高考短文改错1.下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Union is strength Whenever you're faced with difficulties or in a dilemma, cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble.There was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate, refusing to work together with them. Therefore, it was no doubt that I was left alone, suffering from loneliness and failure. Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation. From then on, I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own. Surely cooperation made a great difference. Now I am getting well with my friend.My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation can we go beyond ourselves. As the saying go, "United we stand ;divided we fall."2.My father was a first-class chef．I eventually decided to give up my previously job as a salesman and train as a chef．Three years later, I became head chef in restaurant．Soon after which，I realized my career was becoming successful and I found I had to make a choice．I could neither work for a big restaurant or open one of my own．And my father became ill and I got his job. On my first day at work I wasgreeting by an unexpected cold reception．What made it bad was that I was having a bad cold．With my hands shook, I entered the kitchen．I hold my breath, stood up and said “You all know my Father．Whether you loved him or hated him, I don’t care about．It’s the past. Now, Let’s get to work...”3.There are many different signs in the public. They tell you what to do or what not to do in a place. Do you know what they exact mean? For example, if you go to see a film, you should enter the cinema at the ENTRANCE and leave for the EXIT. You will either find NO SMOKING signs in many cinemas. If you visit a museum, don’t take some photos inside the halls. You are not allowed. You will find NO PHOTOS signs in many museum. When you drive a car, don’t park in a street without a NO PARKING sign. Making sure you understood the signs and you won’t get into any trouble.4.Last Saturday, I went to visit the museum with my classmates. We were interesting in dinosaurs, but we came to the Dinosaur World first. There we see many fossils of different kind of dinosaurs. We were both amazed when the guide showed us some dinosaur eggs which they were laid about 9.5 million years ago.Then we came to another hall, where many old Chinese inventions were in show. When I saw those old things, I felt proud of being Chinese. I think the visit very meaningfully. I should study harder to be inventor in the future and make contributions to build our great motherland.5.Dear Peter,Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday 76____________party on Sunday. I’d like very much come but 77____________I will had an examination on Monday morning. It is 78____________a very important exam but I can’t afford to 79____________fail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading 80____________and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that 81____________I won’t be able to come in this time. Hope you 82____________can understand. I’ll take this chance to wish 83____________you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy 84____________birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! 85____________Yours,Li Ming6.Sometimes in February, my teacher told us about the city speech contest, its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”. I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. Then I carefully prepared for contest. A couple of weeks later, after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! The final was held soon. I was the sixth to present the speech. How a relief when I finished it ! After the last person finished, the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize. The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering ! I was extremely happy. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember.7. As is known by all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part on our daily life．On the Internet，we can not only read news at home or abroad but also get much information as possible．For an example，we often send e-mails and make telephone call to our families and friends．What’s more，they can go to school on the Internet，read different kinds of books and even teaches ourselves English．We can also listen to music，watching sports and play computer games．We can even do shopping without left our houses．8.As the College Entrance Examination is drawing nearby, some students would rather expect good luck than to make every effort to study. They think success results good luck. Whether they can be admitted to key universities depend on luck. However, others insist that diligence is a mother of success. Only by working hard can they achieve what they want. Since they fail sometimes, they don’t give up, for they believe that success lies in our own hands. As for me, I’m in favor of the latter opinion. Luck doesn’t come alone. It goes hand by hand with hard working. Sometimes, some students are lucky enough to succeed, but such luck won’t last long because it is not basing on their own abilities.9. This morning I was riding a bicycle on my way to school while suddenly a shower of heavy rain began to pour down. The wind is blowing hard and the road became very slippery. Just then I saw an elderly woman walking with difficult in the street. She was on her way back to home after shopping, carried a large basket full of vegetables. Suddenly she fell down in the mud. And she was very worn out that she couldn’t get up. Seeing this, I immediate rode over to her and tried my best to support her up. Then Ihelped picking up the vegetables, and put them into her baskets. After that, I took off my raincoat, put on her and took her home.10.Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.11. I'm writing to tell you about a shocked incident that happened in Beijing Zoo in the afternoon of Feb 23rd.I was visiting the zoo that afternoon while I heard bears roaring terribly. I hurried to the place where the bears lived at. I saw the black bear badly injured and one of them roll on the ground painfully. It was hurt too serious to move a foot. The people around was shocked, angry and blaming the wrongdoer. I learned that was a student from a famous university in Beijing who caused the trouble. He pulled sulfur and acid onto the bears or pretending to feed them.What an shame! Animals are our friends and something must be done to prevent them from being injured.Sincerely YoursLi Hua。