• The writer lives more tiredly than me in university. （比较错误）
• The teacher is very young and beautiful. But she gave us a lot of work to do. So, a little unhappy. （ 没有主语，真的满篇都是sad 和 happy）
• What the happy? （chinglish）
• For at a moment the feeling of grown up from them suddenly rushed to me.
• Although we cannot celebrate it with our families at home, but （ 删 去 ） we can celebrate it with our roommates. Therefore ， （ 逻 辑 不 通 ） we felt so happy. They said that we will have the class in the 203, but i found it is in the 303 after I see the schedule. Thus many people went to the wrong classroom. The right class is 303. (删去) I found my new grammar
• He promised to come to the meeting; however, he didn’t appear. √
• 连接性副词：therefore, however, nonetheless, hence, otherwise, besides, moreover.
• 连词：but, or, and, nor, yet
• E.g. • March 12th, 2015 Thursday
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• 1. 注意日期、星期和天气的书写位置。
• 日期和星期要写在正文的左上角，其顺序 多是“星期 + 月、日、年”（也有把星期 放在后面的），如“ 2003 年 11 月 22 日，星期一”可写为“ Monday November 22， 2003 或 November 22， 2003 Monday ”。天气情况应写在正文的右上角， 如： Fine， Rainy， Cloudy， Windy 等 。
Quotation marks
• 双引号：用来引用对话或者书和文章中的 直接引语
• 单引号：用在双引号内，引用引语中的引 语。
• Unfortunately, I put too much water and the flour are pasting on my fingers, the most difficult thing is too hard to clean.
• The Oscar is still so long, I spent 3 hours to watch it, I still find some interesting movies, well, finally my idol Eddie Redmayne got the best actor , he was just nominate for once, his British accent was so enchanting to me.
The period
• January 1st, 2015 • Jan. 1st, 2015
The semicolon
• 分号可以直接起到连接句子的作用
• He promised to come to the meeting, however, he didn’t appear. 错误
• He promised to come to the meeting. However, he didn’t appear.√
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Exclamation mark Quotation marks
Brackets Square brackets The dash
The comma
• 逗号的作用在于停顿，而不是连接。 • She is a teacher, I am a student.
• She is a teacher and I am a student.√
• 2 ）日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹 的事情，所以要用第一人称来写；
• 3 ）日记多是在当天晚上来记述当天发生 过的事情，因为动词时态常使用过去时。
Word division
Capitalization
punctuation
The comma The period The semicolon The colon Question mark
• 1. 题目中第一个词和最后一个词首字母永 远大写
• 2. 题目中冠词，连词，介词，不定式的to 的首字母不大写
日记的格式
• 英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成 • 书端怎么写？ • 日记需要标题吗？ • 正文怎么写？时态，人称怎么用？
书端怎么写
• 英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天 气的。左上角是日期 (年、月、日)、星期。右上 角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunny, Fine,Rainy, Windy, Snowy, Cloudy等。
• She said: “ I will always remember you.”
• 错误
The question mark
• 间接引语：用自己的话转述别人的话，叫 间接引语。直接引语如果疑问句改为间接 引语时要用陈述语序，且不用问号。
• He asked his wife, “how are you?” • He asked his wife how she was.
• She is a teacher; I am a student. √
• She is a teacher, and I am a student. √
错误示范
（From diary）
• Today the weather is so cold that I have to borrow a coat from my friend, but we are different size, she is medium size and I am small size, I look like a baby girl who stole her mother’s clothes to wear when I look at the mirror.
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Lecture One: Manuscript Form and Punctuation
Manuscript Form
Arrangement Word division Capitalization
handwriting
Arrangement
总结
• 副词：Consequently, accordingly, namely…
• She has past the CET 4, namely, she got a score higher than 425 in CET 4. 错误
• She has past the CET 4; namely, she got a score higher than 425 In CET 4.
日记需要标题吗
• 在日期和天气的下一行中间可以写上日记 小标题，也可以不写标题。
• E.g. • March 12th, 2015 Thursday
Sunny • A boring writing class
正文怎么写？时态，人称怎么用？
• 1 ）要选择有意义的事件来描述，不要写 成简单的流水帐；
The colon
• 冒号用来引导一个引语，陈述，解释或者 同位语
• It will do everyone good to remember this old saying: “one will know that he does not know enough after he begins to learn.”