中考作文举例 指导
自学指导一、看校园安全 话题作文，审题，列出要点 。2’ 建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们
更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是 Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生 发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。 内容提示： (1)不带管制刀具到学校; (2)不私自下河洗澡; (3)不打架; (4)上学放学的途中注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。 参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things 紧急情况：emergency; 写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。 (2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)不打架;
Fighting is
(4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;
Pay more attention to…/ We must obey ….on the way to…
(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。
When we meet some ….., we should call for help …..
Don’t talk loudly in public places./It is good to save …
范文背诵5’ How to Behave Well? In order to build a civilized city, we students should try
our best to behave well in the activities. It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our
city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
Yours， Li Hua
自学指导二、看“开展有意的活动 ”，审题，列出要点 2’
为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题 的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英 语写一篇参赛短文。
提示：1. 衣着整洁; 2. 保持环境卫生; 3. 待人有礼，乐于助人; 4. 遵守交通规则; 5. ……
自学检测一、审清题目，列出要点5’
1. 审文体: 应用文中的书信格式 2. 审人称： 第一人称 （we） 3. 审时态： 一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时 4. 审内容要点及字数：
(1)不带管制刀具到学校; We mustn’t bring …
(2)不私自下河洗澡;
Don’t have a bath in the river ..without
要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开 思路，适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
自学检测二、审题，列要点并简单表达5’
1. 审人称： 第一人称 （we）
2. 审时态： 一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时 3.要点表达：适当拓展，丰富表达。 ①.衣着整洁; We should keep our….. ②. 保持环境卫生;
范文背诵：5’ Dear students,
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And, we should be friendly to others because fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or ome. What’s more, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.
1.了解写作的注意事项 2.学会运用技巧，进行语篇的组织。 3.背诵范文。
中考作文五步走写法
一、审清题目，列出要点 审文体（包括格式），审人称， 审时态，审内容要点（含字数）
二、结合要点，简单表达（列草稿） 三、连词成句，表达正确 四、适当发挥，丰富表达 五、组合成文，适当过渡
注意：仔细检查，认真抄写（上正稿）
It is our duty…./ The city must be …. ③. 待人有礼，乐于助人; Be friendly and ready to help others . When we are on the bus, ④. 遵守交通规则;
We should obey ….when the traffic light are red,… ⑤. 适当拓展(在公共场所不大声喧哗…）