专题十一短文改错说明类专练（90分钟 100分）考点01：冠词 3颗星考点02：代词 3颗星考点03：介词和介词短语 2颗星考点04: 名词 3颗星考点05：主谓一致 5颗星考点06：形容词和副词 5颗星考点08：非谓语动词 5颗星考点09：动词的时态和语态 5颗星考点10：定语从句 3颗星考点11 名词性从句 3颗星考点12 并列连词 4颗星考点13 状语从句 3颗星考点28：短文改错说明文专练 5颗星短文改错（每题1分，共40分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

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（1）Alfred Alder, a famous psychiatrist, had 考点01 interesting experience. When he was a small boy he got off to a poor start in arithmetic(算术).His teacher got the idea that he had no ability in arithmetic, and told hisparents 考点11 she thought in order that they would not expect too much of him. In this way, they too developed the idea,“Isn’t it toobad 考点11 Alfred can’t do arithmetic?” He accepted their mistaken estimate of his ability, feeling that it was useless to try.One day he became very angry at the teacher and the other students because they laughed when he said he saw how to do a problem 考点10 none of the other students had been able to solve.Adler succeeded in solving the problem. This gave him confidence. He rejected the idea 考点11 he could not do arithmetic and was determined to show them that he could. His 考点04 (angry) and his new found faith stimulated him to go at arithmetic problems with a new spirit. He nowworked 考点03 interest, determination, and purpose, and he soon became 考点06 (extraordinary) good at arithmetic. He not only proved that he can do arithmetic, but he learned early in life from his own experience,if aperson 考点09 (go) at a job in determination and purpose, his ability may make himself as well as others 考点06 (astonish).（2）Chinese proverbs are rich and they are still widely used in Chinese people’s daily life.①__________考点03.these proverbs there are often interesting stories. For example, the proverb, “plucking up a crop②__________考点08 (help) it grow”, is based on the following story. It is said that a short-tempered man in the Song Dynasty (960—1279) was very anxious to help ③__________考点02. rice crop grow up quickly. He was thinking about④__________考点02.day and night. But the crop was growing much slower than he expected. One day, he came up with an idea⑤__________考点11 he would pluck up all of his crop a few inches. He did so the next day. He was very tired⑥__________考点13 doing this for a whole day, ⑦__________考点12 he felt very happy since the crop did “grow”⑧__________考点06 (high). His son heard about this and went to see the crop. Unfortunately, the leaves of the crop began to wither. This proverb is saying we have to let things go intheir⑨__________考点06 (nature) course. Being too anxious to help an event develop often⑩__________考点04 (result) in the contrary to our intention.（3）In much of Asia, especially the so-called "rice bowl" cultures of China, Japan, Korea, ① __________考点12 Vietnam, food is usually eaten with chopsticks.Chopsticks are usually two long, thin pieces of wood or bamboo. They can also be made of plastic, animal bone or metal. Sometimes chopsticks are quite artistic. Truly elegant chopsticks might ②__________考点09 (make) of gold and silver with Chinese characters. Skilled workers also combine various hardwoods and metal ③__________考点08 (create) special designs.The Chinese have used chopsticks for five thousand years. People probably cooked their food in large pots, ④__________考点08 (use) twigs(树枝) to remove it. Over time, ⑤__________考点13 the population grew, people begancutting food into small pieces so it would cook more quickly.Food in small pieces could be eaten easily with twigs which ⑥__________考点06 (gradual) turned into chopsticks.Some people think that the great Chinese scholar Confucius, ⑦__________考点10 lived from roughly 551 to 479 B.C., influenced the ⑧__________考点04 (develop) of chopsticks. Confucius believed knives would remind people of killings and ⑨__________考点05 (be) too violent for use at the table.Chopsticks are not used everywhere in Asia. In India, for example, most people traditionally eat ⑩__________考点03 their hands.（4）VanMoof has come up with a nice way ①____________考点08 (make) sure its products arrive safely to the customers —printing a flatscreen TV on their delivery boxes instead of ②____________考点01 bicycle.VanMoof plans to sell 90 percent of the bicycles online by 2020, but after seeing most of their products being damaged during deliveries, the company③____________考点05/09 (leave) with two options either rethink its business plan ④____________考点12 come up with an effective ⑤____________考点04 (solve). Luckily, they managed to come up with something so brilliant thatit’s bound to he copied by other companies ⑥____________考点10 rely heavily on online sales.“No matter who was doing the shipping, too many of ⑦____________考点02 (we) bikes got damaged. It was getting expensive for us, and annoying for our customers," creative director Bex Rad wrote on the company blog. “Then our co-founder Ties had a flash of genius. 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