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读后续写与概要写作微技能六 心理描写
came across a knotted handkerchief with an old dark brown coin inside.“Mum, can I have this? Can I play with tቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱis coin?”he asked.I took one look and was immediately transported to another time.
语言输入——素材积累,为续写奠基
Ⅰ.词汇积累 1.horror n.恐惧 2.frown n. 皱眉 3.Open-mouthed adj. 目瞪口呆的,惊愕得 张大嘴的 4.expectation n. 期望 5.annoyed adj. 恼怒的,气恼的 6.unintentionally adv. 非故意地 7.tiredness n. 疲倦
Yet the fact was quite the opposite.Arriving by taxi at our destination in Burkina, we began to unload.I was reaching for my larger piece of luggage when, out of the darkness, a motorbike with two men approached slowly.Without warning, one of the men grabbed my daypack as the motorbike swept close by.Within seconds, the pair were out of sight, swallowed up by the night.
Ⅱ.佳句背诵
1.Color rushed/flooded/rose to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched. 意识到有人在看她,她顿时涨红了脸。
2.Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present. 我给她礼物时,她的脸上焕发出了光彩。
他双手抱头,十分生气。 3.He straightened up and __lo_o_k_e_d__a_t _m_e___, ___o_p_e_n_-_m_o_u_t_h_e_d__.
他直起身,目瞪口呆地看着我。 4.The beauties of the West Lake in spring were __b_e_y_o_n_d_h_i_s_e_x_p_e_c_t_at_i_o_n___.
语言输出——层级训练,让续写添彩
Ⅰ.基础练习——补全句子 1.His eyes __g_r_e_w__w_i_d_e_w__it_h_h_o_r_ro_r___at what she had done.
看到她所做的事,他惊恐地睁大了眼睛。 2.He put/held his head in his hands, ____g_r_ea_t_ly__a_n_n_o_y_e_d___.
微技能六 心理描写
心理描写就是对人物内心的思想活动进行描写。描写人物的思想活动,能反映人 物的性格,展示人物的内心世界。所以,心理描写也是刻画人物思想性格的重要手段 之一。当然,心理描写还可以细腻、生动、真实地展示人物的心路历程,从而更好地 揭示出人物的性格特点。通过对人物心理的描写,能够直接深入人物心灵,揭示人物 的内心世界,表现人物丰富而复杂的思想感情。也可以让文章更生动,有新意,并且 能写出自己的看法和感受,让文章更充实。
8.mutual understanding 互相谅解,相互理解 9.muster up courage 鼓起勇气 10.capture the attention 吸引注意 11.be completely in a mess 完全一团糟 12.be under no illusion about sth 对某事不存幻想 13.in the belief that... 相信…… 14.in the expectation that... 期待…… 15.feel out of place 感觉很不适应
16.show no signs of tiredness 毫无倦意 17.an admiring gaze 赞赏的目光 18.an envious glance 嫉妒的目光 19.offend sb unintentionally 无意中得罪某人 20.keep drifting away 走神
In 1991, there was a time when my friend and I worked in a backward African country, Niger, hit by sandstorms and burning heat.There were many things I found difficult about this place—the climate and beggars were my biggest headaches.So after finishing five months of nursing work there, we moved on to work at a health clinic in neighbouring country, Burkina Faso.“It’s much greener in Burkina.Even the Coke tastes better,” the locals assured us.
西湖的春景要比他所预想的更加美丽。
Ⅱ.综合演练——完成读后续写,注意心理描写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。续写的词数应为150左右。 I was doing a big clean-up recently and my kids were helping when my son, Freddo,