中考英语作文考前解析中考英语作文阅卷三个标准：1）看书写认真和结构完整2）看内容详实和要点俱全3）看语言优美和句式无误中考作文审题五个步骤：注意审题这是成功习作的前提和保障一审主题（写什么），二审人称（用什么人称写）三审体裁（多为记叙文）四审时态（现在/过去/将来时较多）五审内容要点（一定要在试卷中画出，免得写的时候忘记，导致跑题）结构：（总）——（分）——（总）三段式第一段：开门见山，不超过2句话，第二段：分2-3点说明。

第三段：简短总结初中记忆How time flies! I have studied in myschool for three years. And I willgraduate from middle school in a month.I want to share my happiness andsadness with you.I still remember, when I began tolearn English, I found it too difficult. Nomatter how hard I tried, I still couldn'tdo well in it and almost gave it up. Assoon as my English teacher found myproblem, she had a talk with me abouthow to learn English well. Since then, shehas kept helping me. Little by little, I'vebecome interested in English and I'mgood at it. I think I am so lucky tobecome one of her students. I'velearned a lot from her. I will try to helpothers when they are in trouble. I thinkit is a happy thing to help others.处理和母亲之间的关系As a teenager, I met the sameproblem as you. But now I can get alongbetter with my mother. Here are someideas for you.Your mother talks much, becauseshe cares about you. Maybe it's not agood way, but it shows your mother'slove. So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from yourmother's, you can communicate with her,and tell her what you are thinking about.If your mother doesn't take youradvice, just keep silent and give her asmile.I hope what I say here can help youa lot.好朋友My best friendEveryone has many friends. My best friend is XX.He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. He often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. He gets on well with us, everyone in our class likes him.In a word, he is my best friend. What about yours?感恩初中三年生活The last moment held on toHow time flies! We’re leavingyou—our lovely junior high school. I haveso many words from my heart to say.Thanks, dear junior school. You’re abeautiful and happy home for us all. Ihope y ou’ll be better and better. Thanks,dear teachers. You’re taught us lot ofknowledge and helped us in all ways. I’llremember you forever. Thanks, our staffmembers. You’ve taken good care of usand helped us grow up. I hope you arehappy all the time. Thanks, dearclassmates. You’ve got on well with mejust like sisters and brothers. Let’salways keep in touch with each other.Thanks, all my loved ones. All the bestto you ! Goodbye!如何缓解压力Pressure is a serious problem intoday’s world. I know you ar e under toomuch pressure. You can’t get on well withyour classmates; you may worry aboutyour exams.I’m always under pressure, too. Myparents want me to be the top student inclass. So they send me to all kinds oftraining classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk withmy mother. I told her I was not lazy. Ireally felt tired. I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last. So Ithink a conversation with your parents isnecessary to solve the problem.Less pressure, better life! Bestwishes to you!The Teacher I Like BestOf all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school.She had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc.Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.All in all, she is my best teacher.感恩幸福Happiness is important in our life. Infact, happiness is always around you ifyou put your heart into it.I will never forget one thing. Once, Ihad a bad mark at a math test. I was shyand afraid to meet my parents. But whenI got back home late, my parents knewwhat happened, they said to me: “Itdoesn't matter, my child. Rememberwe'll be always beside you when you needhelp. We believe you can be better nexttime. Never give up!” I was moved andmade up my mind to work harder andharder.I feel happy. Whenever I am introuble, I can feel my parents' love. Iwant to be a good child for my parents.做一个环保的人How to Be a Greener Person?It’s our duty to protect theenvironment around us.When we go to school, we should ridea bike or take a bus. When we go out foractiv ities, we shouldn’t walk or sit on thegrass. We can’t draw everywhere. Whenwe go shopping, we’d better use a clothbag. At home we can save water andelectricity. When we leave a room, weshould turn off the lights. At school wecan collect wast paper and recyclethings, such as bottles, cans and plasticbags. We shouldn’t listen to pop musicloudly in public.All in all, let’s do something to protectour environment.感恩母爱My mother is very important to me and I love her.She is very busy and often goes to bed very late, but she always gets up early every morning to make breakfast for me. What's more, she often helps me and encourages me to solve problems by myself when I'm in trouble. With her help, I made great progress in my study.I always want to do something for my mom. Mother's Day is coming. I'm going to make a surprise breakfast for her on that day.All in all，I love my mother forever .帮助让世界更美好Helping Each Other Makes theWorld WonderfulHello, everyone. I'm Li Zhi. It's niceto speak about help here. In our life weoften help others and also get help fromothers. When we help our classmateswith their study and other things, we candevelop our friendship. If we give a handto old people, we can understand themeaning of pleasure. As we know, patientin our life. I think we can get much whenwe help the people around us. As thesaying goes, "Giving is much better thanreceiving."Remember, helping others can fillour lives with love and sunshine.