上海英语历年一二模考试作文赏析2013届上海英语一模徐汇区试题：假设你叫李华，你的同班同学小明觉得自己的手机太旧，想买个最新的iPhone 5，可是他的父母不同意，为此他很苦恼。

请你给他写封信，谈谈你的看法。

注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

Composition AAs for Xiao Ming’s behavior, I think it is really silly for him to ask for a mobile pho ne like iPhone 5. It is even sillier to be upset for his parents’ turning down.As far as I’m concerned, students’ top priority should always be studying. He/she should always focus the attention on the study rather than thinking about playing or following the trend.5What’s more, it is mentioned that Xiao Ming wanted to change his mobile phone simply because hethinks that his mobile phone is out-of-date, which, in my humble opinion, thinks his behavior nothing butridiculous. Even if we are rich now, never can we forget to be economical in reality. Since it’s not broken or outof order, there is no need to change.(128 words) Composition BDear Xiao Ming,I’ve heard that you are suffering from your parents’ not allowing you to buy the iPhone 5. A s your classmate, I felt a pity that you’re struggling to get your dream realized. But, at the same time, I really don’tthink buying iPhone 5 is such a good option, especially for you.5 You know, youngsters of your age are all using iPhone 5 now. It has already become the mainstream. Do you thinkusing iPhone 5 is really innovative? Definitely not! As the new generation, we need to develop our own ideasinstead of following others’ steps. What’s more, since your parents disapprove of your buying iPhone 5, whynot trying other brands? In my opinion, other brands are far better than simply iPhone 5.10 If you have more questions about choosing mobile phone, feel free to contact me via email. I’ll be more thanwilling to pull you out of your misery.Yours sincerely, ZhangLin-lin(160 words) Composition CDear Xiao Ming,It is said that your parents don’t allow you to buy the iPhone 5 in place of your old cell phone. And you are upset simply because it. As for me, I think that is quite understandable.Young kids like us are always trend-followers. Thus, we should definitely feel free to buy5anything we want. I think your parents may be quite old-fashioned, or even too conservative for not allowing you to buy a new cell phone. We’re in the age of doing s o. They should give us more freedom instead of more restriction.Thus, in my opinion, you need to stick to your goal in order to survive the battle with your parents. Be courageous to follow your dreams no matter what obstacles you meet with along the10way, as long as these dreams are not off limit. I will be your great back-up and I’m willing to be a persuader.Be free to contact if your parents are still stubborn.Yours sincerely,Li Hua(169 words) Composition DDear Xiao Ming:I’ve heard you’re not happy as your parents disapprove of your behavior of buying a new cell phone. Although I can understand how you feel right now, I must point out that you need to listento your parents’ words.You know, your parents are senior to us not only in age but also in experience. They do haveevery reason to prevent you from buying iPhone 5. What’s more, we children are still not employed. In other words, we did not contribute anything to the family. But we are asking this andthat and become annoyed if our wish is not fulfilled by the parents. We need to think in our parents’ shoes.As your classmate, I’m not against your dream. But what I’m trying to express is that you canwork hard and make big progress in your study so that your parents are more than willing to buyyou a iPhone 5 simply as a reward in which both you and your parents are satisfied, which, I think,turns out to be a far happier ending than the present one.Yours,Li Hua(186 words) Composition EMing:I know y ou’re having some quarrel with your parents and I understand that you really wantthe brand-new iPhone 5. However, while I do respect your own feelings, I can’t 100% agree withwhat you’re doing.After all, we are nothing but kids. Thus, first thing we should do is not purchasing butstudying. Before we demand parents to buy anything for us, we need to first succeed in doing ourown job in a serious and good way.Thus, before you demand anything from your parents, we need to produce products that satisfy them. So, I recommend first make progress in study then ask for things. Don’t make that too much expensive. Otherwise, your parents won’t have enough money to buy it.Good luck!Lee(127 words)。