8月6日雅思大作文真题参考范文| 间隔年的优劣势～每场雅思考试之后，第一时间分享本场考试雅思A类大作文的范文权威解析。
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2020年8月6日雅思大作文题目间隔年的优劣势Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages? 解析&审题题材：教育题型：讨论优劣类关键词：students + one year off + travel or work需要讨论的观点：上大学前先旅游或工作一年的优劣势建议思路：双边讨论+自己的观点复现情况：《剑桥雅思5》，test 2 ；2015年2月28日《剑桥雅思系列》今年已经出到第15本了，但本次考题居然重复了《剑桥雅思5》上的一道题目，也是重复2015年2月28日雅思原题。
这道题目太经典了，相信很多学生都曾经练习过，或者背诵过相关范文。
因此，今天参加雅思考试的同学应该是感觉很幸运了。
我们知道，雅思作文题目中，要么是给出现象，要么是给出观点，然后让考生讨论“现象是好是坏”或者“是否同意这个观点”。
无论是讨论“好坏”，或者讨论是否“同意观点”，其实都需要考生寻找论据来证明自己的看法。
本作文提出的是一个现象，即一些国家鼓励高中毕业生先去工作一年或者旅游一年，再回来上大学，然后要求考生论证“这样做的好处和坏处”。
由于题目明确要求讨论“好处和坏处”，因此本题不宜采用“一边倒”结构方式，也就是不适合只论证好处，或者只论证坏处，而是要同时讨论好处和坏处，也就是“双边讨论”。
稍微想一想，我们不难发现“工作一年或旅游一年”的好处：开拓视野，学习人际关系技巧（物质层面），更了解自我的需求（心理层面）。
但也可能有坏处：工作或旅游一年后，可能不再想回到大学，从而失去接受大学教育的机会。
这样讨论完毕之后，就来到“双边讨论”的一个最重要的环节，即提出自己的观点。
唐老师已经在多个场合下反复强调，“双边讨论”后一定要明确提出自己的观点，即到底是否支持“工作一年或旅游一年”，并给以简单的论证。
这里，我觉得可以选择支持，因为开拓视野和了解自我实在在重要了，这会让之后的大学生活过得更充实，更有目的性，不至于浪费时光；同时，认为这一年会让一些学生不再上大学的可能性越来越小，因为大学学历在当今工作市场上已经成为一个必须条件。
这样，在结论段，我们就从两个方面来论证自己的观点：一是正面论述自己的观点，二是反驳反方的观点。
以下范文来自《剑桥雅思5》给出的高分范文。
唐老师拟对范文进行解读和分析。
高分范文It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.老师笔记01It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.如今，许多国家的年轻人在高中毕业后暂时中断学习，这是很普遍的。
这一现象并不局限于有钱旅游的学生，对贫穷学生而言也很明显，因为他们可以选择工作一段时间，让自己经济独立。
本段是开头段，其特点是在保持基本意思的前提下大幅改造题目中的表达法。
我们知道，雅思作文的开头段有两种基本方法：（1）直接提出题目中的观点或现象；（2）描写题目中观点或现象。
前一种方法可简称为“开门见山”法，后一种方法则给考生提供了更大的空间来展示自己的语言表达水平，因此也容易给考官留下更好的第一印象。
本开头段使用了“描写法”，更准确的说，本开头段将题目中比较笼统的信息具体化了。
题目中只说“学生被鼓励去工作或旅游”，但本开头段则提出“这并不局限于富裕家庭的学生去旅游，还包括家境不好的学生去工作以获得经济的独立”，这显然是把题目中“旅游和工作”两个关键词展开进行了描写。
此外，由于本作文采取的“双边讨论”结构，因此在第一段结尾没有给出全文观点。
与此相对照，如果作文采取“一边倒”结构，通常都需要在首段结尾给出自己的观点。
解析（1）...to have a break from studying 中断学习（2）...be restricted to...局限于......（3）evident明显的（4）to become economically independent 变得经济独立02The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.造成这种现象的原因可能是人们意识到，直接从中学进入大学的年轻人在世界的一般知识和经验方面有相当大的限制。
相比之下，那些花了一些时间来谋生或去其他地方旅行的人，有更广阔的生活视野和更好的个人资源可以利用。
他们往往更独立，而独立在学术学习和研究中非常重要，同时也让他们在应对学生生活挑战方面更有优势。