2015 广州市一模 互换身份
If you could switch lives with someone for a short time, would you do it? To some people, a new life would be a dream come true. A US TV show gives people the chance to try. Each episode of A walk in Your Shoes lets two real people experience each other’s lives. In last week’s show, eighth-grade student Schylar dreamed of running the school, so he became the principal for a day-and the principal became an eighth grader again! Schylar quickly realized that his dream job had pressures and responsibilities, and he had to make some tough decisions. And the principal had a hard time with all the homework! For those taking part, the programme not only offers the chance to live out a fantasy, but provides some valuable life lessons. Participants come to more fully value what they already have: their families, their friends and the opportunities and benefits their own lives provide. They also learn to better appreciate the situation of others; to not only think about things from their own points of view, and to understand that other people have problems too. And one thing most participants eventually realize is that the grass is not always greener on the other side.
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1.After reading the passage, the idea of switching my life with my mum for a week comes up to my mind instantly. 2. After reading the passage, a question crashed into my mind. 3. After reading the passage which ignites my imagination, I would like to switch lives with a teacher. 4. After reading the passage, a lot of thoughts occur in my mind.
Correct the mistakes or polish the sentences. 5. Besides, so happy am I with kids that I would like to spend evening with my child, playing games and reading books together and so forth. 6. So useful is this research that it is published on The o many things can I learn from this amazing switching lives. Tips 2 亲，当你想用倒装句时，请想一想你是为了用而用吗？ 两个分句之间有逻辑关系吗？ 记住：逻辑正确永远比所谓的高大上句型受青睐。
定关键词：US TV show; A Walk in Your Shoes; valuable life lesson; value what they have; appreciate the situation of others 连词成句(注意paraphrase,避免照抄原文)
“A Walk in Your Shoes”, (which an eighth grader and his principal took part in last week ), is a US TV show in which participants switch lives.The participants can learn to cherish /treasure what they have and be considerate of others.
Version 1 A TV shows provides chances for two people to experience each others' lives, through which people realize that the life they dreaming about won't always be a perfect life which suits them and learn to think in others' way.
脑中闪过…/ 突然想起 After I read the passage, many ideas crowded in my mind. It occurred to me that …… A…..idea flashed into my mind …. A…. idea popped into my mind like a flash.
例： 1. A US TV show drives people to value their possessions and put themselves in others' shoes by letting them experience others' life. Given the chance, a student learnt of the principal's pressures, while a principal learnt homework was excessive.
Version 2: A US TV show realized peopel's dream of switching lives with someone else. Participants faced lots of troubles in others' role and tended to value their own lives more and learn to better understand others after this show.
6. People were given a chance to experience other's lives and after the show, the participants knew they should value what they have now, thinking things standing in other's shoes, and they realize that the grass is not always greener than the other side.
[写作内容] 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。 用约120个词就“互换身份”谈谈你的想法，内容包括： 1. 如有机会与别人互换身份一周，你想换成什么身份？ 为什么？ 2. 在这一周的时间里，你会做些什么事情? 3. 你认为可以从这样的经历中学到什么？
summary 注意事项： 1. 不可过长，不可有例子 2. 不可照抄原文 3. 不可有个人观点
概要部分除了语言方面的问题外,最突出的 仍是三个典型 的问题:照搬原文;要点错漏;细节过多。正文部分,多 数学 生能围绕主题从三方面进行个性化的表达,但各种写作的 常见问题 依然很突出,具体包括:偏离话题,内容空洞,表达 啰嗦,辞不达意, 举证欠合理,逻辑不清晰,书写潦草,格式 不规范等等.
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TIP: 1. 慎用省略句，请在写的时候，检查两个分句主语是否 一致。如果用非谓语做状语时，也得检查非谓语和其逻辑 主语有无主动或被动关系。 Published in a magazine, the research aroused public’s interest in an instant.
2. A student and a principal switched lives with each other in a TV show which let participants realize the value which they have, a must to understand others and the fact that the grass in not green other sides. 3. A US TV show makes it possible for people switching his life with others in a short time, which allowed a eighth-grade student switch with the principal. In the programme, participants learned some life lessons such as valuing people around them, judging others in all aspects and so forth.