no GPS…
a narrative(叙事) story
Develop the plot based on the context
What’s in the previous story, especiallyWthee glaostt lpolsot?
Although Uncle Paul was a little worried, my dabdeacnad uIsteoook fa
express their thoughts and feelings 3. To be logical and reasonable 4. To use some conjunctions and non-predicate verbs
to make the text coherent.(copy the language）
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Think and share:
What would the author do when suddenly a little rabbit jumped out ?
stop follow catch protect control fall off…
on a farm in the __W__il_d__ West.
Para 3: I experienced a lot of interesting things but what I most wanted to do was to take a
_h__or_s_e_ ride.
Para 4: Although Uncle Paul was a bit _w_o_r_r_ie_d_,
提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据 材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一 篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）
Read ＋ Write
Read for what?
Read for key elements Read for main plot Read for writing style
be designed in a logical and reasonable way.
Logical and reasonable
Fly your imagination but keep to the track of the story!
not a fairy tale not a fiction
• Continuation Writing
读后续写二
1. to review, learn and apply the writing skills; 2. to appreciate good writings and avoid some common mistakes; 3. to rewrite the composition .
I was so happy to take a horse ride with my dad towards the mountains.
Continue and complete the story
Beginning
My dad took me to a special vacation on a farm in the wild west.
Think and share:
What would Uncle do ?
Uncle Paul
rescue help/aid shout hug prepare a dinner…
Tips on continuation writing
Writing tip 3:
Creative plotting requires a careful analysis of the close link between the given information. Being creative doesn’t mean you can write whatever you like. Continuation writing should
Think and share:
What would the horse do ?
frighten run (wildly) disappear …
Think and share:
What would Dad do ?
protect follow comfort instruct calm down…
Fill in the blanks with proper words: …So, my dad and I __p_u_t__o_n_ our new cowboy hats, ___g_o_t_o_n_ our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul __cr_i_e_d_, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad __cr_i_e_d_b__a_ck_. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.
Tips on continuation writing 4： copy the language
It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a m__a_g_ic__ scene. It looked like a _b_ea_u_t_if_u_l__woven blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
dad towards the mountains.
Turning
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Ending
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Kinds Character Action Place Concrete Things Abstract
Underlined key words and phrases dad / Uncle Paul feed / get lost farm house / river sheep/ track
5. To make use of the given information to echo the
previous part.(呼应前文）
Tips on continuation writing
Writing tip 1:
In the concluding paragraph, you’d better communicatepositive thoughts and attitudes to readers by creating a positive ending.
Writing purpose:
1. To praise the spirit of being courageous and optimistic to think ways out even in difficult situations 2. When others are in need ,we should never hesitate to give a hand.
Eg：The home –Made Ball
The two friends kicked and ran until the sun turned the sky pale orange.
Tips on continuation writing
Writing tip 5:
Make use of the given information to echo the previous part.(呼应前文）
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
horse ride towards the mountains.
the rabΒιβλιοθήκη it.What’s in the two given first sentences?