专题07 短文改错高频考点TOP7 并列句考点一And, so, but, or误用由并列连词( and, but, or, so, not only…but also, however, neither… nor, either…or, still)把两个或两个以上的互相独立的分句连接而成的句子叫做并列句。
并列句之间的关系有并列、转折、选择、因果等关系。
1) 表递进或顺承关系：常用连词and, both…and…, as well as , not only …but also…, neither…nor…等连接。
He is a lovely boy and he is helpful.他很可爱，乐于助人。
2) 转折关系：常用连词but, however, yet（然而，可是）等连接I can come, but will be a little late.我能来，但是要稍晚一些。
3) 选择关系：常用连词or, either…or…, not…but…, or else等连接Either give a hand, or leave right away.或者帮忙，或者立刻离开。
4) 因果关系：常用连词for, so 等连接She is kind to the others, so all of us love her. 她对别人很好，所以我们都喜欢她。
1)She never said she was rich, and she was.【答案】and 改为but【解析】but 在此表示转折。
句中的she was 为she was rich 之省略2)Mr Smith worked very hard so without any success.【答案】so 改为but【解析】此处语意转折考点二如并列连词and, or前后连接为动词词组，则要考虑并列关系是否一致1)Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.【答案】to去掉【解析】or并列连词，organize和plant并列2)In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.【答案】showed改为show【解析】show和get并列（1）We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do.【答案】and 改为but【解析】因此处语意转折（2）I told Mother，Father，Sister，all my friends here what a great time I had.【答案】all 前加and【解析】表示并列关系（3）It is a very impo rtant exam but I can‘t afford to fail it.【答案】but 改为and / so【解析】此处表因果关系，并非转折关系（4）She was smiling but nodding at me.【答案】but 改为and【解析】此处并无转折之意（5）It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.【答案】and 改为or【解析】a visitor 和a guest 应是选择关系，意思是“好像我的父母亲把我当作一个来访者或一个客人”（6）The food was expensive and the service was good.【答案】and 改为but【解析】此处意义发生转折（7）I‘m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won several games.【答案】so 改为and【解析】表并列关系（8）My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.【答案】but 改为and【解析】此处表示并列，而不是转折（9）So once you‘ve started collecting seriously，you…【答案】So 改为But【解析】因为前后是转折关系（10）Clever as she is，but she works very hard.【答案】去掉but【解析】因前面已有引导让步状语从句的连词as（=though 虽然），千万不要受汉语句式“虽然……但是……”的影响，而重复用连词（11）I teach them，play with them，but watch them growing up.【答案】but 改为and【解析】因为teach / play 与watch 是并列关系，而不是转折关系【湖南省长郡中学2019届高三上学期第一次月考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father's friend Henry used to be a teacher at a medical school and he was very strict with his students. The students were afraid of him though he was seldom pleased of the answers they gave. Once a student was seated before him, and Henry required him describe a certain illness, his description of which turned out to be OK. ThenHenry asked about the cure for the illness, but the student gave the right answer. 6eHow much will you give the patient?" “A full spoon!” Suddenly the student realizes that there was anything wrong. He said anxiously, “I've made the mistake a full spoon is too many, and he can take only five drops.” “It's too late; your patient has been died,” Henry said cold.【答案】【解析】【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，Henry老师对学生非常严格，学生很怕他。
文章中讲述了一件他刁难学生的事情。
第三处：考查不定式。
动词短语require sb to do sth要求某人做某事；其中不定式短语做宾语补足语，对宾语进行补充说明。
句意：Henry要求他描述一种疾病。
第四处：考查连词。
句意：接着Henry又问了疾病的治疗方法，这个学生也给出了正确答案。
上下文之间是顺接的并列关系，并非转折关系，所以要用and替换but。
第五处：考查时态。
本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，全文都使用一般过去时。
所以本句使用过去式realized 做谓语动词。
第六处：考查代词。
代词anything通常用于疑问句和否定句中，something通常用于肯定句中。
本句是一个肯定句，所以使用something。
句意：突然这个学生意识到出了错误。
第七处：考查固定短语。
短语make a mistake犯错；其中的不定冠词a表示泛指。
第八处：考查形容词。
Henry询问用药的剂量，药物是不可数名词，所以使用much修饰，而many要修饰可数名词复数形式。
第九处：考查语态和形容词。
本句可以使用过去分词died和has构成完成时，或者使用形容词dead与has been 连用表示状态。
句意：太晚了，你的病人已经死亡了。
Henry冷冷地说。
学科*网【2019届四川省华蓥市第一中学高三入学调研】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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