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高考英语作文写作指导—物品介绍

物品介绍【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。

它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。

但是,过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。

请你以鼠标为切入点,根据下表所提示的信息,用英语写一篇短文。

鼠标的必要性对多数人来说,操作计算机,上网冲浪……鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……编辑文本,搜索信息……收发邮件,选购商品……点播音乐,下载电影……如果过分依赖鼠标…… (请考生结合自身感受,列举两到三点)注意:1.对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2.词数150左右。

开头已经写好,不计人总词数。

3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.__________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________.分析指导:文体信息该试题体裁为说明文。

说明文是以说明为主要表达方式,介绍事物的形状、构造、性质、变化、类别、状态、功能、成因、结果等特征的文章。

说明文是一种应用性很强的文体,说明文的目的是让读者有所知,给读者提供知识,使之了解客观世界,掌握解决问题的方法。

说明文的基本特点就是具有知识性、科学性、应用性、解说性和条理性。

说明文各类繁多,该试题要求对人们日常生活中常见的事物(鼠标)进行介绍,主要介绍它的功能及不利影响。

写作关键(1)审题,确定主题句、主要时态以及人称。

说明文的时态常用一般现在时,同时常用被动语态;说明文语言比较客观,一般用用第一称写作。

(2)本文为提纲式说明文体裁,考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述,适度发挥,在主题句后按提示顺序将各要点以完整的句子表达出来即可,但最好不要逐条翻译。

(3)写说明文必须注意事实正确,表达清晰,条理清楚,层次分明,语言简练和用词准确。

特别注意适当用过渡词将上下文的逻辑关系体现出来。

(4)常用的说明方法有罗列法(listing)、举例法(examples)、比较法(comparison and contrast)、定义法(definition)、顺序法(sequence of time,space and process)以及分类法(classification)等,做试题时要注意正确说明方法,根据表格信息最好举例法和罗列法结合使用。

谋篇布局该作文从结构上看大致可分为三个段落:(1)第一段,文章的引言,提出文章的主题,该部分在试题中已给出。

(2)第二段是文章的主体,鼠标的有利面,即人们在日常生活中使用鼠标的必要性与重要性。

该部分先指出说明主题句,然后使用举例法和罗列法对鼠标的必要性与重要性进行展开说明。

(3)第三段是结尾段,过分依赖鼠标的不利影响进行举例说明。

同样首先开始时提出需要说明的东西和观点,然后常用first, second, …and finally加以罗列说明。

写作模板(物品介绍)Sth (digital camera, car audio, jewelry, or scanner etc.) is _____. It’s produced in _____, by _____ (factory, company, corporation), which ______ (sth about the producer). It is/looks _______ in color. It’s ______ in length/width/height/weight etc. What's more, It can be used for/as_____. As for the price, ______. In a word, _______(general idea about the object).写作提示(1) 鼠标的便捷性:操作计算机(operate a computer),上网冲浪(surf the Internet)。

(2) 鼠标的便捷性:点击(clicking)、移动(moving)、插入(inserting)、拷贝(copying)、删除(deleting),编辑(edit),浏览(browse),网购(shop online),下载(download)。

(3) 过分依赖鼠标的不利影响(negative/ positive)。

经典句型1. My lost suitcase look s silver in colour and it’s is about 80cm x 60cm x 40cm.2. As for the price, it is surprisingly low. It costs only 70% of that of the same kind of other laptops.3. The pulp bamboo gives can be used for different purposes, for example, you can use it as bio-fuel to produce electricity and for paper production.4. The bag is small in size and light in weight, so you'll feet it very convenient and easy to use.5. The camera attracts people by its modern and various models.6. The purse enjoys a good fame for its high quality.7. The volume of this container is 28 cubic centimetre.8. It is as accurate a watch as one made in Switzerland.9. This kind of Digital Camera is a newcomer in the camera family.10. My box is easy to recognize. It is light red and looks square.11. It’s a small leather case with a broken handle on it, in which there are some personal belongings.12. This cloth is 2.5 metres in width and 35 metres in length.13. It’s half a metre (20 inches) wide by two metres long - the size of a small dining table.范文点评文章要点完整,作者将表格中所提供的信息进行了有效的整合,思路清楚,表达严谨,语言流畅,句式表达多样,用词恰当、准确。

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer①.For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse②, let alone③surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen④. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying⑤, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can also help us email people, shop online and find friends around the world ⑥. A simple click can even bring us a flood of⑦music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way⑧. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically⑨. ①过去分词短语做定语,修饰device。

②正确表达鼠标的必要性;从语言结构上看,it作形式主语,丰富句子结构。

③let alone“更不必说”,高级词汇。

④主题句,指出鼠标的便捷性。

⑤列举鼠标的功能,读起来朗朗上口。

⑥用两组平行结构具体表达鼠标在日常生活中的作用。

⑦a flood of“大量的”,用词独特,充分显示作者对语言的运用能力。

⑧承上启下,下文结合自身感受,说明不能过分依赖鼠标。

⑨高级词汇且有韵味,彰显作者语言功底。

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特点:1. 外国人学习汉语的口语课程,非常适合初学者。

2. 书中有40个单元,其中的8个为复习单元。

每个单元包括句子、对话、新词汇、语法、解释和练习六个主要部分。

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