英语四级记叙文写作记叙文写作策略(Strategies for Narration Writing)1.记叙文的6大要素(时间、地点、人物、事件、原因、结果)要交代清楚。
同时要把握好各个要素和中心思想的关系。
2.确定叙述的人称:选择合适的人称为主题服务。
如果要叙述细腻的人物内心活动、丰富的思想感情,选用第一人称的叙述方式比较合适;如果叙述需要比较广阔的发挥空间,那么,用第三人称就可以真实、客观地完成全过程的叙述。
3.确定叙述的内容:首先确立中心思想。
然后,根据中心思想选择材料,从具体材料中提炼出中心来。
4.确定叙述的方式:叙述的结构要合理安排,情节要合理安排。
叙述方式有顺叙、倒叙和插叙。
其中,最常用的叙述方式是按照时间顺序,事情发生、发展的顺序进行叙述。
这种顺叙的方式在英文写作中最常见。
5.选用合适的时态叙述:例如,事情发生在过去的过去,就用过去完成时叙述。
一般按时间顺序发生的事,用一般过去时。
根据具体情况,还可以用到过去进行时和过去将来时。
三个步骤:第一段、总结描述:交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点:主题句第二段、具体描述:具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果:起因+经过+结果第三段、对事件的分析:分析句1+分析句2+分析3模板范文一Honor for My Teacher题目要求:1)向老师致以节日祝贺2)从一件难忘的事回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献3)我如何报答老师的关爱The once per year’s Day will come soon, which is a quite important day and deserves attention from the whole society. There is no more appropriate time than this for us students to express our special recognition and respect to all our teachers. So on this special occasion, I want to show my esteem and thanks to my dearest teacher, Mr. Wang for all the work he has done for me.Now I still remember clearly one lesson on cheating he gave me.It happened on the end of one term, when we were having an exam. I was copying answers from one of my classmates. Just at the moment, Mr. Wang came in and found my cheating behavior. It impressed me most that he did not criticize me but talked about the importance of honesty and emphasized that dishonest behavior is very harmful even if it was not an exam.Every time I remind this and all other work he has done for me,I feel that I should return his great love with my achievements. Iwill study hard to become a real talent. Furthermore, I will devotemyself to the development of our country as he does. In conclusion, the enlightenment he gave me will always encourage me in mywhole life.首段:描述背景主题句:交代背景事件及其重要性或意义扩展句:阐述如何对待和应对该事件。
结尾句:表明“我”的态度,引出主题事件(1)主题句:交代事件的背景(背景事件)The once per year’s Day will come soon, which is a quite important day and deservesattention from the whole society. (2)扩展句:如何对待和应对该事件There is no more appropriate time than this for us students toexpress our special recognition and respect to all our teachers. (3)结尾句:表明“我”的态度,引出主题事件So on this specialoccasion, I want to show my esteem and thanks to my dearest teacher, Mr. Wang for all the work he has done for me.中间段:描述事件主题句:引出具体事件扩展句:具体描述事件发生的经过(4)主题句:引出具体事件Now I still remember clearly onelesson on cheating he gave me. (5)扩展句一:事件的开始Ithappened on the end of one term, when we were having an exam. (6)扩展句三:事件的进展一I was copying answers from one of my classmates. (7)扩展句二:事件的进展二Just at the moment, Mr.Wang came in and found my cheating behavior. (8)扩展句三:事件的突出表现一It impressed me most that he did not criticize me but talked about the importance of honesty and emphasized thatdishonest behavior is very harmful even if it was nor an exam.末段:总结观点主题句:承上启下,引出“我”的感受或得到的启示扩展句:表明“我”的感受或将采取的行动。
结尾句:总结全文(9)主题句:承上启下,引出“我”的感受或得到的启示Every time I remind this and all other work he has done for me, I feel that I should return his great love with my achievements. (10)扩展句一:行动一I will study hard to become a real talent. (11)扩展句二:行动二Furthermore, I will devote myself to the development of ourcountry as he does. (12)结尾句:总结全文In conclusion, the enlightenment he gave me will always encourage me in y whole life.模板范文二An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident(2003年6月)假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸,就此写一份见证书。
见证书须包括以下几点:1)车祸发生的时间及地点2)你所见到的车祸情况3)你对车祸原因的分析首段:描述背景引言句:简要介绍“我”的情况(姓名、职业等)。
主题句:简要交代事件发生的时间,引出下文对事件的具体描述。
[1] 引言句:“我”的情况My name is Li Ming,an English major from Peking University. [2] 主题句:交代事件A week ago, I saw a traffic accident on a rainy day, which still sticks in my mind.中间段:描述事件扩展句:具体描述事件发生的经过及结果[3]扩展句一:事件的开始It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th. [4]扩展句一:“我”当时的状态及事件的进展I was talking to my friends on the sidewalk near our university when I heard a sudden noise of clash of metal on metal. [5]扩展句二:事件进展It happened just at the crossing nearby. [6] A motorbike was hit by a taxi. [7]扩展句:事件结果I went up and found that the motorbike was badly damaged. [9] The driver was groaning on the ground, blooding. The street turned chaotic.末段:总结观点主题句:承上启下,引出“我”对事件原因的分析扩展句:分析事件发生的原因。
结尾句:总结全文,呼吁采取必要的方法或措施来避免或增加类似的事件。
[10] 主题句:承上启下,引出“我”对事件原因的分析Many factors contributed to this traffic accident.[11] 扩展句:分析事件发生的原因From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the motorcyclist failed to see the car coming from behind a truck. [12] On the other hand, the taxi driver was driving too fast on such a rainy day. [13] 结尾句:总结全文,呼吁采取必要的方法或措施来避免或增加类似的事件Anyway, I believe accidents may be reduced or avoided if everyone drives slowly.大学英语应用文写作第一部分:书信体写作书信文体的一般布局:开头(一般第一段):开门见山,表明写信目的。