雅思写作-地图第一段:改写题目主要句式:图表名称+动词+描述主题+时间图表名称:The diagram/map/picture动词:show/illustrate/give information about/indicate描述主题:1. The development/change of 某地方。
2. How +某个地方+changed/developed. 3. The development/the change that has taken place +某个地方。
举例子:1.The maps show the development of Stokeford village over an 80 years period from 1930 to 2010.2.The diagrams illustrate some changes to a small island which has been developed for tourism.3.The two pictures compare the layout of a school as it was in the year 2004 with a proposed/planned/projected/expected site design for the year 2024.4.The diagrams show West Park Secondary School at three different stages in its development: 1950, 1980 and 2010.第二段:总结主要特征。
一般来说选取一两个最重大的变化特征。
或者从全局来看,描述最显著的变化。
同时还可以从地图功能的变化阐述其主要变化,比如说可以容纳更多学生,转变成居民区了,或者是旅游/娱乐设施完善了。
主要句式:1. It is clear that +某地方+has changed considerably with the construction of some new facilities.It is clear that the island has changed considerably with the introduction of tourism.2.数量+new features can be seen in the second diagram.Six new features can be seen in the second diagram.3. The main developments are that + 句子(描述一个或两个重大变化)The main developments are that the island is accessible and visitors have somewhere to stay.4. It is clear that the main change for+ 时间It is clear that the main change for 2024 involves the addition of a new school building.It is apparent from the pictures that the village has become increasingly populated over this time frame第三,四段细节描述(动词enlarge, widen, divide, replace, move, convert, relocate, demolish, renovate, extend , develop, modify)主要句式(下列句式中A,B 为建筑物)1. 位于be located/situated/sitedChorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to this original village area.A 位于B (城镇)的东方/西方/南方/北方A is/ lies/ is located/ is sited to/in the east/west/south/north part of B方位的表达和介词的搭配A be built/located to the east/north/south/west(southeast, southwest, northeast, northwest) of BA be built/located in the west/north/south/west part of BA be built/located to the left/right (hand side) of BA be built/located beside/next to/adjacent to/behind/in front of/ in the front of/ opposite to B2. 被建造be constructed/builtA motorway was built to the east of the villageA second car park will be built on the site of the original sports field3. 被改建成be turned to/converted toA large area behind the school was turned into a playgroundThe farmland has been converted to residential building.类似句式:The area+ 方位描述+be +建筑物The area behind the houses was farmland.4. 被拆除be demolished / dismantled / removedThe house had been demolished in order to make way for(腾出空间,让路)a small car park and an additional school building,5. 连接connect/linkThere is also a short road linking the pier with the reception and restaurant.类似表达Footpaths connect the huts6. 被分离be separated/divided1.The two school buildings were separated by a path running from the main entrance to the sports field.2.The original playground was divided into two.7. 保持不变No changes be made=remain unchanged1.No changes will be made to the main entrance and original car park.2. The school building remained unchanged8. 被扩大be extended/enlarged=increase in size1.The primary school opposite(opposite 做介词而非动词)the post office has been extended to include two new buildings2.The school has increased in size9. 被缩小be reduced in size/shrink(shrank, shrunk)9. 分叉split off/branch off1.Two new roads split off from the main road2. A new road to the south-west of the school braches off from the main road and extends out to the river.10. 道路两边的建筑描述1. Both new roads are accompanied by a small number of new houses on either side.2. A number of new properties were attached to the road heading south.11.道路的描述A railway line was built crossing this area from west to east.12.表现有建筑和规划建筑的改变(Proposed, current, future, existing, planned, it is expected that, at present, it is anticipated that, prospective)1.The current entrance to the gallery is on the right hand side of the building and visitors pass through a large lobby before entering the gallery itself. One of the proposed changes is to allow entrance on to the main exhibition area, where an existing entrance will be widened.2.At present, the exhibition rooms are divided into three separate areas. According to the plans, the dividing walls will be removed and one large exhibition space will be created.3. In addition, the gallery will gain an education center. This area will replace the existing lobby, which will also be enlarged to create a more functional space with large table and seating.4. To replace the current straight staircase, a new set of winding stairs will be installed in the corner of the living room.5. By 2024, it is expected that there will be 1000 pupils, and a third building will have been constructed.12. with 的用法(适用于高分学员)1.Two footpaths split off from the main road, with the eastern-facing road replacing old farmland. (先描述一个变化,用with接名词+现在分词(主动)或过去分词(被动)描述这一变化的详细内容)2. The farmland was converted to residential purpose, with a number of new houses attached to the road heading south.上课案例讲述和练习OG test3 Task1第一段:改写题目第二段:总结学校扩大了,停车场被建造和扩大了。