低碳生活保护环境My Low--carbon LifeIt's our duty to protect ourenvironment.The environmental pollution is worseand worse today. Many trees are cutdown, and water and air are polluted. Asa student I try to have a low-carbon lifeFirstly, I often walk to schoolinstead of taking bus and it can help meto keep healthy. Secondly, I alwaysturn off the lights and fans when leavingthe classroom. Thirdly, I always makefull use of paper and other school thingsand never waste water.In a word, if everyone can protectthe environment, I believe the world willbecome more and more beautiful.网购的优缺点Shopping OnlineWith the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn't step out of the room.It seems easy and quick. But there's always a trap（陷阱）online. If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big. If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online. Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.So you must be careful, because everything has two sides.我的改变How I ChangeMy life has changed a lot in thepast three years. I was fat and shortwhen I came to the middle school. Atthat time I was interested in computergames and I spent most of time on it. Myparents were worried about me.Now, I like sports and I often playfootball with my classmates after school.So I become taller and stronger thanbefore. I like reading, too. I usually go tothe library to read some interestingbooks. Good habits help me to studybetter and keep healthier.校园安全How to keep safe in schoolLife is very important and preciousfor everybody.There is one thing that we should payattention. Our school life could bedangerous if we are not careful enough.For example, one day,two students ranafter each other in the hallway.Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurthis leg because of the wet floor.Therefore, he had to stay in the hospitalfor several days. So I think studentsshould walk and do not run in thehallways. And the teachers had betterkeep one eye on the students after classand stop them from running.At last , I hope all the students shouldpay attention to their safety in school手机使用不同观点Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some students think that it is easy to use them to keep in touch with parents and classmates.Also, they can be used to listen to music or take photos. But others think that we don’t need to talk with parents and classmates with mobile phones, because we meet them every day. And mobile phones may influence our study.In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.保持健康How to keep healthy？I think healthy habits are veryimportant for us.All of us want to be healthy. First,we should get enough sleep during thenight. We can go to bed early and get upearly. Staying up late is bad for ourhealth. Second, we must have the rightkinds of food. We should eat more fruitand vegetables and less meat. We shoulddrink a lot of water. We should havehealthy eating habits. Third, we shoulddo more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands beforemeals and brush our teeth twice a day.If we don't feel well, we should goto see the doctor at once.名胜古迹The Great Wall of ChinaThe Great Wall is the sign of China. It isthe pride of all the Chinese.The Great Wall of china, a wonder of theworld, is called "the ten-thousand-longgreat wall "in Chinese. it's over 6,000kilometers long, 6 to 7metres high and 4to 5 that snakes along the top. it is saidthat it's the only man-made structurethat can be seen from space.Nowadays the great wall has becomea place of interest. every year peoplefrom all over the world come to visit it.many of them have got to know thefamous Chinese saying: "he who docs notreach the great wall is not a true man."微信的利与弊Last week, we had a discussion about using WeChat. Here are the results.Some students think WeChat(微信) is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform (平台)to communicate with their friends. Besides, they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat. However, some students think WeChat will affect (影响) their study if they spend too much time using it. And they may be tricked (欺骗) by strange net friends. Last but not least, it will also affect their eyesight to use WeChat for a long time .In my opinion, we shouldn’t use WeChat for too long and make sure that d on’t use it when we are studying. In addition(另外), we shouldn’t add strangers casually (随便)or meet net friends without our parents’ permission.健康饮食How to Eat in a Healthy WayHello, everybody. I'm Li Hua.Todaymy topic is how to eat in a healthy way.Firstly, we should never eat junkfood because it is not good forhealth.Secondly, try to eat morevegetables and fruit.Because they canmake us become much healthier.My eating habits are good.Forexample, I often eat healthy foods, likerice, bread, eggs, vegetables and milk forbreakfast and fruits, noodles, andvegetables for dinner.I hope everyone can eat in a healthyway.传统节日There are many traditional festivals inChina, such as Spring Festival, Mid-AutumnDay and so on. I'd like to introduce the SpringFestival to you. Spring Festival is the mostimportant traditional holiday in China. Itusually lasts for 15 days。