2004年-2009年高考英语满分作文及名师评析2009高考英语满分作文【全国卷I海南、宁夏】【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。
今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：1.外出购物2.替房东还书3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消2)此事已告知Susan3) 尽快回电注意：1. 词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t mee t you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.Yours,Li Hua[名师点评]本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。
行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。
提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。
在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。
【江苏卷】【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。
它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。
但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。
请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。
鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……编辑文本，搜索信息……收发邮件，选购商品……点播音乐，下载电影……如果过分依赖鼠标…… (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。
开头已经写好，不计人总词数。
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in findingtruth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.【名师点评】本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。
文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确。
不失为一篇满分作文。
2008高考英语满分作文【全国卷】【试题回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。
现在苏琳即将三岁。
请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：1、自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、感谢工作人员;4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。
例文：Dear Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthdayω Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly,Li Hua【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。
这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。
文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。
长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。
积累卡片英汉互译好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。
评析：定语从句的使用。
【江苏卷】【试题回放】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。
请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。
为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，……老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，……同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，……怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。
)注意：1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2、词数150左右。
开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone.Th e topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!【名师点评】这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。