中考英语作文写作指导
写作步骤:
1 审题 2 选材 3 列提纲 4 写作 5 复查
第一步 审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。如果审 不清主题,就有可能出现“下笔千言,离题万里” 的情况。
在审清主题的基础上,还需注意要审清文体。 审题不准, 丢要点, 失分惨重。
例1: A special gift I’m looking forward to
Para4: (总结)As a student, make good use of it.
例2:计划安排型作文——谈假期安排
Para1: (综述)holiday is coming, plan for this holiday
Para2: (正文)Firstly, study comes first. make preparations for the grade 9; Secondly, visit tourist attractions; Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.
Make a topic sentence.
1. smoking
As we all know, smoking is a bad habit.
Many students say smoking is fun, but I don’t think so. As everybody knows, smoking is bad for our health.
例3:学校的 “English center” 是同学们练习英语的 场所。这里的 “teenager hotline” 每天都能收不到 不少同学的咨询电话。作为热线的一名志愿者,请 你根据当时的记录,首先描述两位同学遇到的问题, 然后给一位同学提出具体建议并说明原因。
•主要内容:问题、建议、原因 •限制:描述两位同学的问题,给一位同学提建议 •关键词:problem、suggestion、reason
Middle 正文 Ending 结尾
supporting sentences支持句 用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、 讨论。
concluding sentence 结论句 对全文的总结和概括。
例1:利弊型作文——Microblog的利与弊
Para1: (综述)with the development of internet… more and more popular…
Para2: (利)First, convenient, anywhere, any time; Second, share… with…; Last, express views free, money-free…
Para3: (弊)However, each coin has two sides. On the one hand, a waste of time; On the other hand, not safe——being hacked…
join a sports club
Friends fun
注意“四定”
1.定内容。 2.定时态。 记叙文、日记常用一般过去时; 说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时; 计划等用一般将来时。 3.定人称。 用第一人称亲近自然;用第三人称客观真实。 4.定句型、定词语。 应依据内容,先定句型后定词语。
Para3: (总结)I am sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday. (I’m looking forward to the coming holiday.) (I can’t wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)
第四步 写全文
写作时尽量做到一鼓作气,一气呵成。 写作时要注意语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。 书写时要多套用句型,多用短句。
强调这份“礼物”是“我所期待的”, 而非我已拥有的一份礼物。 如果匆忙动笔就容易将文章写成
“My favorite gift”.
例2: I want to do something for my school
I—— the first person——person want to —— the simple future tense —— Tense Something —— one thing —— Key words For my school —— purpose
2. The Spring Festival
I will never forget the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival plays an important part in our life. Many people say that Christmas is more popular than the Spring Festival. But I don’t think so.
第三步 列提纲
写文章之前列提纲可以使杂乱无章的材料变得 井然有序;列提纲可以使同学们的作文紧扣主题不 跑题。列提纲时不必过于详细,可以根据题目要求, 考虑你的文章分几段,或者分几个层次,每段的大 意是什么,计划好文章的整体结构。
英语记叙文的写作的方式
Beginning 开头
topic sentence 主题句 说出文中的要点、核心问题。
A Good beginning is half done.
开头常用句型:
1) ....plays an important part in the... 2) As we all know, ... becomes more and more.... 3) As everybody knows, ...is one of the most...in .... 4) Many people say that.... But I don’t think so. 5) I will never forget the ....
第二步 选材
Brainstorming
cannot focus
Problem
playing computer games
do dboadbaindsipnosrar exercise
something good at Confident keep