雅思作文5段式写法
下面这篇雅思作文是5段式写法,而且属于一边倒,并非两边都讨论,思路很清晰,语言也很简练并且很值得模仿!大家完全可以按照这个模板进行练习!
[雅思大作文题目]
People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university?
[5段式例文(一边倒)]
People attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.(41words)
Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college. They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.(62 words)
Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For most students, going to college is the first time they have been away form home by themselves. In addition, this is the first time they have had to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.(68 words)
Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in subjects they find interesting. For many, this will be their last chance for a long time to learn about something that does not relate to their career.(43 words)
I would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. Instead, they should go to college to have new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they live in. This may make them better prepared for their future.(41 words)
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关于议论文到底写几段,不同的老师有不同的说法。
我一直都认为衡量文章结构只有两个标准:
1 能不能把问题讲清楚;
2 考场上有没有实战意义,有没有可操作性。
所以我认为,四段式的文章更好,因为
1 四段式结构更清晰;
2 四段折中式比五段折中式好写,更比五段一边倒好写。
因为什么呢?因为很明显,世界上任何一个命题,正反两方面都写,比只说正方或者只说反方都更容易写250个单词。
写一边倒最大的问题就是:40分钟里面凑出250单词以上很难。
比如,在剑桥最新的剑桥5当中,剑桥给出了4套Academic类(学术类)作文题范文,其中有两篇是作为“an example of a very good answer" 来给出的(另外两篇是低分作文,作为反面教材)。
一个明确的信息是:这两篇考官写的高分范文都是用的折中式,而且都是写的四段式。
我们再看剑桥5里面两道General Traing类议论文的范文,其中一片范文写了6段,但是考官的评语明确说了这篇文章“The paragraphing is not always logical" ( 分段缺乏逻辑性);G类的第二篇范文是五段式,但是如果仔细分析一下,其实最后一段(第五段)只是说了两句空话,喊了两句口号,在一般的议论性文章里面完全是没有必要写的。
所以,剑桥5里面的考官高分范文,充分说明了雅思考试议论文写4段式的合理性。
结论:雅思议论文,四段式在考场上容易操作,而且剑桥考官自己写的范文,大多数都是四段折中式。
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