方法二:活用多种句型
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A B
C
She is very young.
She can’t carry the heavy box.
She is too young to carry the heavy box.
She is so young that she can’t carry the …
美(beautify)
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.
连(connect) 美(beautify)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. • According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
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• Though\Although I am tired, I keep _____________ on working till midnight. • He didn’t go to movies, he went to instead the concert ______. like • We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. First • _____, he stood up. Then he got out. Finally\At last _____, he went back. ____________, Next he smiled.
初中英语写作指导课
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温馨提示：
请你根据自己的不同程度来巩固本课件的内容。
全体同学一定要学习前面3张幻灯片及标题
中上水平同学最好连同例子一起学习 英语基础和水平较好的同学 请试试从36张幻灯开始 的“实操体会”
basic structure (基本结构的安排)
Dear Mr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning) First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to me soon. (the ending) Mary
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the body （正文）
basic rules (写作考试规则)
search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连) beautiful(美：谚语/例子)
牛刀小试
审(search)
健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。
列(list)
• A lot of people travel. • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends or parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法一:善用词汇
甚至善用高级词汇
Which is better?
他们在海滩上听音乐。
A B They listened to the music on the beach. They enjoyed the music on the beach.
Which is better?
连(connect)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. • According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
我希望你能帮助我。
A B
I wish you can help me. I’m looking forward to your help.
Which is better?
他们很早就到了。
A They arrived early.
B
They arrived as early as they could.
D
She is not old enough to carry the…
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法三:妙用关联词
关联词(connection words)
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor 2.表示选择: or, either…or 3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents work
列(list)
根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home visit friends or parents work
加(add)
•
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 How do people spend their vacation? We • 可以采取总分总结构，开头或结 made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） 尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。