续写亮点突破系列
一、主句，+ 简短状语（介词短语，分词，状语从句的省略，形容词，副词）
1.At last he came, with his hands in his pockets
2.He was stunned there, staring at me with wide eyes.
3.With apparently unwilling affection, he nodded.
4.With a mixture of surprise and confusion, he managed a forced smile.
5.When coming back, he still folded his arms with a little anger on his face.
6.With an impatient look, he listened to me reluctantly.
7.He was numb with shock, staring at me.
8.Then the next second his eyes were shining like diamonds, with a bright smile
on his face.
9.Curious, he approached to find a silver balloon.
10.With tears in her eyes, he decided to help Desiree.
11.Touched deeply, he decided to tell a white lie.
12.With heart beating wildly, she hurried to show it …
13.Holding back my tears, I tried to squeeze a smile.
14.Bathed in a festival atmosphere, he was in high spirits.
15.He attempted to find the owner, but all in vain.
16.Her eyes began to water, with her stomach uncomfortably twisting.
17.Looking at each other, we smiled, hiding ourselves in the car and expecting
his reaction to the gift.
18.Obviously confused at the sudden disorder around, Rafael turned to me for
reasons in written words.
19. Surprisingly, my explanation put a smile on his face.
20.Greeting us with a confident smile, Rafael shared his story in a magnetic
voice, which left me surprised.
21.Feeling a lump in the throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly, determined
never to judge a book by its cover.
22.He gave me a bright smile, with his eyes sparkling.
23.To our delight and relief, Tom recovered quickly.
二、形容词、副词的恰当使用
1.Cherish every single moment when you can stay with her.
2.I turned to him and said gently.
3.He looked at me with a broad smile.
4.I praised him sincerely.
5.Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines
6. A thunderous applause burst out.
7.I’m firmly convinced that …
8.with a burning desire to win, he …
9.So excited was he that he held it tightly, rushing into the house.
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voice, which left me surprised.
13.He listened with full attention, trying not to miss any point.
14.I gazed/ stared affectionately at their receding figures.
三、有表现力的动态动词
1.I tried to squeeze a kind smile.
2.I could find happiness dancing in his eyes.
3.Desiree’s eyes immediately lit up.
4.The child’s eyes shone.
5.Her heart raced.
6.My mind raced as I tried to work out what was happening.
7.She tripped to her mother.
8.She rushed to Desiree’s room.
9.With heart beating wildly, she hurried to show it …
10.I said as I dashed off to look for my dear sweet husband.
11.I pushed my way through the crowds.
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15.my voice lowered and I turned and walked away.
16.He choked with sobs.
17.His face burned with shame.
18.A slight breeze was stirring the branches.
19.His stomach stirred with (something very like) fear.
20.She shouted with excitement.
21.I paid for it with my trembling hands.
22.A smile spread across his face.
23.Dead silence spread across the classroom.
24.A strong sense of joy flashed through my mind.
25.I was frozen to the spot, motionless.
26.He exploded with rage.
27.Consumed/ seized with guilt, he made up his mind …
28.Her broad smile is rooted in my heart.
四、长句、短句交替使用
1.I turned back, meeting his black eyes full of gentleness and feeling like
a mild breeze sweeping through my heart. However, I refused.
2.Dancing in her eyes were love and happiness which I had struggled to seek
for so long. Then she beamed.
3.Each person was eager to express and share their experiences, raising hands
enthusiastically. I was no exception.
五、表现情感的描写
1.Feeling a lump in my throat, I said….
2.I was hesitant with confusion.。