回顾历年四级作文名师改卷感悟及针对建议2009年6月CET4作文预测一、就业：Directions: for this part you are allowed 30 minutes to writea composition on the topic jobs for graduates. you should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1.大学生难找工作2.原因很多3.解决的办法二、四川地震（爱心）:【相关话题】为四川地震灾区的灾民写一封募捐信;为四川地震灾区的灾民写一封慰问信【相关词汇】devastating adj.破坏性的；毁灭性的a devastating earthquake破坏性地震大地震：the massive earthquake地震灾区：quake-hit area/ quake-stricken area重灾区：the worst-hit area地震灾民：quake victim震中：epicenter余震：aftershock医务工作者：medical worker救援者：rescuer伤者：the injured失踪者:the missing废墟：debris/ruin捐款：to donate money献血：blood donation捐物：to donate appliances感人的：moving, touching精神创伤：mental trauma身体创伤：physical trauma只要有一线希望，我们就要尽百倍努力：If only there is the slighted hope, we will spare no effort.只要有一个幸存者，我们就绝不会放弃：If only there is one survivor in the debris, we will never give up rescuing.三、大学是否应该允许学生在校外租房住宿？【相关话题】你是否支持在校大学生在上学期间结婚？【相关词汇】（非婚）同居：cohabitate离婚：divorce一时冲动：whim生活开支：livelihood expenditure/living expenses/living expenditure 生活费：allowance类似问题：你是否支持在校大学生在上学期间炒股？相关词汇：股市：stock market本金：principal盈利：profit学费：tuition fee理财（投资）：investment靠……发财：make a fortune out of /by风险：risk抗风险能力：risk tolerance破产：bankruptcy五、交通问题无车日：a car-free day单双号：even and odd-numbered license plates尾气：fog, exhaust, exhaust fumes, automobile exhaust堵车：traffic jam六、写一封申请去中西部支教的申请信七、关于节约的话题（参见2004年1月六级考题）节约：thrift储蓄：savings1. 大家拿到作文题目之后，先要仔细阅读题目明确作文的类型。
这一点是非常关键的因为四级相对很强调作文的结构。
如果没有一个很清楚的结构，一定会失去一定的分数。
四级作文一般有下面三种结构：说明文，议论文和应用文写作。
说明文主要可以分为阐述主题类型的，利弊类型的，原因结果类型的，解决问题类型的以及谚语说明类型。
议论文主要是就观点进行反驳类型的。
应用文写作主要包括演讲词，求职求学信，邀请信，感谢信和投诉信等。
所以大家必须在平时复习的过程明确各种类型的写作结构，这样在考试时候就可以在结构上不会出现任何问题，也不会因为写跑题而失分。
来源：2. 开始写作文时一定要段落清楚，有明显的开头，主体和结论部分。
也就是大家要学会分段落，不要象记流水帐一样，一段到底，这样就会给老师留下很坏的印象。
同时在文章写作过程中，一定要学会使用一些句子之间以及引起和结束文章时候的连接词，这样的话可以使文章很自然，流畅。
比如在写文章主体的时候可以用首先，其次，再次这样的连接词，或者一方面，另一方面，等这样的词。
这些都是很容易引起老师的注意，可以得分的地方。
3. 写文章时候尽量多用一些四级词汇，这样也可以提高老师的印象。
但不是说你用的词很多，而写出的句子结构，语法错误太多。
这样也会很糟糕的。
因此大家一定要注意，如果自己词汇不怎么多的时候，你不要用自己不明确和不会拼写的词，还有一定要确保句子的正确性，尽量避免语法结构的错误。
即使你使用的简单句，但是写的很清楚，没任何错误，也可以得到不错的分数。
4. 注意文章的长度安排，短的作文一定是不可以的，也就是字数要达到要求。
但是长的作文如果几乎每句话都有错误也不能得到好的分数。
所以大家一定要注意，写的时候要长度适中，确保写出的句子错误很少，即使观点只是很一般，没什么新的地方。
也能得到相对好的分数。
一起呵英语站5. 卷面一定要整洁，字一定要写的漂亮，这可以在很大程度上影响你们分数的升降。
印象分数几乎全部是这个决定的，所以大家也要主要平时handwriti ng的练习。
四六级作文评分标准及错误总结评分标准2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分……基本切题。
表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。
有较多的严重语言错误。
8分……基本切题。
有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
11分……切题。
表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
14分……切题。
表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。
基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。
(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。
)常见写作错误一、主语错误1. 主语缺失1)In our country feels very free.People feel free in our country.2)In my hometown aren’t very busy.People in my hometown are very busy.2. 非名词主语1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.3. 主谓错位1)Reading books can acquire knowledge.People can acquire knowledge from books.2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV.Now people can’t do without TV.二、谓语错误1. 多重谓语1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show tha t many people are cheated.In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks.2)Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad.Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it i mpossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people f rom studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.2. 非动词谓语1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it.Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.2)It is said that the place worths touring.It is said that the place is worth touring.3. 主谓不一致1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English.2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.I use a disk because it holds plenty of data..4. 误用词组1)They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.2)I am afraid of that it’s going to rain.I am afraid that it’s going to rain.三、冠词错误1)In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.In my opinion, the future of the bicycle is very promising.2) They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones.They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never t ouch bad ones.四、代词错误1. 偷梁换柱1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a pa per, he should not plagiarize.2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave yo u alone.If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us alo ng. / If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave yo u alone.2. 指代不明1)He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meetin g. / He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.2)Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden t hey have to bear.Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden stu dents have to bear.五、形容词、副词错误1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look diffe rently.What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differe nt.2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.六、分词误用1) Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the ener gy problem.Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energ y problem.2) Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera.Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture wh en viewed through my camera.七、修饰语误置1) Spoken English is an important part for learning English people.Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poiso nous gases to the countryside.To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories whi ch give off poisonous gases to the countryside.八、垂悬修饰语1) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living sta ndard has been greatly improved.Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatl y improved their living standard.2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.九、平行错误1) While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be in creased.While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of tr affic.2) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficu lty of the course and how long it lasted.Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficult y and length of the course. / Before I selected the new course, my teacher w arned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.十、搭配错误1) In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not aff ord it.2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.十一、破句1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job inter view.Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.2) First you should show good manners. Because the first impression yo u leave on others is important.First you should show good manners, because the first impression you le ave on others is important.There is a saying goes ... [应为There is a saying which goes ...]There are many people think that... [应为There are many people who think that...或者直接说Many people think that...]It's the major thing affects people's friendship. [少了一个that]When we have difficulty, someone helps you right away is the real friend. [少了一个who]2. NO MATTER / WHETHER错误，这是英语专业学生最容易犯的另一类错误：Friendship is important for no matter rich people or poor people. [宜改为Friendship is possible, whether for rich people or for poor people. "no matter"后面必须接一个小句（主语、谓语完整）]3. C语类重复。