五、使用虚拟语气
例： The ship didn't sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain.一般
But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk with all on board.特殊
连贯性
句子与句子之间需要架一座“桥”
单词拼写、标点符号
拼写基本没有错误 标点正确
词数少于60的从总分中减一分
内容要丰富，量要足
作文中禁忌
1、交白卷 2、骗老师，在前面的阅读中随便抄一段 话 3、在作文中用汉语拼音代替英文单词 eg.不会写Spring outing, 写“Chunyou” 4、在作文中你只能是李华，不能是小明 或小红，更不能出现你自己的名字 5、死套模板
用作条件状语
Weather permitting(=If weather permits), they will go on an outing to the beach tomorrow. 如果天气允许的话，他 们将在明天组织一次海滨小游。
用作原因状语
An important lecture to be given tomorrow(=As an important lecture will be given tomorrow), the professor has to stay up late into the night. 因为明天要发表一个重要的 演讲，教授不得不熬夜到很晚。
六、使用倒装句型
例：Though I'm weak I'll make the effort.一般
Weak as I am, I'll make the effort.特殊
七.强调句 1.Mary received a gift from the teacher.( 一般） 2.It's Mary who received a gift from the teacher.（特殊）
高考英语作文（北京）
本部分占高考英文试卷的总分23%
35=15+20
特点
一篇用英语做事（2014改革）（15分） 一篇用英语记事（20分）
近年来情景作文真题
年份 2007 2008 2009 2010 2011 2012 2013 2014 情景作文 书信 校刊英语园地 英文稿件（杂 志社） 周记 校刊英语园地 日记 周记 校刊英语园地 竞选班长 春游 绿色行动 帮助老人 帮助同学 帮助陌生人 孝敬父母 向学校提建议 类型 记叙文 记叙文 记叙文 记叙文 记叙文 记叙文 记叙文 记叙文 看图写作 看图写作 看图写作 看图写作 看图写作 看图写作 看图写作 看图写作
独立主格结构
独立主格结构主要用于描绘性文字中， 其作用相当于一个状语从句，常用来表 示时间、原因、条件、行为方式或伴随 情况等
用法：独立主格结构主要表示谓语动词 发生的时间、原因、条件或伴随情况等 ，相当于一个状语从句或并列句。
用作时间状语
The work done(=After the work had been done), we went home. 工作完成后 ，我们就回家了。
用作伴随状语
He was lying on the grass,his hands crossed under his head(=and his hands were crossed under his head).他躺在草 地上，将两手交叉枕在脑后。
用作补充说明
We redoubled our efforts,each man working like two. 我们加倍努力，一个人 干两个人的活。
“我绝不会嫁给你”
I will never marry you. Never will I marry you. You are the last man I am willing to marry. Under no circumstances will I marry you. If you were the last man in the world,I would definitely remain single.
2 If the weather permits, I will come tomorrow.一般
I will come tomorrow, weather permitting. 特殊(独立主格结构）
四、使用名词性从句
1.It disappointed everybody that he didn't turn up.一般
虽然每个老师的口味都不一样，但是他 们的口味基本是趋同的，阅卷组的会给 所有阅卷老师一个评分标准，所以你 2015年高考英语作文的得分是根据评分 标准得来的
既然是这样，要想在2015年英语作文上 拿高分（30分以上），我们最想要知道 的必然是了解高考阅卷的评分标准
下面谈谈高考阅卷评分标准
字迹工整
高考作文写作必备高考逻辑关系 词
1）and 2）but 3)however 4)for 5)although 6)therefore 7)als0 8)because
必备词汇
wonderful unforgettable appreciate meaningful schoolmaster suggfestion satisfied moving immpressive special
积极话题：09,10,11,12,13 中性话题：07,08,14 消极话题：没有
不变的是：看图写作，记叙文
问：高考作文中什么最重要？ 答：分数
请记住：作文分数是老师给你的，不是 自己给自己打分数（不像客观题，客观 题是自己给自己打分，是公平的，客观 题考的是你真正的水平）
既然，分数是改卷老师给你的，要想拿 作文拿高分，就必须迎合老师的口味
13年北京卷
第一节 情景作文（20 分）
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图 的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出 差期间，妈妈生病 ，你照顾她的过程。
注意： 1. 周记的开头已经为你写好。2. 词数不少于 60.
Last Monday, my father would be on a business trip for five days. Having gotten my promise of being great at home and taking care of my mother, he rest assured and put his luggage into the trunk of his car. Seeing my father’s driving away, my mother and I waved our hands and said goodbye to him. For a moment, I began to miss my father, wishing that he would be safe and well the next days.
可能性：人人都能做的 必要性：人人都必须做到
内容
内容：覆盖所有内容要点（高考作文的 命题形式所决定的）
句子
关键：写句子，英语句子的特点是一句 话只有一个谓语 （牢记） 在正确的基础上，体现多样性 特殊句式的用法（定语从句、倒装句、 状语从句、强调句型等句式的运用） 语法基本没有错误
词汇、短语
多用高级词汇，避免口语化、简单化 连接词 短语
从现在起改变写英文句子的思维 方式
一、改变语态
例： People suggest that the conference be put off. 一般
It is suggested that the conference be put off.特殊
二、使用定式
例：The work is so hard.i can't do that.一般
The fact that he did n't turn up disappointed everybody.特殊
2.I happened to have met him.一般 It happened that I had met him. 特殊
3.To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.一般 What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 特殊
I thought everything would go well, as this was not the first time that my father had been away for several days. Yet, unfortunately, my mother caught a cold the next morning. Looking at her pale face, I experienced high levels of anxiety. However, I told myself that I had to calm down and look after my mum, as I promised to my dad. The moment I got my mum to sleep, I put cold towel on her forehead, found pills in the medicine box, and made some noodles for her. Luckily, she waked up and felt better, after taking the pills and the noodles. That her fever was gone relieved and satisfied me a lot.