1、 English TeacherMiss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is talland thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. Shelikes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kindto us. We all love her.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作文。
小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],以免写出一些错句子。
写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
2、 friend and II’ve got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall. I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and stronger. He’s 43 kg and I’m 41 kg. He’s heavier. We’ve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We l ike summer best. We b oth like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play table tennis. On S undays, we play basketball. He’s good at basketball. But I do better at tabletennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!【要领点评】写法:这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。
既然写作范围是两个人物,就要笔墨均匀,两者缺一不可。
不能只描写朋友,也不能只叙述我。
这无形中增加了写作的难度。
解决这个难点的关键是:找出两个人几方面的异同。
可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况,再进行比较,通过比较突出每个人物的特点。
这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。
时态:像此类题目的作文,运用一般现在时即可。
句型:因为涉及两个人的比较,不要忘记使用比较级句型:A+be+比较级+than+B。
注意:在列举两个人的“体貌、喜好”等方面情况时,应一边列举,一边比较。
不要一味指出不同,还要列举相同之处。
两人能成为朋友,一定有共同语言和喜好,共性不容忽视。
在表达喜好时,不同的句型应交叉运用,避免枯燥的重复。
例“Our favourite colours are…”,“We like …best”,“We both like…,too”,为突出不同时间做不同运动,用“On S aturdays…”,“On S undays…”,形成鲜明对比。
常使用并列连词and 和转折连词 but ,使文章读起来更流畅。
结尾以How happy we are!突出了两人从友谊中得到的快乐!3、根据下面提供的内容,写一篇英语短文。
要求语句通顺,条理清楚,字数不少于50个单词。
Mary 是个英国女孩,五年级学生,十二岁。
她向别人自我介绍,并介绍她的家庭。
她有个双胞胎姐姐,爸爸是医生,妈妈是老师,她非常爱他们,他们也很爱她。
例文:My name is Mary. I come from England. I am an English girl. Iam a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my t eacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father isa doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me,too.4、题目: My net friend(我的网友)要求:1。
条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写清晰、规范;2.要将提示词全部体现在作文中;不得少于50个单词。
提示词:(1)computer (2)net friend (3) talk with each other(互相交谈)(4) in the chat room (在聊天室) (5)talk in English (用英语交谈) (6)good now例文:My net friendI am Tony. I a have a computer. I have a net friend. His name is Jack.He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net. We oftentalk with each other in the chat room. We talk in English. My English isgood now. He is a good boy. I like him very much. Do you want to have anet Ann5、王晓兰北京市育英小学(primaryschool)六年级四班年龄:12 国籍:英国(England)相貌特征:蓝眼睛、黄头发家庭情况:父亲(医生)母亲(护士)弟弟(5岁)爱好:唱歌(singing)、跳舞(dancing)、看电视(watching TV)优点:友好(friendly)、乐于助人(like to helpothers)例文:My good friendI have a good friend. Her name i s Ann. Her Chinese name i s Wang Xiaolan. She is from England. She is in Beijing now. She is in Yuying Primary School.She is in Class Four, Grade Six. She is twelve. She has blue eyes and yellow hair. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. Her brother isfive years old. She l ikes dancing, singing and watching TV. She is friendly and she likes to help others. What a good girl!6根据提示,从表格中获取信息写一篇不少于60个单词的小作文,要求提示的内容要全部体现在作文中。
例文:My FriendsI have two goo d friends. They ’re Zhang Ping and Jim. Zhang Ping is12. Jim is three years older than her. He ’s 15. Jim is heavier than Zhang Ping. He ’s 60 kilograms. Jim is taller than her. He ’s 162cm. Zhang Ping is a Chinese girl. She lives in Xinhui. Jim is a Canadian boy. He livesin Guangzhou n ow. Zhang Ping likes red. Her favorite sport is badminton. Jim likes blue. His favorite sport is swimming. I like them very much.7、写一个你最喜爱的人,请对他/她进行一定的外貌描写。
例文:My Favorite PeopleWho is your favorite people? My favorite people is my mother. She is beautiful. She is 38 years old. She is tall and thin . She has big eyes and long hair. She likes cooking. She cooks good meals for us every day.And she always does all the housework. She looks after my father and me.I love my mother very much.8、根据下面提供的信息,写一篇60字左右的作文。
Name :BillFavorite sports: tennis, soccer, basketballClothes: black, T-shirt, blue pantsAge: 13Phone number: 5352375例文:My FriendNameZhang Ping Jim Age 年龄1215Height 身高150cm 162cm Weight 体重50kg 60kg Nationality 国籍Chinese Canadian Address 地址Xinhui Guangzhou Favorite Colorred blue Favorite Sportbadminton swimmingI have a good friend. We are in the same CLASs. His name is Bill. Heis 13. He likes sports very much. These sports are tennis, soccer andbasketball. He plays tennis twice a week. He plays soccer twice a week.He plays basketball once a week. He often likes to wear black T-shirt and blue pants. His phone number is 5352375. Everyone likes him.9、假设Jack 是10岁,短发,1.5m, 50kg; 而May 是12岁,长发,1.6m,45kg。