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广东高考英语作文任务型写作专题--主题句1
贯 穿 主 题
supporting sentence
Task 1: Write the topic sentence according to the main point .
主题句可以是一个词、一个短句,也可能是一个 完整的句子。主题句就好比是全段的纲。只有写 好了主题句,才可能做到“纲举目张”,写好全 段文章。全篇各段中的主题句,相互之间又存在 一定的逻辑关系。关于主题句的位置, 建议将 主题句放在各段的开头, 这样安排, 既可以避 免考生在写作时跑题或遗漏要点, 又方便阅卷 老师落实要点是否齐全。
3. 总述原因。 用主题句指出 “有几种原因” “原因如下” 或“原因显 而易见”, 等等。 如 : There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. 常用的句型有: There are several reasons that contribute to ... My views are based on the following reasons. The reason for this is obvious. The reason why ... is that ... Reasons for this are varied.
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(9) we must take some effective measures to solve it ( 10) we should find some effective ways to make ourselves happy (11) The story reminds me of a story of my neighbor’s son. (12) remind me of my own experience one year ago when I entered an English speaking competition.
---- How to make your composition informative.
Steps:
(5) There are several reasons supporting my view. (6) is based on the following reasons (7) I am not in favor of encouraging kids with cash just because they have got good marks ( 8) I firmly support the requirement that students should wear school uniform on the campus.
2. 重述要点。 这类主题句并不直接回答要点的提问,而是翻译要点作为 段落的主题句,例如,要点是“谈谈……的重要性”,主 题句则为“……有重要作用”,要点是“谈谈……有何重 要意义”,主题句可直接说“……很有意义”等。 [例 3] 要点为 “ 从以上的故事中你认为‘在生活中谅 解他人有何意义’ ” , 主题句可以这样写: From the story I learn that understanding and forgiving others plays an important role in our life.
(9) 应该采取措施解决住房问题。 The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious. Therefore,
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(10) 如何才能忘却悲伤或获得快乐? Since life is unlikely to be smooth, [引出经历] (11) 这个故事使我想起了邻居儿子的故事。 。 (12) 简述生活中让你抱怨的一次经历。 The stories above (使我想起了自己一年前参加英语演讲比赛的经 历)
(1) 你得知菲尔普斯吸食毒品后的感受是什么?
回答要点型
(2) 你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质。
回答要点型
(3) 请谈谈你是如何理解梦想在人生中所起的作用。
重述要点
Nobody will deny that
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(4)简述学生之间存在竞争的利弊 (2010 深圳五校联考) In my opinion, .
表示反对或不赞同的句型 表明观点 I disapprove of the idea… I disagree with the idea… I am opposed to the idea that… In some way, I agree with…, rove of the idea that… I agree with the statement that … I am in favor of… I’m convinced that… I can’t agree more with what the writer said/says
总结近年广东高考 真题和各地模拟题, 主题句式可归纳为 如下几种:
1. 回答要点。 写作要点是询问考生的做法时, 用对提问作出明确回 答的句子作为主题句。 [例 1] 假设你当时就在事故现场, 你是伸出援助 之手还是袖手旁观? (2010 茂名二模) If I had happened to be present at the scene, I would have come to his help and sent him to the nearest hospital or dial 120 for help.
[总述原因] (5) As far as I’m concerned, I agree with the latter. (有几种原因支持我的观 点) (6)My support for tearing down the old library (基于下列原 因) . [表明观点] (7) 你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法 (2010 年 广东高考)。 From where I stand, . (8) 你认为是否应该穿校 。
1. 回答要点。 写作要点是询问考生的做法时, 用对提问作出明确回 答的句子作为主题句。 [例 2] 假如你处在那些动物的处境, 你会有什么 反应? (2009 年广东高考) If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing me.
[例 4] (2010 年高考读写任务要点 2) 你的父母(或其他亲 (暗含对你的人生有何重要意义) 人) 是如何鼓励你学习的? 可以这样写主题句: My parents used to encourage me like this. 本句并没有直接回答要点 , 只是重复了 要点, 具体回答则将通过其后的拓展句体现出来。 说明必要、 重要或意义的相关表达有: It is important /significant for sb. to do sth. sth. is of great importance/significance to sb. sth. is playing an increasingly important role in our life. People attach great importance/significance/value to ... The significance of ... cannot be overvalued.
4. 表明观点。 明确表示对某观点支持、 赞同或反对、 不赞同。
[例 5] (2009 年高考) 你认为是否应该禁止游客 和动物拍照。
主题句表明观点: I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned. 或: I don’t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animal.
5. 引出建议、 方法、 措施、 步骤等。 [例 6] 说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施: Luckily, more and more people begin to appreciate the situation and measures are being taken to protect the environment.
---- HOW TO WRITE THE TOPIC SENTENCE
读写任务中的主题句模式种种
(1)标题 (有时不一定要求拟标题)
贯 正文不能只写一段,一段式 (2)summary :用一两句话概括所给短文内容要点, 穿 约30词。 作文是拿不了高分的! 主 (3)正文: 题 按照“写作内容”所列要点的顺序
提出建议
We should take some effective measures… In order to ..., effective means should be taken to… We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties. We should solve the problems that we are faced with. It is necessary that proper actions/steps should be taken to end the phenomenon.
6. 引出经历。这种主题句用来引出记叙。 [例 7] (2010 茂名一模) 简述你经历过的一次困难或考验。 It reminds me of my own experience when I joined in the military training after I entered senior high school.
引出建议