高考英语作文提高技巧：高级词汇让你作文华丽变身一、常见高级词汇归纳与训练1.高级词汇替换常用简单词(1)动词变身(2)形容词、副词、介词变身经典例子①On the one hand, too much praise might lead to children’s lack of enthusiasm to explore new things, for they are afraid they won’t meet parents’ expectations. ②Considering the enormous benefits, which we can earn steadily from tennis practice, including preventing us from getting shortsighted and keeping physically healthy, we are lost in training course.小试牛刀①The special day allows people to (对……表达爱和情感) their fathers.②(是明智的)for people to use their cell-phones(更恰当地).③(没有充分准备), you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly and obtain satisfactory marks, let alone be admitted into (梦想的大学).④Tracy said she had already (通知Susan) the change of the appointment.⑤People generally thought it impossible for the Chinese team to win the championship in the Rio Olympic Games, but they(克服许多障碍) and (最终成功).⑥Drama Night (预定)be held on the evening of next Friday in the theatre hall.⑦(此外), having been awarded scholarship twice in our school, I have (极好的学术成就).⑧This phenomenon has (成为焦点)we must face today because of (许多严重后果)caused by improper use of cell-phones.2. 变化所用词的词性在作文中, 可以通过改变一个词的词性, 使文章富有变化, 让阅卷者感受到考生对词汇各种用法的掌握水平和灵活运用的程度。
常见的变化词性的策略有名词变动词、动词变名词、形容词变名词等。
(1)名词变动词People are concerned about the gradual disappearance of the traditional values.→People are concerned because the traditional values are gradually disappearing.传统价值观正在渐渐地消亡, 这让人们很担忧。
(2)动词变名词After watching his performance, I found he could really dance very well.→After watching his performance, I found him a really good dancer.看了他的表演之后, 我发现他跳舞跳得很棒。
(3)形容词变名词I wrote a letter to Tom to thank him for his being so kind.→I wrote a lett er to Tom to thank him for his kindness. 我写信给汤姆对他的善良表示感谢。
3. 善用短语:富有变化, 引人入胜经典例子①For example, paper-cutting and Chinese knots are all feasible methods of introducing our culture, which are also more convenient to organize.②The reasons why I am qualified for the job are as follows.小试牛刀①(我认为), it’s true that cell-phones bring us lots of benefits and convenience, but only when they’re used more (恰当地) can they serve us better.②All my teachers and classmates (高度赞扬我的熟练) in both Chinese and English.③(考虑到你的全部要求), I firmly believe I’m the right person you’re looking f or.④As for accommodation, I prefer to live with a local family because I want to improve my English and (近距离体验真实的美国文化).⑤You are optimistic about life and always have confidence, whatever difficulty you may (遇见), which helps you stand out among the classmates.⑥(随着人们生活水平的改善), cell-phones are flooding into our life.⑦We are sorry for any (给您带来的不便). Thanks for your understanding.⑧Nowadays, the smart phones have found their way to every family and are playinga very important role in our life. They are beneficial to us in many ways. However, they also(有害于我们的身心健康).⑨In addition, seldom do I have time to keep my parents company, so I decide to help my parents with some housework (缓解压力), which I think is of benefit to (加强关系) between my family members.4. 变主动语态为被动语态考生在写作中习惯使用主动语态, 其实, 如果不知道动作的执行者、没必要强调执行者或者想要表达更加客观一些的话, 被动语态就是一个很好的选择。
例如:(1)My father gave me a new book on my birthday.(爸爸在我过生日的时候给了我一本新书。
)→I was given a new book(by my father)on my birthday. (间接宾语作了主语)→A new book was given to me(by my father)on my birt hday. (直接宾语作了主语)(2)And some world-famous players will be invited to give lessons.并且会邀请一些世界著名的球员来上课。
(3)Besides, you are expected to bring some nice small gifts. 除此之外, (大家)会期望你带一些小的美好的礼物。
二、综合提升训练根据所给信息补全短文, 并注意高级词汇的使用。
Dear Peter,(我非常高兴) to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may(给你一个粗略的理解).To begin with, (一座美丽的新体育馆已落成), which (已成为新的地标) in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, (各种体育项目) are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football (以及) running competitions (越来越受欢迎). As for me, (热爱篮球) since it has been giving me strength (去迎接生活中的挑战).All in all, I (诚挚邀请) you to come to our school and see for yourself.Yours,Li Hua答案一、常见高级词汇归纳与训练1.高级词汇替换常用简单词小试牛刀①The special day allows people to show their love and affection for(对……表达爱和情感) their fathers.②It’s advisable/wise(是明智的)for people to use their cell-phones more appropriately/properly(更恰当地).③Without sufficient preparation(没有充分准备), you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly and obtain satisfactory marks, let alone be admitted into a desirable university(梦想的大学).④Tracy said she had already informed Susan of(通知Susan) the change of the appointment.⑤People generally thought it impossible for the Chinese team to win the championship in the Rio Olympic Games, but they overcame many hurdles(克服许多障碍) and eventually worked miracles/wonders(最终成功).⑥Drama Night is scheduled to (预定)be held on the evening of next Friday in the theatre hall.⑦Additionally(此外), having been awarded scholarship twice in our school, I have excellent academic performance(极好的学术成就).⑧This phenomenon has become a concern/focus (成为焦点)we must face today because of many serious consequences (许多严重后果)caused by improper use of cell-phones.2. 变化所用词的词性无3. 善用短语:富有变化, 引人入胜小试牛刀①From my point of view(我认为), it’s true that cell-phones bring us lots of benefits and convenience, but only when they’re used more appropriately(恰当地) can they serve us better.②All my teachers and classmates sing high praise for my proficiency(高度赞扬我的熟练) in both Chinese and English.③Taking all your requirements into account/consideration(考虑到你的全部要求), I firmly believe I’m the right person you’re looking for.④As for accommodation, I prefer to live with a local family because I want to improve my English and experience authentic American culture close up(近距离体验真实的美国文化).⑤You are optimistic about life and always have confidence, whatever difficulty you may encounter(遇见), which helps you stand out among the classmates.⑥With the improvement of people’s living standards(随着人们生活水平的改善), cell-phones are flooding into our life.⑦We are sorry for any inconvenience that we’ll bring to you(给您带来的不便). Thanks for your understanding.⑧Nowadays, the smart phones have found their way to every family and are playinga very important role in our life. They are beneficial to us in many ways. However, they also do harm to us mentally and physically(有害于我们的身心健康).⑨In addition, seldom do I have time to keep my parents company, so I decide to help my parents with some housework to release/ease/lessen/reduce their pressure(缓解压力), which I think is of benefit to enhance the relationship(加强关系) between my family members.4. 变主动语态为被动语态二、综合提升训练根据所给信息补全短文, 并注意高级词汇的使用。