1.经常运动会提高人的自信正确句子：Regular exercise can increase one’s self-confidence.我的句子：Excise动词原形不可以做主语要用名词性质的词exercising regularly can improve people's self-confidences ,,, confidence不可数increase: 及物动词/不及物动词及物动词：increase one’s confidence（宾语）不及物动词：the figure increases 数据的增加增长多出现在小作文里exercise：做动词时v. exercising regularly 此句型本局中做主语做名词时n. 既可以为可数/也可以为不可数（本句为不可数）主语：regular exercise doing exercise regularly增强自信心：boostincrease confidencebuildimproveExercise在表示健康运动时不可数所以这里应该是doing exercise副词usually修饰动词放在动词的后面表示通常表示频率通常表达为I usually do.. 改：Doing exercise regularly can improve people’s self-confidence.人们的信心：people’s self-confidence2.教学质量对学生成绩有很大影响正确句子:The quality of teaching can make a huge difference to students’ academic performance. 我的句子：The quality of teaching has a serious修饰不当influence of在...方面的影响用on students’academic performance.quality：品质, 可数N：例如leadership限定教学质量：the quality of teaching; teaching quality; standard of education注意:quantity 表示数量influence在...方面有影响：have an impact oneffect或者hugemake a big difference to...major学术成绩：academic performance; achievements; levels of attainmentgrade/ scores 指分数只有一种搭配have an influence/impact/effect on应该是academic achievements补充：对...有负面的/相反/好的的影响negativehave a damaging effect on ...oppositehave a beneficial effect on ... have a negative effect onbe beneficial to3.家长和老师应该努力去减少小孩看电视的时间正确句子：Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children’s screen time.我的句子：Patients and teachers should try to建议用词伙reduce the time of students’ watching TV中式表达不要直接翻译中文努力做…：make an effort to do 其中effort既可以为可数也可以为不可数也可以说make effortsmake every effortmake an effort to do sth限制看电视的时间：reduce one’s screen timelimit one’s screen time直译看电视的时间错误记住词或表达screen timeTry one’s best这种四六级的表达建议不要再写在雅思作文里定从错误应该是which children spend in watching TV，不过这样表达就很啰嗦4.经济的下滑导致失业率的上升正确句子：（The）Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate. 我的句子：Economic slowdown lead to the increase of unemployment rate. slowdown 是可数名词前面建议加the此句用完成时：has led to 完成时其中lead to的to是介词后面加名词现在完成时形式:have/has + done（截止到现在回头往前看这件事完成的结果如何用法:过去的之前，例句：When he got there, she had left. She was not there.现在全部完成：He has left.现成部分完成：We have studied English for ten yearsclimbing ：形容词修饰名词词组unemployment rate 也可以用increasing；rising 上升：climbing ，increasing ，raisingraise：使…上升举手：raise your hand抚养长大：you raise me upincrease 做名词时: increase in表示在...方面的增长increase of 表示所属关系... 的增长unemployment 为不可数Nfind/seek employment 找工作Rate 可数名词不要裸奔——unemployment rateLeads （lead-led-led）后面应该是unemployment rate5.经济的发展需要更年轻的劳动者正确句子：A country’s economic development relies on a supply of young workers. 我的句子：the development of economy need如果想用need 主谓也不一致new年轻的用new 我有点怕workers.经济增长：economic development ——不可数economic growth ——不可数劳动力的表达方式技术工人：skilled labourlabour force 劳动力年轻的劳动者labour 在表示劳动力时为不可数N work force ：为特定的行业工作=staffworker：可数名词需要年青的劳动者：不要直译need rely on:依靠；信赖；需要a large number of 大量的——后面加可数名词复数a large amount of+不可数名词——of 表示所属关系前后都是名词a supply of：一批——a supply of young workers.主谓不一致经济增长有词伙economic development/growth6. 工作很多的人没有时间去休息正确句子：People with a heavy workload do not have adequate times to rest and recharge batteries.我的句子：People who have heavy workload可数名词裸奔have no time to rest.中式表达do not have time to rest/take a restto rest: 动词不定式后置定语翻译为没有休息的时间work：不可数n工作可数n ：Works of literature 文学作品workload：可数名词——不要裸奔要么加不定冠词要么变复数have no time口语中可以使用——作文要用do not have timea heavy workload 工作很多rest：do not have time to resttake a rest；have a rest 这里的rest是名词Workload为可数N 不要裸奔然后have time to do sth7. 在中国，很多学生晚上都要上自习正确句子：A large number of students in china have to study at night.我的句子：In china there are many students have are和have两个动词这个句子5.5分to study不能体现自习do self-study 词伙at nighta large number ofmany+可数名词复数晚上：at night /in the evening自习：self-study；do self-study；self-educationthere be句型里已经存在be动词了后面的句子中不能有动词8.文化遗产因为城市的发展而受到威胁。
正确句子：（最佳）The development of cities has posed a threat to heritage sites. Because of the development of cities，the heritage sites are threatened。
我的句子：The development of cities has posed a threat of 固定的介词搭配是to heritage sites。
development是主语城市发展：urban expansion；the development of cities造成威胁：pose a threat toheritage sites：遗产地；古迹；主题文物建筑被动语态一般用于在找不到动作的发出者时现在完成时是have done 这里应该是has posed a threat to9. 我们不能够忽视面对面的交流。
正确句子：We should not ignore face-to-face communication。
我的句子：We can not大作文里只有一种写法：cannot ignore face-to-face communicationdoor-to-door /face-to-face 充当形容词，修饰名词door to door /face to face 副词修饰动词communication 为不可数N交流技能：communication skillsCommunication如果加s，communications——表示的是那些通讯科技，譬如说手机，电脑等——Modern communications忽视：neglectignore（故意忽视）大作文只用：cannotface to face副词不能修饰名词10.有些公共服务很难收支平衡。