大作文一、审题(1)审图、画、表格picture? Photo? graph?如果是画可以用的词是drawing/cartoon/picture/image/illstrution如果是拍的可以用词是photo/photograph/picture/image/illstrution(2)看图的数量(3)找图中的对立点(4)审题的文字说明—direction部分二、构思(1)写几段?一般是3-4段。
(2)写多少字?比规定多20个字,大约200个字。
(3)字体要清晰,特别注意换行时(4)书写三、作文书写(一)第一段:句型新、多变化、可以是主语从句、倒装句、感叹句、对立对比句、使用as句型、no matter how句式等1、名词性从句①what is vividly depicted in the drawing above is that + 从句②what can be seen from the image is + 名词(词组),who/which + 定语从句。
2、倒装句①illustrated in the above picture is/are + 名词,who/which+定语从句。
②presented in this cartoon is that+从句。
例子:09年为例what is subtly featured in the above image is a significant number of people ,who are sitting in front of their computer, surfing the internet.08年为例Featured in this drawing is that two handicapped men are running quickly together ,supporting each other. Surprisingly, each of them have only one leg. It is cooperation that makes it possible for them to go anywhere they want. What an interesting and enlightening picture it is! /How illuminating and enlightening the above cartoon is!第一段已经点出主题,第二段只要在简单的描述主题后举例子就可以,第三段给出套话总结。
(二)第二段,解释图画的含义,评论画里的现象(现象的普遍性,举例子,也可以在写现象的严重性、重要意义、行动举措)1、在说明普遍性时说明图画的含义,再举例子。
However simple it may be seen at first glance, its intended meaning goes undoubtedly far deeper. It is a vivid reflection of a prevalent social phenomenon :+ 此案现象的内容。
(It is indicative of a widespread social phenomenon :+现象内容。
)2、举例子★Upsetting parallels are now available in nearly all walks of life , and a case in point goes to one of my acquaintances ,who + 定从。
★Similar happenings are now available in nearly all walks of life and one of my acquaintances may serve as a convincing example . + 你朋友的情况(自己写)。
★It should be observed , of course , that such an (upsetting) phenomenon is not entirely acoincidence.{说明现象并非偶然,后面可以跟例子也可以跟现象原因,还可以再说明普遍性后跟解决的意见。
如,跟原因It should be observed ,of course, that such an (upsetting) phenomenon is not entirely a coincidence .Indeed, similar stories can be easily found in our daily life .Then , what might account for (this upsetting) phenomenon?+ 列举的原因<可用于第二段>。
跟解决问题的方法,It should be observed ,of course ,that such an (upsetting) phenomenon is not entirely a coincidence . Indeed , similar stories can be easily found in our daily life .What should be done? + 解决问题的措施<可用于第三段>。
}★Indeed , similar stories can be easily found in our daily life , and it can be illustrated in terms of one of my former colleague . + 你朋友的内容。
3、列举原因疑问句+ 原因①疑问句★what can be inferred from this cartoon?★What on earth can we learn from drawing?★What might account for (this upsetting) phenomenon?③列举原因第一种方法To begin with ,--------------Moreover , -----------Above all,-----------第二种方法Primarily,--------。
或者Initially , --------.In addition ,--------.或者More, ---------.Finally , ---------.或者Above all--------.或者Additionally,------------.(三)第三段如果第二段只是讲了现象的含义和普遍性,则第三段可以讲产生现象的原因,讲原因的方法可以参照上边。
如果第三段不讲原因,可以从现象的重要性和严重性及对未来的影响讲起,说出人们应该采取的解决问题措施,即给出评论和建议。
给出评论意见的方法:①+②+③①现象的重要性●However much importance we attach to this phenomenon , it is far from being enough.无论这种现象我们多磨重视还是远远不够的●However simple it may be seen at first glance , its intended meaning goesundoubtedly far deeper.这幅画的含义深刻毋庸置疑②现象的普遍性(如果第二段写了普遍性,第三段就不用再写了)●It is a vivid reflection of prevalent social phenomenon :--------●It is indicative of a widespread social phenomenon :--------③解决问题的建议●Failure to realize the significance / severity of this phenomenon may inevitablylead to dire consequence . The sooner we take this seriously , the better our society is. 这段讲现象的严重性,要灵活与现象重要性和普遍性连接.●The current state of affairs may have been encouraged by the lack of rules andregulations.这段是建议的内容要设置相关法律。
●China Youth Daily editor +人名 + notes that the situation will improve only whenthere are comprehensive programs.这段相当于引用别人的建议,句子中的人名自己编,编个靠谱的拒绝李明,小明之类。
这句话的意思是中国青年报的编辑—---说只有综合性的项目出现时,这种情况才会被改善。
这句你要根据情况用。
●As 名人 ,a 57-year-old, china youth daily editor, puts it ,”There has to beof programs, what is need is a package deal.”也是慎重选用●As a well known song/poem/proverb puts it ,”名句”。
名句要是不知道就自己编●The general public , fortunately have been made aware that we should takeeffective measures to curb(压制) such events.●Only in this way can we achieve success and only in this way can our societybecome more harmonious to live in.注:No matter how simple it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking(发人思考的)。
这句话可以后边跟图画内涵的解释,可用于第二段,推荐用,这个还不错。
小作文小作文的的类型有:书信、摘要、报告、备忘录、通知。
我只介绍书信的,其他你要自己去看,去总结,每种类型看书一两篇记住格式。