S u m m a r y 的写作技巧和常见句型、概括原文一)阅读1. 读懂文章读文章的时候,要养成良好的阅读习惯,划划写写,英文阅读的时候,用铅笔轻轻划出重点词汇。
认真阅读给定的原文材料。
如果一遍不能理解,就多读两遍。
阅读次数越多,你对原文的理解就越深刻。
2. 拆分文章按照作者的思路,把文章分段,每个段落用几个词,几个短语概括。
尽量简短,精炼。
段落中心句,在段落的开头或末尾。
有时也会变态的在当中。
3. 概括主旨写出文章的thesis, 一句话概括文章的主旨。
二)基本结构和技巧1.重新拟定标题给summary 起一个标题。
用那些能概括文章主题思想的单词、短语或短句子作为标题。
也可以采用文中的主题句作为标题。
2. 阐述观点摘要应全部用自己的话完成。
不要引用原文的句子。
写概述的时候,如果能够明确是他人写作的文章,注意要把作者的名字放在第一句(或者是接着写出要阐述的main ideas (主要观点)和supporting points (对主要观点的the author .. )。
支持)。
3. 词汇运用注意概述的cohere nee (连贯性),运用好tran siti on words (过渡词), like however,furthermore, nonetheless, besides, thereforeetc.4. 删除细节只保留主要观点。
5. 选择一至两个有代表性的例子原文中可能包括5 个或更多的例子,你只需从中筛选一至二个例子。
6. 把长句变成短句,把长段的描述变成短小、简单的句子。
He was hard up for money and was being pressed by hiscreditor.可以概括为:“ He was in finan cialdifficulties.His courage in battle might without exaggeration be called lion- like. ”可以概括为:” He was very brave inbattle.He was hard up for money and was being pressed by hiscreditor.可以概括为:“ He was in finan cialdifficulties.6)你还可以使用词组代替整句或者从句。
请看下面的例子:Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, Lushan Mountain, and Mount Huang, werevisited by only a few people in the past. Today, better wages, holidays with pay, new hotels on these mountains, and better train and bus services, havebrought them within reach of many who never thought of visiting themtenyearsago. ”可以概括为:” Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, once visited by only a few people, are today accessible to many, thanks to better wages, paid holidays,new hotels and better transportationservices.7) 使用概括性的名词代替具体的词,比如:She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Timeand Newsweek and some textbooks. She intended to read all of themduringthe winter vocation. ”可以概括为:” She brought home a lot of books to read during thevocation.8)使用最短的连接词。
比如,可以使用but, then, thus, yet,though,不能使用at the same time, in the first place, because of these, on the other hand等较长的连接词。
通常,使用分号就能够达成使用连接词的效果。
9) 文章中的第一人称说的话通常在摘要中转换成第三人称,从而把大段的对白简化,比如:Kate looked at Paul disapprovingly: You use muchtoo much salt on your food,Paul —it 's not good for you!” Paul put down his knife and frowned: ”Whyon earth not! If you didn 't have salt on your food it would taste awfullike eati ng cardboard or sand •…just imag ine bread wit hout salt in it, orpotatoes or pasta cooked without salt! ” Kate was patient. She didn 't wantto quarrel with Paul. She wanted to persuade him. She said firmly: ”But toomuch salt is bad for you. It cause high blood pressure andlatter on,heart-attacks. It also disguises the taste of food, the realtastes whichare much more subtle than salt, and which we have lost thesensitivity toappreciate any more. ”可以用第三人称概括为:Kate suggested to Paul that he should eat less salt. She thought that eatingtoo much sal t would do hard toreduce thePaul s health and that it couldreal tastes of food. But Paul disagreed. He said that food without salt wouldbetasteless.7. 注意问题1)避免重复在原文中,为了强调某个主题,可能会重复论证说明。
但是这在summary中是不能使用的。
应该删除那些突出强调的重述句。
2)不要把自己的观点强行添加给作者3)概述长度不要超过原文章的1/44)不要过多照搬原作者的用词,用句尽可能用自己的话来写,但不排斥用原文的某些词句)。
5)最后检查一遍,确保文中没有语病,没有语法错误和拼写错误。
二、论文摘要摘要的基本结构和内容因为摘要本质上就是一篇高度浓缩的论文,所以其构成与论文主体的结构是对应的。
因此,摘要应包括以下内容梗概:1)目的:研究工作的前提、目的和任务, 所涉及的主题范围;(2)方法:所用的理论、条件、手段等;3)结果(4)结果的分析、比较、评价、应用,提出的问题,今后的课题, 假设、启发、建议、预测等;(5)其他:不属于研究、研制、调查的主要目的,但具有重要的信息价值。
一)引言部分1. 回顾研究背景等。
常用词汇有:review, summarize, present, outline,describeThis paper outlines some of the basic discussesabout2. 阐明写作或研究目的 常用词汇有: purpose, attempt, aim 等。
另外还可以用动词不定式充当目的状语 来表达。
例如:To investigate the mechanism of ...3. 介绍论文的重点内容或研究范围常用 的 词汇有:study, p rese nt, in elude, focus, emp hasize, emp hasis, attention 等。
Here we study the ...This article includes a brief review of二)方法部分1. 介绍研究过程常用词汇有: test, study, investigate, examine, experiment, discuss, consider, analyze, analysisWe present an analysis of2. 说明研究或试验方法 常用词汇有: measure, estimate, calculateWe have developed a .... model to estimate This study presents estimates of三)结果部分1. 展示研究结果 常用词汇有: show, result, present 等。
We show this cell death to be dependent uponOur results suggest that等。
等。
2. 介绍结论常用词汇有:summary, introduce, conclude 等。
By means of a series of examples, we conclude that四)讨论部分1. 陈述论文的论点和作者的观点常用词汇有:suggest, report, present, explain, expect, describeThe results suggest thatIn this study, we describe2. 阐明论证support, provide, indicate, identify, find, demonstrate, 等。
常用词汇有:confirm, clarify 等。
3. 推荐和建议常用词汇有:suggest, suggestion, recommend, recommendation, propose, necessity, necessary, expect 等。