亮点四：运用反义疑问句，加强语气。
亮点五：运用定语从句，修饰 medicine。
亮点六：巧妙使用“do“这个词，加强语言表达力度。
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中考英语骨干教师、剑桥大学 ESOL 教学资格认证英语教学证书（TKT）；英语专业八 级； 7 年英语执教经验； 中考毕业班平均成绩高于 140 分。现为中考英语教研组教研 员，中考教材编委，主编上海新东方初三年级系列教材。
From the aspect of studying, I will get myself ready both physically and mentally. Firstly, I’ m determined to read more classic English novels during the summer vacation, which will benefit me a lot. Besides, I will enter for a fitness club to build up my body.
Before I go to the seaside, I think it's important to take something useful with me such as sunglasses, bathing suit, suntan oil and my homework and so on. Well, the last I want to carry is some medicine, which can keep me safe. After that I should plan where I stay, play and how to get there.
英语试卷 物理试卷 化学试卷 I’m ready! By 中考英语教研组 张茜 As the saying goes, Opportunities are only for the prepared mind. I’m ready to become a singer. Why? Firstly ,There are a great number of people who around me like my voice, including parents and friends , even some strangers. Secondly ,Singing has always been my hobby since i was young. I love to sing ,and it can make me relax as well as happy . Finally ,I think music is the most wonderful thing in the world .even though to be an excellent singer is not easy ,I believe my hard work will make my dream come true some day. I’m ready! 亮点一：谚语引入“机会总是留给有准备的人”。 亮点二：定语从句让文章更丰富。 亮点三：用现在完成时态陈述理由。 亮点四：the most wonderful thing，用最高级表达喜爱。 亮点五：an excellent singer 比 a good singer 更能打动阅卷老师。 张茜 >>点击查看该教师全部课程 中考英语骨干教师、英语专业八级；中国和韩国高校做英语系助教；具备多语种能 力；曾在韩国、美国、德国都有过学习和工作经历； 数年来专注研究国内考试，对于国内中考英语的教学有独特的认知； 现为中考英语教 研组教研员，中考教材编委，主编上海新东方初三年级系列教材。 2016 年上海中考英语作文范文
From the aspect of daily life, I will be more independent, such as helping my parents with the housework and so on.
Good wishes can only be achieved with the determination and courage. I will try every possible way to get ready for the new leaf of our future life. 亮点一：活用副词修饰形容词，描写更细致。 亮点二：文章结构清晰，条理清楚。 亮点三：both physically and mentally 高分短语。 亮点四：使用从句让文章句式多样化。 亮点五：such as 加例子使文章细节丰富。 亮点六：结尾升华。 刘小星 >>点击查看该教师全部课程 中考英语骨干教师、剑桥大学 ESOL 教学资格认证英语教学能力证书（TKT）高考英语 140；英语专业八级； 教学经历：3 年山东大学教学助理；1 年山东省常青藤国际高中教师；中考毕业班平均 成绩高于 140 分。 现为中考英语教研组教研员，中考教材编委，主编上海新东方初三年级系列教材。 2016 年上海中考英语作文范文 范文（一） 范文（二） 范文（三） 范文（四） 范文（五） 2016 年上海中考英语考试已经结束，今年上海中考英语作文题目为"I'm ready"。上海 新东方优能中学中考英语教研组已于第一时间做出作文解析，并提供范文。更多 2016 年上 海中考试题解析，尽在上海新东方优能中学！ 语文试卷 数学试卷
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In conclusion, I do believe I can do it perfectly and enjoy myself.
亮点一：非谓语动词 including 的巧妙使用。
亮点二：同谓语的恰当使用，说明目的地是一个海滨度假圣地。
亮点三：not only … but also … 表达度假不仅可以欣赏美景还可以呼吸新鲜空气。
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2016 年上海中考英语考试已经结束，今年上海中考英语作文题目为"I'm ready"。上海 新东方优能中学中考英语教研组已于第一时间做出作文解析，并提供范文。更多 2016 年上 海中考试题解析，尽在上海新东方优能中学！
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I’m ready!
By 中考英语教研组 刘小星
After one year’ s hard work for the Entrance Examination, I believe that Ir high school, a totally new period of life.
2016 年上海中考英语考试已经结束，今年上海中考英语作文题目为"I'm ready"。上海 新东方优能中学中考英语教研组已于第一时间做出作文解析，并提供范文。更多 2016 年上 海中考试题解析，尽在上海新东方优能中学！
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By 中考英语教研组 郭芳 Summer holiday is coming, all my classmates are preparing to have a wonderful holiday, including me. I am ready to go to Bei Daihe, the seaside holiday resort, for swimming and having a good time on the seaside. I can not only appreciate the beautiful scenery but also breathe the fresh air. It looks good, isn't it?