2012 年广州二模东莞中学松山湖学校优秀作文基础写作优秀作文高三7班邹得骏13分As mayor, I will focus great attention on the sustainable development of our city. To begin with, I will make every effort to accelerate the progress of economy development, creating more chances of employment. When it comes to the public transportation, it’s necessary for me to improve it so as to make it more comfortable and convenient for citizens to go out. In terms of education, not only will I invest more money in improving the conditions of schools but also set up a great number of schools of good quality. More to the point, as a green life is advocated, more parks will be built and more trees planted in our city, adding more beauty to our daily life.高三6班麦敏仪13分As a responsible mayor, I will pay much attention to the sustainable development of our city. First of all, with all practical measures, I am going to take the lead to boost the economy, which will surely create more employment opportunities. As for public transportation, I promise to improve it to ensure citizens’going around conveniently andcomfortably. Besides, more money will be spent in making schools’conditions better and setting up more advanced schools as well. Eventually, in order to beautify our environment, I also plan to plant more trees, build more parks and advocate a green lifestyle in our city.读写任务优秀作文高三6班胡迪4+18分：Hoping to help their kids learn more, many parents choose micro-foreign study tours. But they’re expensive and not as helpful as expected, which leads to parents’ reconsideration about their value.I have to admit that I’m the supporter of the author’s point of view. Though micro-foreign study tours do have their benefits, I find that their value fails to equal their costs. Moreover, it may bring some harmful effects, too.I’ve never been on such a tour abroad, but I’ve received some ads about it. From the schedule of the tours, I found only a limited amount of time was to be spent on studying, while much more was devoted to sightseeing or shopping. Therefore, these trips are more a waste of time than a learning experience. In addition to the information I gain from ads, I’ve witnessed many friends of mine taking with them a large sum of money on their study tours. Just as what I had expected, they returnedwith bags of souvenirs rather than their deeper understanding of the foreign culture. If the micro-foreign study tours are really like that, I’d rather go on a trip myself which is much cheaper.My dreaming micro-foreign study tour must be meaningful and truly help with my self-improvement. I shall enjoy my learning experience in a historical foreign school. If possible, I prefer a life with a friendly host family.高三11班黄佩诗4+18分Nowadays, micro-foreign study tours are of great popularity for its possible benefits. However, these tours cost too much and have little impact on children’s study in reality, which leads to parents’second thoughts about the value of them.From my perspective, I consider it a waste of time participating in micro-foreign study tours. Undeniably, the tours may broaden our horizons to some extent, but what we can’t neglect is that most of the time will be spent in sightseeing, playing and shopping rather than studying, so these tours make little difference to the students indeed.I still well remember that one of my friends once took part in such a trip to the UK. She left China with the hope of improving her oral English and having a better understanding of the British culture. Nevertheless, she returned, exhausted and frustrated, complaining that the real study merelylasted for 4 days during the 14-day trip, and she was occupied in transforming buses going here and there, which nearly drove her mad. What an unpleasant experience!If given a chance to have a micro-foreign study tour, I will definitely not join the mini tour. Instead, I prefer to live with the local students, experiencing their real study and tasting their native culture during the tour. I believe a trip like this will truly improve my English and deepen my understanding of their profound culture.说明：以上学生作文由东莞中学松山湖学校高三备课组长王树伟老师提供。

东华高级中学广州二模优秀范文选;基础写作：312 班何栎14分As mayor, I will multiply every effort to steer my city on a path of sustainable development, which concerns the well-being of every residents. First and foremost, I should develop economy to build the city into a more prosperous one and create more employment opportunities so a to improve living standards. Second, great efforts must be made to improve public transport system to being convenience to people’s daily life. As education lays a perfect foundation on citizens’ futuredevelopment, I will invest more to guarantee financial resources for improving school’s teaching condition and building schools of high quality. Last but not least, I will advocate a green lifestyle and plant more trees while building more parks in order to pursue eternal peace between nature and mankind.312 班陈敏怡14分As mayor, I will generally focus my attention on the city’s sustainable development including traffic, economy, education and environment. As for the traffic, I will expand the public transportation to make outgoings more comfortable and convenient. In terms of economy, I will boost its development and bring our economy into prosperity, thus providing more employment opportunities. Moreover, when it comes to education, I will help in crease its input so that schools’ conditions will be improved and more high-quality schools can be set up. Last but not least, to beautify our environment, I strongly advocate everyone leading a green life and appeal to people to build more parks as well as plant trees in our city.任务写作：312 班夏怡然23分On Micro-foreign Study ToursMany parents send their children to the expensive micro-foreign study tours, hoping they can benefit a lot from the tours. However, they were disappointed to see the tours are useless, which raises doubts on it.From my point of view, “micro-foreign study tours” aren’t so useful and beneficial as it sounds. Firstly, as a result of the short time and tight schedule, students can never be exposed to the real culture. Secondly, this kind of activities is more commercial than academic, whose quality can’t be guaranteed. Thirdly, students in groups can’t get out of Chinese environment, which hinders their language-learning.We don’t need to go far to find examples to exemplify my viewpoint. Andy, the son of one of my father’s friends, spent a fortnight-trip in Britain last summer, costing more than RMB 30000. When he returned, his parents were eager to know what he had experienced. However, they were disappointed when they were told that Andy had spent most of time staying with his Chinese friends because British English was too difficult to understand! What a pity!As I am opposite to the commercial “micro-foreign study tours”, I am in favor of the summer projects offered by top universities like Harvard, which can be applied for on the Internet. It is required to pass their exams, guaranteeing the quality of students recruited. That’s where the real study lies in!311 班祁昱23分More and more parents engage their children in micro-foreign study tours with high expectations. However, these tours are not only expensive but useless actually, making them question the value of these study tours.From my point of view, I can’t agree to the opinions on the micro-foreign study tours mentioned in the passage. For one thing, I think the tours are absolutely useful for us to improve our English learning, especially our oral English. For another, the tours are beneficial to broadening our visions of the exotic world and experiencing the local customs, which is well worth our money.My own experience serves as a good example. Last summer my mother sent me to a 21-day-trip to the UK. During the first 7 days we traveled across Britain, visiting a lot of famous scenic spots and enjoying the different churches and fantastic food. The next 12 days, we studied in Cambridge, having lessons in English with other foreign classmates. Meanwhile, I lived with the host families after class and I had a world of chances to communicate with them and enjoyed home-made food they cooked for me. After the trip, I had a better understanding of British culture and my English improved a lot.If there is another chance for me to attend such micro-foreign trip, I want to go to America for more than one month. I want to design the travel route by myself and study at Harvard University. I want to throwmyself to a totally new environment and experience its culture and beauty说明：以上学生作文由东莞市2012届高三中心组成员、东华高级中学郭晶老师提供.。