IELTS作文讲解：范文赏析学生面授老师时间本次课时IELTS写作第八课时教学思路1.理论实际应用2.范文赏析与学习教学目标1. 明确分析题目的类型2．快速组织写作思路3. 提高写作质量讲解重点范文思路讲解语言分析备考资料剑桥真题、《雅思写作套路剖析与范例大全》教学详细内容：一、雅思小作文真题范文赏析You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.* The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.* Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.审题:1. 本题出现两个图，饼图与曲线图，首先确定写作结构，饼图和曲线图分别叙述，若两者之间有联系，则需要指出。

这样本篇作文的大体结构就可以设置三部分，第一段对总体进行概述，主体段对两个表格分别描述，末段进行总结（可选）2. 写作要点分析：●饼图信息点：确定时间2000年，内容可口可乐罐装销售总额，地点为五个地区，分别占的百分比，最大与最小百分比分别对应的地区。

●曲线图：确定时间96年-01年，内容为可口可乐的股价，以美元为单位计算，曲线信息可分为两个时间段，98年中期之前与之后的特点对比，总体趋势波动范文：The pie chart shows the worldwide distribution of sales of Coca-Cola in the year 2000 and the graph shows the change in share prices between 1996 and 2001.首段介绍两个图表的主要信息，巧妙地进行关键词的改写 the worldwide distributionIn the year 2000, Coca-Cola sold a total of 17.1 billion cases of their fizzy drinkproduct worldwide. The largest consumer was North America, where 30.4 per cent of the total volume was purchased. The second largest consumer was Latin America. Europe and Asia purchased 20.5 and 16.4 per cent of the total volume respectively, while Africa and the Middle East remained fairly small consumers at 7 per cent of the total volume of sales.○1以整体总量开头，首句描述图表的整体信息，继而采用从大到小的顺序进行描述○2 largest， the second largest， faily small条理展开清晰○3中间不具代表性的信息点进行归纳一笔带过，如亚洲欧洲Since 1996, share prices for Coca-Cola have fluctuated. In that year, shares were valued at approximately $35. Between 1996 and 1997, however, prices rose significantly to $70 per share. They dipped a little in mid-1997 and then peaked at $80 per share in mid-98. From then until 2000 their value fell consistently but there was a slight rise inmid-2000.○1首句对曲线图的总体形势进行概述○2采用时间先后顺序进行展开，主线非常明确○3对各个阶段的形势描述举行多样，词汇运用非常丰富和准确二、雅思大作文范文赏析例1：Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time on studying, but it is essential to get involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?审题：1.首先根据问题类型确定写作类型，本题类型应为观点类2.仔细分析题目，抓住问题的主要方面。

题目中前半句只是叙述一种事实或者现象，but起到转折的作用，转折之后的内容才是论述的重点，所以本篇文章的中心应该围绕other activities进行论述和展开写作思路：1.确定文章的观点，同意或不同意。

从题目分析中可以看出文章的中心是围绕otheractivities，所以要对此提出自己的看法2.主体段，支持或反对的分论点和论据的设立3.总结分论点并重申自己的观点On college campuses, extracurric ular involvement is a key tool to develop the “whole student.” It is appropriate to say that full-time university students should not only spend a lot of time on studying but also interact with their peers in social activities, thus improving their social skills. While time spent on studying can enhance academic achievement, time spent on getting involved in out-of-classroom activities will help students mature socially on the individual student level and the professional.①开头首句直截了当地提出观点，一改传统写法，明确指出中心②while替换题目中的but,意思一样，表示转折，同样强调后半句即作者的观点The development of the well-rounded individual is a principle goal of extracurricular activities during college years. A variety of personal experiences that these activities provide c ould positively impact students’ emotional development. When working together with other individuals, students learn to communicate and gain more self-confidence, autonomy and appreciation for others’ similarities and differences. Further, by identifying a peer group, that group may influence one’s affective and cognitive development as well as one’s personal behavior. In addition, taking part in activities outside the classroom enables one, among other things, to learn to negotiate, manage conflict and cooperate with fellow students. And last but not least, almost any type of extracurricular activities may help students to understand the importance of critical thinking skills.①主体段1采用总分的结构方式，首句为本段Topic Sentence, 提出文章中心的第一方面②在论证过程中，采取说理的方法，when, further, in addition, last but not least,条理清晰，不仅在连贯方面做到巧妙衔接，更重要的是内容上与层层递进Students can also upgrade their social skills ①specific to their career paths and imperative for future job successes in different fields. Extracurricular involvement allows students to ②associate academic knowledge with practical experience, thereby ③leading to a better awareness of their abilities, talents and career goals. Nowadays, good social skills are nearly as important as good academic qualifications since future employers seek exactly④these remarkable skill standards.This is understandable, ⑤considering that participation in extracurricular activities is positively linked to attainment of one’s first job and managerial potential. The campus is a place where students can work together, discuss pertinent ideas and issues, and accomplish common objectives. It is ⑥nothing less than an environment for students to feel socially connected with others and the university as their community.①并列后置定语②associate sth with sth.③④积累短语⑤considering that考虑到，就···而论⑥nothing less thanTo sum up, for young people, attending higher education is meant to advance academically and to mature socially. University students ought to be encouraged to get involved in activities ranging from students’ governm ent to athletics to professional organizations to multicultural events and to volunteer service-related projects. Such activities exist to more fully complement the university’s academic curriculum and augment the students’ social experience.①末段对文章进行总结，重申文章的观点②本段段落首尾也做到了相互呼应，更加体现出结构严谨的特点例2：Nowadays consumers are faced with the advertisements from competitive companies. To what extent do you agree that consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures should be taken to protect them?审题：这个题目将观点类和report类结合了起来，此时要考虑到写作类型上的定位问题，是写成观点类还是问题分析类，仔细分析题目，可以看出这个文章更适合写观点类，这样solutions 可以很自然地在提出观点的基础上加入文章内容中去，但是如果写成了问题分析类，在solution和观点之间的逻辑连贯就不容易操作写作思路：①首段背景阐述，表明观点，引入一二问题②分别论述观点理由和soulutions/measures③对全文进行总结范文：Induced by the huge profit in product sales, hoping to establish the brand names, and expecting to stand out from fierce competitions, different companies are issuing various advertisements to bombard the consumers from every possible corner of the world. This inevitably exerts tremendous influence on consumers. Although the positive impacts brought by advertisements are welcoming, the negative ones should never be ignored and corresponding measures to protect consumers should be conducted.①首段传统写法，根据现象进行背景阐述和分析，提出自己的观点②在第一段就将两个问题结合起来提出，而不是在文中展示Admittedly, through advertisements, consumers are enabled to be informed of the latestproducts, the new concepts of consumption and the ability to choose out the right ones to buy. However,under careful analysis of consumers’ psychology, and out of the profit-oriented purpose, when most companies are there in the competition to win over the customers, misleading or cheating advertisements are mushrooming. This will surely have negative influence on the consumers. For example, some may be attracted to buy the products they do not really need, some may be cheated to purchase those inferior goods, and some may be induced to form an unhealthy or even harmful ideas of consumption.①admittedly让步的写法，肯定advertisements的积极作用②however转折引出本段中心，即文章中心并进行重点论述③some may be 排比句的运用，在论证过程中使论证更加充分有力Therefore, to protect consumers from being negatively affected by advertisements, some regulations must be made. Firstly, the contents of the advertisements should be required to be true to the quality of the products, without exaggerating or misleading descriptions, so that the consumers can make their own decisions based on the appropriate information.Also, t he presentation forms of advertisements should be regulated to be acceptable to the public, such as limiting those violent and pornographic ones, so that consumers would not be disturbed by advertisements in their daily life.In addition, to those that dare to violate the regulations, severe punishment should be carried out, in which way those ill-willed advertisers can be reduced and the potential vicious ones can be deterred, and thus a healthy advertising environment can be created for consumers.①承接上一段的内容，本段提出解决措施②解决措施结构安排清晰③解决措施切实有效，从问题的本身找问题，在推广宣传阶段的审核力度，在执行方面的严厉程度，达到真正解决问题To sum up, only when we are aware of the negative impacts of advertisements, and thereafter carry out effective countermeasures to protect the consumers, can the advertisements be truly beneficial to consumers and companies, creating a double-winsituation.①对文章的观点和解决措施进行总结，②倒装结构，起到强调的作用，强调问题的结局措施。