helpless
As night was beginning had to stop
to fall
for the night
regretful
At the break of the day found food and water
joyful
As she picked her way heard a helicopter excited upset
Q1: What would Jane do after waking up?
Q2: Would she be saved? Who would come to save her?
Q3: How would they feel when meeting again? What would they do?
shone like a diamond
.
6.她脸上露出了理解的微笑flashed across her face
• A smile of
understandinwgild with joy/on cloud nine
.
7.他欣喜若狂
• He was
with tears rolling down his cheeks .
A few minutes later
flag her blouse hopeful
Plot planning
make it logical(合逻辑的）
Para. 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Q1: How did Jane feel?
读后续写 —SINCE — Continuation
1
Reading
2 Plot planning
3
Micro-writing
4
Presentation
1
Reading
who where when
what how why
Read to find brief information
when who what where
him.
3.他w悲as痛o欲ver绝come with
He
grief.
4.太阳冉冉升起，一切都沐浴在ba阳thi光ng之ev中er。ything
The sun began to rise in the sky, in golden light.
5.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光
• The smile on her face
Assignment
Polish and share your writing with your classmates after class.
Q4: What would they learn from this experience?
Micro-writing
1.他漂浮在悲伤的海洋里
• He feels like he floating in an oc没de了d 他over
• Fear
one weekend in July Jane & Tom camp overnight
by a lake in the forest
Time on the way
and
What Jane did
quarreled
How Jane felt angry
After she had climbed… was lost
Q2: What could she do? /What difficulties did she meet?
Q3: What would she think about during the night? She fell asleep.
Para. 2: It was daybreak when she woke up.
Appreciate more sentences
• Every lesson in school is an opportunity. • Every examination is a chance in life. • Stand up where you fall. • Start from where you fail.
4 Presentation
Reflection
• After the short separation,what changes would they make in their daily lives?
• After the mid-term exam,what changes would you make in your daily learning?
8.他静静地站着,泪水顺着脸颊淌下来。
• He stood
silently,
.
Writing
Para. 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Para. 2: It was daybreak when she woke up.