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资料来源：教育优选 / 2014年4月27日托福独立写作范文(20140427ML) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.
I totally disagree with the statement that your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does. On the contrary, sometimes, social life plays a more crucial role in our lives than job does. We cannot identify which one is superior to another one because both of them all make contributions to our happiness.
Firstly, happiness means that you have many friends indeed. It is necessary for you to make some friends with people who can depend on. It almost relies on our social life. When you are enjoying the party, participating in sports or meeting some people you even do not know before, there are lots of opportunities for you to learn, experience and make friends.
Secondly, happiness also represents varieties of desires of many people to a large degree. We are not only desiring to be content ourselves, but also make families satisfactory. Some people who have no time spending on living with families even consider accompanying children and wife as a happiest thing in their lives. Generally speaking, spending time saved by jobs on taking them to social life, we may be content because their happiness is identical to your happiness.
However, jobs could do something that is in different fields from social life. If we are successful in our jobs, we will have more conditions of material life to do something
depends on money. Social life can not give us those enjoyable things as a result of having no money to afford.
All the evidence above supports an unshakable conclusion that social life isn't
secondary to job effects on your happiness, they all make contributions to our happiness.。