2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(四)文学故事与诗歌一、与专题相关的话题项目历史与社会 (History and society),故事与诗歌 (Stories and poems)二、与专题相关的知识准备1、相关单元 7B Unit 7 Poems8A Unit 2 Numbers 8A Unit 6 Ancient stories8B Unit 4 Cartoons and comic strips9A Unit 1 Wise men in history 9A Unit 2 Great minds9A Unit 7 The Adventures of Tom Sawyer 9A Unit 8 Surprising endings2、相关词汇*高频词(n.) poem, feeling, order, advice, group, well, shower, superman, seller, smile, crowd, number, gram, chess, prize, grain, chessboard, amount, rest, gold, traffic, accident, war, captain, soldier, midnight, side, army, trick, prince, queen, scene, cartoon, warning, role-play, symbol, program, basic, stage, actor, team, star, island, storm, jacket, wave, Olympics, agreement, pot, truth, bowl, metal, prison, boxing, racing, mistake, mind, sense, humour, invitation, university, pleasure, lecture, tonight, seat, universe, action, adventure, novel, frog, congratulations, steamboat, steam, writer, fence, task, yard, board, progress, pity, silence, while, deal, coat, gift, graduation, cent, present, knee, sign, chain, bill, step, set, comb, America,note,(v.) agree, disagree, rush, check, challenge, promise, double, realize, copy, understand, pull, celebrate, enter, succeed, steal, punish, record, match, play, score, doubt, seem, solve, fill, hit, consider, avoid, trust, obey, reduce, survey, pretend, count, afford, search, draw,(adj.) complete, wise, ancient, huge, main, stupid, empty, secret, pleasant, golden, real, certain, brave, correct, pale, humorous, careful, lazy,(adv.)aloud, instead, correctly, quietly, separately, exactly,(prep.) except*高频短语Not at all, be worried about, newspaper stand, rush out, a crowd of, a long time ago, challenge ...to..., and so on, copy down, act out, make jokes about, succeed in doing, except for, be full of, in the end, come on, comic strip, pop out, decide on, video camera, play against, weatherforecast, life jacket, thank goodness, make it, be happy with, fill....with..., run over, send ...to prison, make sure, sense of humour, let...down, by heart, take a seat, without difficulty, join in, have no idea, be in trouble, play a joke on sb, turning point, a series of, have a rest, think of, come along, what a pity, go on doing, in silence, after a while, turn sth. Over, trick sb. into doing sth, look for, at last, fix...on, hold out, under the name of,*拓展词汇ordinary, rhyme, site, narrow, height, instructions, pyramid, Greek, capture, Trojan, bubble, thought, rough, sketch, effect, detailed, appear, mystery, crown, displace, confirmation, wresting, astronomer, genius, theory, audience, applause, achievement, philosopher, sympathy, lead, plot, celebrated, goods, accuse, album, be accused of... , from the on, give up, one by one,*经典句型1. A long time ago, there was.....2. Thank you for...........3. The is a story about..........4. ...and .... Are two of the most popular cartoon characters in the world.5. It was a great success.6. be so adj. that +从句7. I’m certain that ...........8. Everyone was amazed at how ......solve the problem.9. A journey of a thousand li begins with a single step.10. It’s a pleasure to .......11. such....that12. I’ve got an idea./ I have no idea.13. If you don’t learn to think when you are young, you may never learn.14. What a pity!三、经典例题郭敬明出生于1983年6月6日,四川人,中国知名小说家,《最小说》(ZUI novel)主编。
自他的第一部作品《爱与痛的边缘》(on the edge of love and hatred) 在2002问世以来,他共撰写著名作品30余部。
其中,系列作品《小时代》(Tiny times)深受年轻读者喜爱。
这个系列作品以全新的叙事风格,通过对几位当代青少年和大学生生活的描写,表达了作者对整个社会观察和思考,是一部优秀的作品。
小时候大部分时间在家埋头苦读,求学阶段曾经从上海大学辍学,但对文学的执着和自身的努力和自信,使他一步一步迈进了成功的殿堂。
你对郭敬明的看法。
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4、分项分档评分表5. 参考例文:Guo Jingming was born on 6 June, 1983 in Sichuan Province. He is well known as a Chinese novelist and the chief editor of “Zui Novel”.As a writer, Guo created his first work called “The Edge of Love And Pain” in 2002. Since then, he has written over 30 works, among which a series named “Tiny times” is very popular with young readers. “Tiny times” mainly describe about a group of youth and their university lives. The works reveal the writer’s opinions abo ut our society. So they turned out to be a success.Most teenagers like him because he sticks to his dream of literature and becomes successful through hard work. Although dropping out of school from Shanghai University, he still kept on reading and learning. It is his confidence and love for literature that lead to his great honor. In my opinion,he is successful and we should learn from him.四、练习(作文一)(Journey 2: The Mysterious Island)。