2015-6-6 Task 2 Anask 2 AnalysisSome people pople prefer to provide help and support directly to localocal community who need it. Others prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有⼈人喜欢直接帮助社区中需要帮助的⼈人。

也有些⼈人喜欢把钱投给国内或国际慈善组织。

讨论这两个观点并且表达你⾃自⼰己的想法。

1Topic 话题 Charity2Question type 题型Discuss35W ANALYZE THE QUESTION审题（WHO+what+when+where+why+how）WHO: peopleWHAT: do charityHow: direct support vs money donationWhere: local vs national & international4identify key words and their synonyms关键词理解support directly=direct involvementgive money to=donatecharitable organizations=charities5identify all the writing tasks确定全部写作任务1. some people prefer direct help2. others donate to non-profit organizations3. own opinionBrainstorming and organd organizing ideas 写作思路Direct support Donation to non-profit6Necessary: 必要性组织运作不当，造成损失: charity fraudsBenefits: 重要性积极参与：direct involvement及时⾼高效: concretely helping⽴立竿⻅见影: make a significant difference Necessary: 必要性有些问题单纯本地解决不了not easy to tackle at the local levelBenefits: 重要性资本有效运作：Meet more basic needs with fewer dollars 减税福利：tax benefits for helping globallySome people prefer to provide help and support directly to the local community who need it. Others prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Many people are faced with the dilemma in philanthropy that where their contributions will have the most impact. While some people have a preference for direct support to those in need, others believe that donating to non-profit charitable groups would be better.On the one hand, most people prefer direct involvement with services provided directly to people in need, especially in their own communities, because they can immediately make a significant difference in someone’s life such as food for the hungry, shelter for the homeless, and doctors for sick children. By contrast, giving to national or international non-profits or institutions might not help the people who need the aid most. The money might end up paying for the non-profit's organizational marketing or costs of operations. In the worst case, the donation might end up contributing to corruption or bribery in countries that lack stable governments and effective relief distribution programs.On the other hand, it is also believed that donating money to charitable groups with national or international focus is also essential, especially for those in developing countries. Indee d, a dollar contributed to international causes reaches much further when spent in developing countries. In some countries, 100 dollars can send a child to school for a whole year.Furthermore, some problems that charities confront are not easy to tackle at the local level. For example, some of the air pollution experienced in one area may be partly generated in another area and carried by prevailing winds, and to deal with such problems requires a regional or national approach.In conclus ion, we are not arguing that one way of helping people is better than another. When it comes to giving, different preferences benefit certain groups of people, and donors should balance their contributions to support both local and international causes.(299 words, band 9)Presented by songbinfeng @public wechat: yasilaozhongyiTasTask 2 discussdiscuss essay block by blockintroduce the topic It is true that.../People have different views about...1Introduction general response to thequestionWhile it is argued that..., others believe that...topic sentenceSome people argue that...ExplainIn other words, /This means that.../which means that..2ExampleFor example, A good example would be...expansion 1: if If ...did..., it would ....FORexpansion 2: by contrastBy contrast, those who did not... would ...topic sentenceThere are many reasons why some people believe that...Firstly,Firstly,...3ExampleFor example, for instance, such assecondly,furthermore,also Furthermore, ... can be another ..., In addition to that,AGAINSTaction+result+effectactions, and this experience made... As a result/therefore...4 Conclusion Your own opinionIn conclusion, although there are conflicting views about..., itseems to me that...。