis not very friendly to our environment. In ﹨the general, paper books cannot be replaced in spite ∧of their disadvantages.F(2019·合肥二模)My school holds a sports meeting in every October.We all looked forward to it, for it is a time for us to reduce stress and it always brings us lots of unforgettable memories.It usually last for three days, during which time we have no classes.All the student go to the playground to watch or joining in games.The part I like most is the relay race.With race going on, our excitement grows.All of them yell out “come on ” to the athletes, watching them competing aggressive.The most breathtaking moment is that the athletes are getting to the finishing line.Somebody can tell who is the winner until the last minute.【答案】My school holds a sports meeting ﹨in every October.We all looked lookforward to it, for it is a time for us to reduce stress and it always brings us lots of unforgettable memories.It usuallylast lasts for three days, during which time we have no classes.All the student studentsgo to the playground to watch or joining joinin games.The part I like most is the relay race.With ∧the race going on, our excitement grows.All of them usyell out “come on” to the athletes, watching them competing aggressive aggressively . The most breathtaking moment is that whenthe athletes are getting to the finishing line.Somebody Nobodycan tell who is the winner until the last minute.。