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状语从句在高考写作中的运用(公开课)
2009年广东卷 英语作文 你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况: 时间:上周末 对象:眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题:我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 原因很复杂,以致于没有 基本信息:(1)发生率:略高于 50% 哪一种药物能治愈近视。 (2)人数:世界第一 专家解读:(1)原因:很复杂 (2)治疗:没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 He also pointed that the (3)建议:不要过度用眼;多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示:如何握笔也和近视有关 causes for short-sightedness 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,并包括如下内容: are so complicated that no 1.采访的时间、对象和主题; medicine can cure short2.中小学生近视的发生率及人数; 3.专家解读。 sightedness.
2011年广东卷 英语作文 以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道 基本信息: ⑴书名:Battle Hymn of the 17 Tiger Mother 尽管作者 岁的大女儿已被 ⑵作者:Amy Chua,美籍华人,耶鲁大学教授 哈佛和耶鲁录取,多数中国 ⑶出版时间:2010年 妈妈还是不赞同她的做法。 ⑷内容:作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事 ⑸效应:引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论 相关报道: ⑴中文版:2011年初开始在中国销售 ⑵意外反应:多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法 ⑶最新消息: 17 岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取 The majority of mothers in China 耶鲁:Yale 哈佛:Harvard disagree with the author though her [写作内容] 17-year-old elder daughter was lately 根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍,内容包括: reported to have got offers from both 1.图书的基本信息
1.After I realized the importance of learning, I studied even harder. Realizing the importance of learning, I studied even harder.
2.状语从句与倒装inversion
第一步:拆分成几个简单句 1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。 第二步:分别翻译这几个简单句 ① They have much homework to do every day. ② They fail to memorize the new characters. 第三步:合并句子 1. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.
1). I was addicted to online games. And I was even absent from school. so that I • I was ___addicted to online games____ was even absent from school. So addicted to online games was I that I was even absent from school. 2). She might try. She couldn't get the door open. Although she might try, she couldn't get the door open. Try as she might, she couldn't get the door open.
3.点击高考状语从句中的省略Ellipsis 1. Don’t speak until spoken to . (you are)
2. He was a swimmer when a child. (he was)
3.She stood at the gate as if waiting for (she was) someone. 4. I’ll buy a TV set if necessary. ( it is)
I will never marry you.
高考:Never will I marry you. 四级:You are the last man I am willing to marry. 六级:Under no circumstances will I marry you. GRE: If you were the last man in the world, I would definitely remain single.
If the dream is big enough, the facts don't count.
如果梦想远大,就一定可以克服艰难险阻。
Dear John, Adverbial Clause It’s a pity that I have to say sorry to you ! It was not until ____ I read your letter that I knew y me , for we haven’t seen each other since _____ we parted . Now _________ that we are all busy, I just have to drop a few lines to you. The fact that you’re not good at English disappoints me , although you love me. To tell you the truth , I can’t stand anyone who cannot speak English well. So _________happens, I’m whatever as time glad to have met you, and in fact, _____ goes by, you’ll gradually forget me . Best wishes a dear John letter Alice (绝交信)
4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换
4.I won’t believe what he says. (no matter what状语从句) No matter what he says, I won’t believe. 5.When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the more…the more) The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.
写作技能提升:句子润色 How to beautify the Adverbial Clause in Writing
While writing ,try to use different forms of verbs and clauses(从句) to make your essay simple, clear, vivid and full of varieties.
2. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters. 3. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.
2012广东高考基础写作 你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。 【写作内容】 请根据以下信息,介绍一位传奇人物 姓 名:Allan Stewart 国 籍:澳大利亚 出生日期:1915年3月7日 世界纪录:2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大 学习态度:挑战自我,永远为时不晚。 第一个学位:1936年获得 第二个学位:医学博士 第三个学位:80多岁时决定学习法律,2006年获得硕士学 位。 第四个学位: 2012年通过网络学习获得,善于合理安排学 Because he was good at arranging his 习时间,受到老师表扬。 study time, he got praise from his teacher
eful proverbs:
1. 有志者事竟成。 Where there’s a will, there’s a way. 2. 读万卷书不如行万里路 A million miles is better than a million books 3. 入乡随俗. When in Rome do as the Romans do. 4. 万事开头难 All things are difficult before they are easy. 5. 只要不灰心,就一定能成功. As long as you don’t lose heart, you’ll succeed.
Harvard and Yale. 2.图书的相关报道
Highlights of Adverbial Clause while writing
1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换 2.高考状语从句中的倒装 3.高考状语从句中的省略
4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换
5.Some proverbs :
1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换
请试试改写下面的句子吧!
When I think of the trip to Shanghai , I’m impressed most with Mr. Rui. He is my oral English teacher. (2012广东
高考读写任务)
(改后) Thinking of the trip to Shanghai , I’m impressed most with Mr. Rui, my oral English teacher.