学案(四)申请信
[题型技法] (学一学)
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。
写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便留下好印象,获得面谈的机会。
由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点,并要注意人称和时态的变化,避免出现逻辑混乱。
[经典考题] (悟一悟)
[典例](2015·陕西高考)假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。
请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate.If you are interested, *********************************************************************************.
写作要点:
1.表达写信意图;
2.陈述应征目的;
3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
写作要求:
1.邮件词数不少于100;
2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;
3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua [满分范文]
Dear Ms Chen,
①I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3. ②I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
③As a student, it is my responsibility to contribute to my school. ④Admittedly, volunteering is a good method, which is beneficial to not only the school’s construction, but also the individual’s development.
⑤Since here comes an opportunity and I have enough time for dedication, I’d like to take the position.
⑥Considering my personal conditions, I confidently think I am capable of the position. ⑦First, I have industriousness and endurance, which are necessary qualities for volunteering. ⑧In addition, I am outgoing and easy to cooperate with, so I can coordinate well facing emergencies. ⑨Last but not least, I specialize in English and it will be useful while working.
⑩Looking forward to your reply!
Yours truly,
Li Hua [阅卷评点]
③此句中,“it is+n.+to do”句型的正确使用体现了作者扎实的英语功底。
④Admittedly的正确使用着实体现了作者深厚的词汇积累,which引导的非限制性定语从句,“not only ...but also ...”的使用为文章锦上添花。
⑤此句运用了倒装句,以here开头用完全倒装结构,属于高级表达。
⑥现在分词“Considering sth.”作状语,接着在think后面接一个宾语从句,使得句子更加复杂化,更加高级,体现了作者驾驭语言的能力。
⑦industriousness, endurance这两个词用得非常地道,这样的高级表达是文章表达细微处的一个亮点。
⑨Last but not least, specialize in的地道运用,以及while working这个省略句的正确使用使得句子更加地道和专业。
[增分佳句] (背一背)
1.开头部分常用语:
(1)I’m writing to apply for the position of ...
我写信申请……的职位。
(2)I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for ...
我认为我是……的合格人选,所以我写信推荐自己。
(3)I am interested in ...and wish to enter this significant program.
我对……感兴趣,希望加入到这个重要项目中。
(4)I learned on your website that ...
我从你们的网站上得知……
2.表达个人优点常用语:
(1)I won the first prize in ... competition.
我获得了……比赛的一等奖。
(2)As an outgoing ... I get along well with my classmates.
作为一名外向的……我和同学们相处得很好。
(3)For one thing, I can help ... For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my school life.
一方面,我能帮助……另一方面,我能提高我的英语水平,结交更多的朋友,丰富我的学校生活。
3.结尾部分常用语:
(1)If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at ...
如果你们认为我适合这份工作,请致电……
(2)I will be grateful/I’d appreciate it if you could ...
如果你能……我将感激不尽。
(3)Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
谢谢你考虑我的申请,期待与你见面。
[热点押题] (练一练)
假定你是李华,是一名高三学生。
最近,你校将接待一批来自美国的交换生,学校现在征集寄宿家庭。
请根据下面的写作提纲,写一封申请信。
内容包括:
1.个人情况(年龄、性别、性格和爱好);
2.英语水平;
3.家庭条件;
4.相关经历。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
参考范文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, an 18-year-old girl from Senior Three. I hear some American students are coming to study in our school for two weeks. I am writing to apply for the opportunity to become a host family.
The following are our advantages. First, I’m open-minded and like to make new friends. Second, my parents speak English so fluently that they have no difficulty communicating with native speakers. Third, we have a large apartment where there is an extra room for a guest. More importantly, last month we received two American students, through which we gained a lot of experience.
I think it is a chance to improve my English and learn about new culture. Please give us a chance. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua。