启示：用复合句、倒装句等，润色文章
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5、事业及成就
常用表达式： 1. one of the best/most important…最好的/重要的…之一 2. set a …example to为……树立榜样 3. be honoured as…被授予…… 4. win the …prize 获得……荣誉 5. make great contribution to 为……作出巨大贡献
他对科学极有兴趣,也有音乐天赋。
Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.
居里夫人常说：“我们必须努力工作，而且最重要的是， 我们必须对自己有信心。”
Madame Curie often said: "We we must believe in ourselves."
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6、评价
常用表达式：
As a great/outstanding…, she is highly thought of . Being the …, she is regarded as …. set a good example to… be remembered for
作为一位伟大的女科学家，居里夫人的决心、勇气、乐意与人分 享知识的精神以及她对女权所表示出来的兴趣都将永远为人们所 怀念。她给我们树立了一个良好的榜样,我们都很敬重她。
was born in Guangzhou in 1941.
林肯，一个贫苦家庭的儿子，于1809年2月12日出生于肯德基州。
Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809. 启示：尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通4 顺
翻译：因为当时在波兰妇女不能上大学,中学毕业后, 她 决定去巴黎大学深造，并顺利地取得了物理博士学位。
Because at that time women were not admitted to universities in Poland, she decided to go on further education at Paris University after graduating from middle school, where she received a doctor‘s degree in physics .
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Sentence patterns
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1. 概况：age, sex, birth, family background
…was/ were born in/into (a poor family) on… As a child of … years old, he… He spent his childhood in … live a happy/hard life
翻译：她一生致力于科学研究，在1903年和1911年分别获诺贝尔物 理奖和化学奖，成为世界上第一位两次获得诺贝尔奖的科学家。
She devoted all her life to scientific research and received Nobel prizes for physics and chemistry, which made her become the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel prizes.
2、外貌 / 性格 我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只 大眼睛，留着长发. My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.
启示：巧用with做定语
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3、教育经历
常用表达式：
He was admitted to New York university 考取……大学 graduate from …department of … university从某大学某系毕业 receive/get a doctor’s degree 获取博士学位 major in 主修 go on further education 深造
钟南山１９４１年生于广州，是中国最伟大的医生之一。
① Zhong Nanshan, born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of
the greatest doctors in China.
② Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China,
As a great woman scientist, Madame Curie will be remembered for her determination, courage, her willingness to share her knowledge and her interest in women’s rights. Madame Curie set us a good example, so all the people speak highly of her and all respect her.
启示：可用连词，从句等, 使文章连贯通顺
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4、理想与信念
常用表达式：
serve as…做某种工作 devote oneself /one’s effort to/ be devoted to 一生致力于 concentrate /focus on专注于 make up one’s mind to do…/be determined to do决心做 have a gift for / be gifted in 有……的天赋
How to describe a person
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What aspects should be included?
1. 概况：age, sex, birth, family background 2. 外貌／性格：appearance, character/ personality 3. 教育：education 4. 理想：ambitions 5. 事业及成就：career and achievements 6. 评价： evaluation (what other people think of her)