【优质】连云港市面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1.(·陕西师大附中中考模拟)书面表达三年初中生活即将结束,在你学习和成长的路上一定得到了不少人的鼓励,支持和帮助。
虽然你就要和一些人说再见了,但总有些人是你一生都难以忘记的。
请以I’ll never forget _______为题,谈谈你最难忘的人。
老师、好友,家人,同桌还是……基本信息:(1)Who is he/she?(2)What kind of person is he/she?(3)What did he/she do for you ?(4)Why is he/she unforgettable?参考词汇:loving, strict, understanding, patient, friendly, generous, reliable, intelligent, optimistic, humorous, confident, honest, helpful…要求:1.补全标题;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名3. 介绍他/她的具体情况以及对你的影响;4. 词数不少于70词。
I’ll n ever forget ______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________【答案】I’ll never forget my English teacherIn my junior school life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is My English teacher-Ms Lee.Ms Lee is kind and outgoing. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文,谈谈你最难忘的人。
根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如help sb with, be in trouble, encourage sb to do, with one’s help, make great progress, become interested in, once以及cheer up。
增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:认真审题。
审好题是写好书面表达的关键。
审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。
有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。
通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。
一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。
使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。
同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。
修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。
这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
2.(·江苏中考模拟)近年来,随着智能手机的普及,越来越多的学生开始使用手机来完成家庭作业。
这引发了学生们是否喜欢用app学习的讨论,为此,英文报Teens 将在下期开设专栏讨论这一话题,你采访了一些同学,写了一篇题为“Would you like to study on apps?”的报道。
内容如下:1.短文需包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;2.省略号后展开合理想象;3.词数90个左右,短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数;4.短文必须写在答题卷对应的位置上,写在试卷其他部位无效。
Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are becoming more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study.【答案】Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are becoming more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like touse them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves.But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study.I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【详解】阅读题干,这是属于看法类的作文,那么在写这类作文时,首先要分别写出支持和反对两方面的看法及原因,最后要说明自己的观点看法来进行总结。
亮点词汇短语:practice doing sth.练习做某事;learn by oneself自学;lead to导致;it is adj. for us to do sth对某人来说,做某事是怎样的;in a proper way以适当的方式。
亮点句型:There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves.应用程序上有很多练习,这使我们更容易自己学习。
Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自从他们使用手机以来,他们的视力变得更差了。
they can’t help playing with other apps while studying.他们在学习时忍不住玩其他的应用程序。
Can’t help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。
3.(·黑龙江中考模拟)书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华,你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。
请你根据以下信息,给Billy回封电子邮件,并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
写作要点:1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试(physical test)做准备。
2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况:(1)每天锻炼的时间:不到一个半小时。
(2)偶尔不锻炼的原因:作业多,没时间。
(3)擅长的体育运动:球类运动。
3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。
写作要求:1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文,给Billy回封电子邮件,介绍自己平时的锻炼情况,并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。