自2016年起,专四考试写作部分改革,要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等,写一篇200词左右的作文。
出现的新题型命题+ 材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。
考生可以米取“简短概述材料一评论一总结”的写作模式。
值得注意的是,在写作过程中,概述材料和进行评论缺一不可,否则将可能被扣分。
例题1PART VI WRITINGRead carefully the followi ng excerpt and the n write your respo nse in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS, i n which you should:1) Summarize the main messageof the excerpt, and the n2) Comment on whether students learn more from classestha n from other resourcesYou can support yourself with information from the excerpt. Marks will be awarded for content releva nee, content sufficie ncy, orga ni zati on and Ian guage quality. Failure to follow the above in structi ons may result in a loss ofmarks.范文1In the information age, the traditional student-teacher relati on ship has bee n affected deeply and people beg in to doubt whether stude nts can lear n more from classes tha n from other resources(. 介绍背景)According to the conventional view, teachers are still the primary source from which students obtain professional knowledge, timely class interaction, and effective supervision from teachers(. 总结第一种观点)On the contrary, nowadays, many people believe that students can learn more from other resourcessuch as Internet and TV since they are more accessible and engage students more actively inresearch(. 总结第二种观点)For me, I am in favor of the first view. (表明立场)Teachers play anirreplaceablerole in education, whether it'in s the past or at present, since they not only impart knowledge, but also educate people(. 总论据)For one thing , what students learn from their classes is more precise than from other resources which provide an enormous amount of data needed to besifted through to determine which information is accurate.(理由一)For another, teachers in school put the shaping of personality in a place as important as the teaching of knowledge, which is hard for students to obtain from other resource(. 理由二)In conclusion, the development of cutting-edge technology exerts a big impact on modern education.However, it can never eliminate the need for high-quality professionals in classroom(. 重申论点) (213 words)例题2PART VI WRITINGRead carefully the following excerpt and then write yourresponse in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS, in which you should:1)Summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then2)Comment onwhether people should choose to become indoorsyYou can support yourself with information from the excerpt. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.范文2本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。
在具体行文方面,考生应首先简观点:“宅”有种种弊端。
接下来给出自己的观点:现代科技是把双刃剑,我们要把握好,适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利,但过度依赖则会对身体有害。
最后总结全文,重申观点。
Should We Embrace Indoorsy Lifestyle?With the globalization of modern technology, especiallythe world-wide access to Internet service, people ' s lifestylehas bee n greatly in flue nee介绍背景) Some enjoy indoorsylifestyle. They hold that indoorsy lifestyle is time-saving andpeaeeful. In eontrast, those against the ideaelaim that keep anindoorsy lifestyle will do harm to people both psyehologieallyand physieally. (总结材料)As far as I am eoneerned, modern teehnology is a double-edged sword.(点明观点)If we consider it as a useful tool toimprove our life, it will eertainly bringunprecedentedconvenience to us. With the assistance of theInternet, one can save his time through working, shopp ing, orcom muni cati ng with others at home.(正方理由一)Also,solitude isn 't always equal to loneliness. Free from outsideinterruption, one can be creative and keep his mind sharp(. 正方理由二)On the other hand, too much reliance on or indulgence in the Internet will certainly have an impact on our normal life and work. For instance, indulging in social network online may corrode peoples s'ocial skills. To be specific, they mayfeel lost when talking with people face-to-face, which may affect their normal relationship with family members and friends.(反方理由一)What' sworse,sitting in front of a computer all day long means little outdoor activities, which may damage one (反方health.理由二)In conclusion, while enjoying all the benefits the virtual world has brought to us, indoorsy people should also step out of their home andengage themselves in the real world.(总结上一段)(234 words)。