环球时代专四讲议：英语专四作文范文参考英语专四作文范文参考——大学生村官题目：College Graduates Work as Village Officials写作要求Nowadays, while many college graduates fi ght fi ercely for a position in big cities, some of them choose to leave big cities for the countryside and work as village o ffi cials. What in your mind are the possible benefi ts of this choice?Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:College Graduates Work as Village OfficialsYou are to write in three parts.In the fi rst part, state specifi cally what your idea is.In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路本题是一道分析利弊/差异型的题目，说明大学生毕业后去当村官有什么好处，可以按以下思路展开：先对这种现象表示肯定，是一个必然的趋势，然后列举大学生为乡村带去的好处（新概念、新技术等）以及大学生从这种工作中得到的收获（更广阔的发展空间、人生价值的实现等）。
范文赏析College Graduates Work as Village OfficialsToday the issue how college graduates should choose their careers has aroused public concern. Some time ago, it was reported that some college graduates chose to work as village officials. To this people’s attitudes differ sharply. Somehold the positive view while others are against it. As far as I am concerned, I believe that it is a wise choice.引言部分：作者提出这样一个现象：有些大学生毕业后选择当村官，对此人们看法不一，并直接说明自己的观点：这是明智的选择。
On the one hand, college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the countryside. Firstly they can apply their professional knowledge there. Secondly, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside and speed the development of rural culture. As a result, the gap between the city and the countryside can well be bridged.On the other hand, these graduates can benefit a lot from working as village officials. While too many college graduates are fi ghting fora handful of positions in big cities, these graduates can find themselves a wider stage of development and realize their value.主体部分：这部分分两段从两个方面分析。
先说明大学生对乡村的发展有贡献（采用总分总的结构），然后说明大学生当村官也能为自己找到更广阔的发展平台（采用对比的手法）。
不同的手法使文章富有变化，不单一。
Therefore, collegegraduates working as village officials is a win-win choice and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside.总结部分：作者用therefore自然地带出结论：这是个双赢的选，应受到鼓励。
这与首段观点呼应。
亮点回放1. arouse public concern: “引起公众的关注” ；此句也可以写成People are concerned about how college graduates should choose their careers. 不过本文的写法更为正式些，另外public也可以用popular替换。
2. differ sharply : “有很大/ 明显的区别” ；此句同学们通常写成：different people may have/hold different attitudes/opinion about this相比之下，本文的写法更简洁正式些。
3. wise: “智慧的、明智的” ，常见搭配为a wise choice。
4. contribute a lot to: “非常有助于……/对……有很大帮助”；近义词可以用help a lot 或者be a great help to。
5. apply: 此处表示“应用、使用” ，比简单地使用use更能体现出作者对词汇的灵活把握。
6. introduce: 常用作介绍，此处表示引进新的概念。
7. gap: “裂缝、缺口、差距”；常用于“代沟、城乡差距、贫富差距（generation gap ，the gap between the city and the countryside ，the gap between the poor and the rich ）”等词组中。
8. bridge: 常用作名词，此处作动词用，表示“缩短……之间的差距” ，非常形象生动。
9. fight for: “为……奋斗、争斗” ，此处近义词为compete for 。
10. a handful of: “少量的” ；比简单地使用a few要来得形象生动。
11. win-win: “双赢的” ，常用的搭配为a win-win situation/choice。
英语专四作文范文参考——在校打工题目：Work While Study写作要求In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specifi c reasons and details.Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Work While StudyYou are to write in three parts.In the fi rst part, state specifi cal ly what your idea is.In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路本题是一道观点选择型A/B 的题目，论述在校青少年打工是否适合，本题可以从以下两方面入手：思路1：青少年应该打工虽然打工会占用他们的时间，但也可以为他们带来好处：1……2……3……思路2 ：青少年不应该打工虽然打工会有一定的益处，但是弊端更多：1……2……3……范文赏析Work While StudyIn many countries it is common for teenagers to take part-time jobs while they are still in high school, while in other societies this is virtually unheard of. n my opinion, students benefit more from a more balanced lifestyle, which may include working at a part-time job. Therefore, I believe that it is a good idea for students to work while studying.引言部分：作者先提出这个争议的话题，并开门见山地亮出自己的观点：青少年打工是有益的。
While it is true that a student’s most important goal must be to learn and to do well at his studies, it does not need to be the only goal. In fact, a life which consists of only study is not balanced and may cause the student to miss out on other valuable learning experiences. In addition to bringing more balance to a student’s life, part-time work can broaden his range of experience. He will have the opportunity to meet people from all walks of life and will be faced with8 a wider variety of problems to solve. Furthermore, work helps a student to develop greater independence, and earning his own pocket money can teach him how to handle his finances. Finally, a part-time job can help a student to develop a greater sense of responsibility, both for his own work and for that of the team he works with.主体部分：作者采取了欲扬先抑的做法：先肯定学生的主要任务是学习，然后驳斥那种把学习当作学生惟一目标的观点，并列举了学生打工可以目标的观点，并列举了学生打工可以列举法的配合使用使作者的观点非常有说服力。