第七届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登复赛试题：Directions:With the development of computers, more and more people are working with computers. But, we know that computers are harmful as well as useful and helpful .Here, you are asked to write an essay on the topic “The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers”. You can give some examples and facts to support your opinion. Your essay should be written in English with no less than 300 words within 60 minutes.The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers李彦妮辽宁市鞍山市第一中学10届14班Nowadays, the idea of progress loorns so large in the modern world, and the progress of a particular kind is actually taking place around us. In this circumstances, computers which have a great help come out with the wisdom and hard-working of human beings. It do have given human a tremendous help, it, however, has brought to us its harmness at the some time.The computers can make a great help for us in this high speed society. In the light of this statement, it is computers that can store documents for us which is essential for us, it is computers that can shorten the time in seeking useful information instead of looking for knowledge from a large sums of books and it is computers that can make it possible to comunicate with different people who are far away from you. In a word, we can't live nomally without computers in such a high-tech society.On the contary, having helped us a lot, computers are harmful to people at the same time, especially the adolescents. First of all, sitting in front of the computer may do harm to our eyes. On the other hand, computers not only bring us useful information but also entertainments. Being weak in controlling themselves, those poor adolescents are more easier to get crazy about the fantasy world. Seeing a vivid picture which is about a son who gets stuck in computers and phones to his parents downstairs to bring dinner for him. I realized deeply that the computers really have their disadvantages.According to the statements above, it can not be superficial to simply say that computers are good or bad for us as every coin has both sides. Personally, I still consider that a computer can bring us convinience and high speed which is extolled to all the people even though it is a two-edged weapon. We can learn well punctuated by those purchasable wells of wisdom - computers.专家建议：本文个别语言使用不够地道并且偶尔出现句子表意不明的情况，因此建议该考生在平时的学习中尽量多阅读原汁原味的英语 (论坛) 文章，有意识地积累地道的英语表达，不断提高语言运用能力。
专家点评：本篇文章段落结构基本清晰，第一段交代文章主题，第二段主要说明计算机的优势，第三段罗列计算机给人们带来的害处，最后一段是对文章的总结和作者个人看法，整篇文章思路比较清晰。
文章用词较为准确，也出现了不少词组及句型，语法多样性也有所体现。
能看出这绝对是高中生中佼佼者完成的文章。
不足之处在于有个别语言点不够地道，希望以后能进一步雕琢语言，使写作水平进一步提升。
第八届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登第九届创新英语大赛口语试题题目（选编）作者：佚名大赛辅导来源：本站原创点击数：11858 更新时间：2010-12-28 A组1.What do you always do to realize a low carbon society（低碳社会）?2.How do you think of this competition? Give us some suggestions.3.Some people are always pursuing famous brands（品牌）nowadays.What do you think?4.Do you think watching TV too much is a waste of time? why？B组1.If you can, will you consider about going abroad to study after you graduate from high school? Why?2.What do you think of programs such as SUPER VOICE GIRL & HAPPY BOY?3.The world cup brings passion to the whole world. What’s your opinion on China’s not capableof attending such a splendid event（精彩赛事）?4.Do you participate in this contest voluntarily （自愿地）or somebody forced you to do so? What do you think of this contest？C组1.Have you considered being a teacher in the future? If you were one of your teachers, whatwill you do to make your students better?2.Talk about the most unforgettable match you watched or even experienced.3.Do you think participating in English speaking contests is a good way to improve your English? In your opinion, what is the best way?4.Do you think there is a generation gap between you and your parents？Why do you think so？D组1.What do you do to improve your oral English in your daily study?2.Who’s your favorite star? Why?3.Do you enjoy traveling? Why?4.Do you remember your parents’ birthday? How do you celebrate？E组1.What do your family do to save water and electricity2.Do you think health is more important than money? Why?3.Imagine that you are going to Canada to study for a whole year, what do you expect to learn there? Any plan?4.Which song do you like best? Why?题目：Directions:Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes. Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness.In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention. Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion.Come and join us in volunteer work right now!江苏省张家港市第三中学高三18班Dear grandfather:How are you?I am writing to invite you to join us, in the next year, to be a voluntear in the great event, which is to hold in Shanghai. We, a generation born in the 90s in our city, have made a team to do the volunteer work. And you are welcomed by all our team members awing to your great amount of knowledge about Chinese traditions and culture. Please don't tell me you are too old to do this job. I believe you are sure to accept my invitation after reading my following explannation of the importance of the volunteer work.Nowadays, volunteer work, which has raised public interest and concern, is becomming more and more popular throughout the world. As is known to all, volunteer work is not only meaningful but also necessary. One my personal wete, what's more, it's interesting and pleasant! It help us develop oursel .Firstly, for individuals, especially those young, to do volunteer work is an awailuabe wany to goin social experience. By doing volunteer work, they can meet vorrious people and they may run across all kinds of troubles. They however, can become mature and determined by solving these problems. You know, no pains, no gains. Also, individuals will realize that they do make a difference in someone else's life, even the whole event, the world! Their confidence can be rovised and confidence is what it takes to do any job well.For families, if you're the side that received the help of the volunteers, of couse your issue will be more easily dealt with. If you're the side who give others your hand, you will realize there exists no better way to educate your children that “a virtwre deserues amother” because you'll get the best present - smile deeply from one's heart, in the whole world.It is a great chance for all members getting closer to each other in communities by taking part in volunteer work. Their team spirits, their co-operation will be great improued. So, why not?The most importantly, for the whole world, for the entire human race, volunteer work will make earth a better place to live in, it is through volunteer work that we know there are so many people are willing to help others although they can't get money from it. It is through volunteer work that we know we are all brothers and sisters, that we are all families.My dear grandfather, canre on! Join us and help introduce owr great Chinese culture to the world. 21 centuring is on open cewtury. You can trust yourself and please trust us, too! We'll help you and we need you help! Let's make the world a better place by being a volunteer! It's a small step for us but it is a leurge one for the whole world!Love you.Your granddaught.专家建议：句子之间的衔接做的还不是很到位，建议多练练关联词的用法。